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By : TheIndigoRaven
  • From OmniViceUser on January 17, 2020

    A good Story, unfortunatly it seems, that you have never come around to update it, really a shame so


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  • From ANON - Wanderer f the Dark on August 19, 2014
    Wonderful story that has the hallmarks of being a true master piece eventually.
    You chose an interesting pairing, and hinted at a route to explain it and you strung together a great plot line with a large number of possible avenues to advance it with.
    Minor Ron bashing, but at this point in the original story, the character is well within its age when he is rather insensitive, and thoughtless, immature so it is not really bashing, so well done in portraying the characters as people, rather then fantasy, gives a great feeling and atmosphere for the story.

    Looking forward to its next part, and hpe that you update soon.

    Wanderer of the Dark
    aka
    Nicolas Azrael Dragonov

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  • From Genisis_Pirme on July 06, 2013
    This is amazing... I love it, it always bugged me that no one talked about Harry's parents even though in the 7th book it says that James was from a very powerful pureblood family
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  • From ANON - bill560682 on July 06, 2013
    as for ron i think the ONLY reason he EVER kept making up with harry was he found out really fast no one cared about ron weasley unless it had to do with harry potter the-boy-who-lived. if harry had been anybody else i think their friendship would have been dead after the troll in first year because you KNOW harry made ron tell granger he was sorry for the whole thing even thou he had no clue there would be a troll. an the only reason ron did it was because harry is the-boy-who-lived a ron at that age would never have said he was sorry. i think it will take years for ron to really grow up and not just trying to fake it to keep harry as a friend.
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  • From ANON - bill560682 on July 06, 2013
    personally i like to think harry is rather smart, if the local bullies have a game called harry hunting then the harry being hunted is going to need to be smart such as hiding out at the local library. an of course if same said harry does hide at the library then he is going to have to read books to keep from getting tossed out. now that does not mean 11 year old harry will be ready to sit his mastery in any subject but he will not be as stupid as cannon harry. an i think this would carry over to hogwarts since first year and second year the group almost lived in the library trying to find out about the stone and the snake. so harry would have loads of time to make notes on spells he wanted to learn. an as far as potions goes harry should get perfect marks in that class since his aunt hovering over him ready to shove his hands into a hot fire on the stove should make a mistake in the cooking that would make snape look like a girl scout since all he can do is cost him house points and give detentions.
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  • From ANON - bill560682 on July 04, 2013
    weasley twins could make tons of money if they made cheer candies. what cheer candies are is a candy that can be put into any food or drink that causes the person to say the stated thing every time they open there mouths. best place to start selling such an item is the world cup match. this way krum fans can drug the irish food and drinks to cause they to praise krum and the irish fans can can drug krums fans to cheer for the irish. the weasley twins and lee jorden should be able to sell 10,000 or more of those at that event, seeing as they get to the event about 12 hours before it starts. people will likely be buying 10, 20 or even 50 at a time to drug the other teams fans with. an after that event they can start selling them for every team by owl order an with world wide sales they should pull in a million galleons a year easy if not several million. you figure if there are 500 quittich teams around the world which is likely a low number and 10 games a season per team which is also a low number an a thousand people at each game who want cheer candies then that is 5 million candies a year sold. an if you send owl order forms with the rest of your items on them you can easily double that number since you will have tons of people wanting the candies to make you sick to get out of class or work. selling the snack boxes at the world cup you will have every kid there spending every bit of their pocket money on those to use to get out of class. these candies are also great for those guys who do not wish to have to go see their mother in-law.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 28, 2013
    alwasy thought the rune magic, and math, would not really help that much, when that time could be better learning how to fight, look like harry allready push ron away from him. that will hurt a lot, you dont see bill trying to talk to ron and help him, no just harry. why in all these type of story do only harry get the harem,
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  • From ANON - Gruffard on June 28, 2013
    Wow. The scene with Babbling, Harry and the book was powerful and well done. Glad that I found a story where Harry is compared to and gets to know more about his Mom, it is sorely lacking in canon. The pacing with Susan and Padma seems great so far and like to see how you swing the events for the threesome. Plus it will be refreshing to read and story where Harry has friends outside the main ships.

    Thanks for the read and looking forward to more. Curious, is this story on a site that has tracking built in? I hate how I often miss an update or more of some of the stories on AFF.
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  • From ANON - Sara on June 28, 2013
    Awesome fic so far :)
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  • From demonsangel on June 28, 2013
    Great chapter! I really can't wait to read more and it's practically killing me having to wait lol. I love how you had Luna in this. Perhaps, Harry could help Luna and Astoria so that they could get into the 5th year one early as well. After all, I see no reason why they would have to take it year by year if they showed they were competent enough in the subject. Astoria strikes me as simply a bit nervous, I'll bet that once she is more comfortable with the class she could be right up where with Harry and luna. Great job again and I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - lordamnesia on June 28, 2013
    this story is going great! I love it so far, so keep up the fantastic work!
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  • From ANON - Leah on June 28, 2013
    I love what you have going so far! You are pacing things well and Harry is very believable. I like that he is standing on his own two feet.

    I am excited to really see the plot start and the mystery of who is messing with Harry's life to be revealed! I also can't wait to see his relationship with his ladies develop and grow!

    Much Love!
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  • From joeparas1988 on June 28, 2013
    I always feel that Arithmany is overplayed in HP fanfiction. People seem to think it's magical physics or mathematics, where they break down magic into a series of numbers and equations - which is incredibly lame. Magic is magic, and treating it like gravity doesn't do it, or your fic (or canon for that matter) justice. Keep magic in this story a mystical force whose most complex working and nature are beyond human understand, leave it mysterious and vague and it'll be all the better for it.

    Besides, from all evidence I've seen, Arithmancy seems to be little more than numerology. The importance of prime numbers and observing their effects in magic. Blurgh, only slightly better than Divination. It'd be hilarious if you turned that 'drop divination and pick up Runes and Arithmancy' cliche on its head by having Harry point that out and drop it like a bag of shite.
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  • From ANON - steve on June 05, 2013
    why i understand about ron, he was aloyal friend that risk his life for harry, why he hated being poor,becouse people made fun of him, and his friend never tired to talk to him be there for him,it was alway harry, hell his own family he did not feel loved by. so i get alot of it. and he did not hate snakes outside of draco.
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  • From ANON - Garm88 on May 23, 2013
    Harry dating girls OTHER than Saint Hermione the Radiant?! Sign me up! Looking forward to this story progressing.
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