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Reviews for Breaking Habits

By : TheIndigoRaven
  • From demonsangel on May 20, 2013
    I was wondering what happened to this story! Glad to see you are continuing it. I loved this chapter, it was a lot to take in but there is nothing wrong with a good long chapter. Maybe this year Harry will be able to get out of the tournament if he is actually going to use his head. I'm amazed he never requested/demanded to be questioned under verituserum. I sure as heck would have. I also would have refused to participate and demanded a lawyer >.< I can't imagine something like that not having a loophole. Binding contract or no. After all, there is way to much margin for people to put others names in as a joke! Can't wait to read more!

    There was one little mistake I noticed. You said that when Dudly did better then Harry in school, Harry was punished and I think what you meant was that when Harry did better, he was punished, thus why he always does poorly. Anyways, thanks for posting!
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  • From ANON - Rexcalon on May 20, 2013
    Great start up, i can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on May 20, 2013
    Nice to see this story continued, I had good hopes for it.

    Please keep writing it.

    It's good to hear that you plan to let Ron grow up, bashing gets so tiresome.

    Sorry, I have nothing constructive to add, just wanted to say I like the story.
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  • From rebekahalana on May 20, 2013
    I am really enjoying this story . I knew there were only 2 chapters when I started to read , but I got so caught up in it that when I reached the end ... I kind of wailed "No!" outloud . I will definately be keeping an eye out for updates . Love the way you are tying the families together with the alliance and giving Harry a way to find out about his mom besides the usual Snape interactions .
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  • From BAFan on May 20, 2013
    Ch. 1 & 2.

    Very interesting beginning. I want to see where you take this. Sorry to hear that Ron will continue to be a prat for so long, but I agree that he needs a good wakeup call.
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  • From DarkFlamingPhoenix on April 19, 2013
    I like this story a lot so far. :3 Intelligent!Harry is always good advertising, and I like your focus on some of the other girls, actually delving int their characters and not treating them as stereotypes.

    Other things I liked:

    1) Harry's verbal comebacks with Malfoy
    2) Creation of the privacy rune
    3) Wizarding World politics
    4) Daphne's slang and abbreviations (Griffs and Snakes!)

    This has a looot of fun potential. Just make sure to throw in some challenges for him along the way. ^^ Loking forward to more!
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  • From ANON - Akuma on February 17, 2013
    moments before.
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  • From ANON - steve on February 11, 2013
    i have a feeling that you going to bash ron, yes he like sport be he far more then that, and he was good student, harry and ron where B students. you could have ron have hermoine and one other girl, and no bashing.


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  • From ANON - Dezeos on February 09, 2013
    I really enjoyed this first chapter and I look forward to read more!
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  • From ANON - dd on February 08, 2013
    This looks very interesting. Hopefully you can update quickly because i really like your premise so far. More friends, cursebreaking, smarter Harry, all ingredients to a good story. Logically, Harry would have had to have some kind of owl ward on him. Fan mail would have been an absolute for him being who he is. Do try not to go too far into Dumbledore bashing though if you go that path. Maybe a little old/forgetful, but definitely not evil or really too manipulative.
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