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Reviews for Spontaneous Combustion

By : astartelydianna
  • From ANON - Erica on June 16, 2014
    I'm so loving this! I usually don't read stories that aren't complete. This story really caught my attention. I love the writing, and the dynamics of the characters. Thank u for keeping Remus and Fred :-) looking forward to reading the next chapter! Hurry! Lol.
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  • From ANON - tp182 on December 15, 2013
    This was really good. I love the plot, the sex, the writing and the characters. Will you be updating this?
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  • From ANON - Heather on March 23, 2013
    I just found your story, and I'm so glad I did! I enjoy your style of writing. I find the characters believable, which can hard to do with a fic like this. So good job! :) Also, I love that you brought Remus and Fred back. I can't wait to read more!!
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  • From ANON - whskykitty74 on February 13, 2013
    I really like this story. Love the tension between Hermione and Draco!!
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  • From Lauricula on February 13, 2013
    I don't know if you meant to do this on purpose, but everyone seemed a bit out of character. Not by much, but by a noticeable amount. Also, it's good to express some thoughts of the character everyone once in a while, but don't do it so often. As a reader, we can infer and deduce a character's feelings, so there's no need to spell them out completely every time. Don't be afraid to be more descriptive in sex scenes too; it makes it more enjoyable to read. However, I did enjoy the plot; it's not something I've come across before. I also like the idea of students become apprentices, and such. Lastly, I did keep in mind that you had other focuses and things to worry about when writing this.
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  • From ANON - shaymars on February 09, 2013
    I just found this story and started reading it and thought at first that it was not going anywhere and I was about stop reading it. Then I wanted to give it a chance and I am glad I did. I hope to read more soon.
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  • From ANON - anaidra on February 06, 2013
    Good job there. Please continue, cant wait to read what more Hermione will learn ;).
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on February 05, 2013
    Hi there! Thank you for the response about his actions. And, don't worry. I will most definitely keep reading! Simply delicious, HG4eva
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  • From ANON - JAG on February 05, 2013
    I'm loving domineering Draco!
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  • From ANON - Bella on February 05, 2013
    Your story is great honestly. I remember ou saying that you did not think you have enough reviews, to tell you the truth I don't know why either because this is a really good story. And the fact that you update really fast is amazing I love keep doing whatever your doing. I happen to like your Dravo he is full of mystery we don't really know much about him and the reason he does what he does. Love it ;)
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  • From Lauricula on February 04, 2013
    Just noticed some run ons here and there. One in particular starts at: "Remus had been hesitant...well for Remus while he worked." I love the story line though! And kudos to you for writing this while watching kids; not an easy task!
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  • From ANON - Mark's Pet on February 03, 2013
    I just finished chapter 9 and I must say...you did not dissapoint!!!!

    I was waiting for the next chapter and 'poof' it was there. I loved the blindfold to help Hermoine focus on the sensations.

    I can't wait for your next chapter and the 'arrangement' *wicked grin*.

    More, Please!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - anaidra on February 03, 2013
    "we're nowhere near finished yet"... well, look forward to reading more. ;)
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  • From ANON - Mark's Pet on February 03, 2013
    I just discovered this story. I must say, I am VERY intriqued!?!?!?!

    I saw your summary and you got my attention with D/s and M/s. These ALWAYS get my attention. I sense that this story will have all the making of a great BDSM story with LOTS of smut *imagination going wild*.

    I can't wait to see what 'bad boy' Draco has planned for 'in the closet submissive' Hermoine!!!!!

    I await your next chapter with bated breath (actually heavy breathing)!?!?!?!?!
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on February 03, 2013
    Hi there. I am reading another story of yours and noticed your name on this one. Good for you for keeping more than one going! I just can't do that. lol I am intrigued by this story, but I can't say I like your Draco at all. He's just mean on principle and I don't get it. Plus, I'm not into guys who hurt women for fun. I think what intrigues me is that Hermione can look at him and not be repulsed. I'm waiting to see more so I can figure out why being scared of a person can in any way be a turn on. I get the "less safe"thing, but I don't get the "cruel, hateful, asshole who physically hurts people" thing. I am hoping for some clarity on that though and I really enjoy your writing, so I will keep reading. :-) Thanks! HG4eva
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