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From ANON - SP777 on July 13, 2013
about #28..

1. When it comes to 'Harry as Dark Lord' plots, that would be the time to get ambitious and
get out of your comfort zone & do something extravagant. Therefore, I throw at thee...an idea.

So far, reading your stories over the years [..damn has it been years??], I think I can honestly say...I
can't recall a story where you pitted Harry against someone magically strong & have him fight might for might.

You've done political intrigues, mysteries, romances, things that make you go 'hmm..', but never has Harry fought
an opponent that was strong as him to the point he actually had to retreat, regroup & face his opponent another day.

Ever thought of that?

2. I forgot about McConnagall[sp], who honestly was not thinking straight & was completely out of line. Of course, Harry
handled it in a very mature way....without blasting anyone out of the school. But I know how he feels, it's frustrating when
people don't take you seriously, no matter how old you get.

Personally, he should break down & just be Headmaster, get it over with.

Anyway, good chapter & it was nice to see what was Dumbledore's opinion on what was happening.
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From ANON - delia cerrano on July 13, 2013
Harry's speech with Minerva and Albus were right on. I can't believe Minerva can't see and agree wth his point. I can't think who he is going to ask for consideration from unless, oh I hope anyway, it's Draco?
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From ANON - delia cerrano on July 10, 2013
Continues to be above average and I'm understanding Harry's actions a bit better or you are explaining more in the context of the story. Whatever I'm liking it even more.
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From moodysavage on July 07, 2013
That was really impressive. I don't know how you come up with your ideas that show Harry's power but I love that you do :)
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From ANON - streakerboi on July 07, 2013
I'm enjoying this story very much... As I do all of your stories! This one is particularly fun and I hope you continue to find fun and exciting waays for Harry to shock and surprize! I love how he manages to leave his admirers and detractors speechless and hope that this will continue. And his display of sheer power... Love that too.

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From ANON - SP777 on July 07, 2013
about #27..

...and that was the most splendid display of power that I've ever read & makes
me wish I had seen it on TV. Harry is a great Dark Lord, though he still has some
things to learn. I can't wait to see how he assembles his court and the role it will play.

By the way, Lucius didn't exactly get 'egg on his face', but he WAS put in his place. Nice
touch with the coronets.

You know, I swear this is your 'true calling'...writing Harry as a Dark Lord, you are
absolutely splendid at it.
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From bloodshound on July 05, 2013
they were for a little bit but now they're not. i'm going to log into yahoo and see if that helps.
well, sheesh. i swear the ministry mob are acting as poster boys for the not quite bright.
i get bet draco's ticked... he was just about to get some. i'd be ticked to if some govt. twats interrupted my nookie time.
heh, here's hoping on the knight rename stakes... though ron isn't all that imaginative outside of tactics...

>.< trust parents to throw a spanner in the works. it will be interesting to see if luc is up to something slippery.
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From ANON - SP777 on July 02, 2013
about #26...

...and when all is said & done, despite all the posturing and schemes, Lucius Malfoy is simply a man who loves his
son and wants what is best for him.

I can't wait for the dinner though I was hoping for a huge dinner party where the 'Pure'bloods can witness Harry's
strength, but that will come later right? In the meantime, will Lucius test HArry's strength, if not then...why not?
It will be fun to see Lucius with 'egg splattered all over his face'. :-)
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From ANON - delia cerrano on June 30, 2013
Liked the chapter a lot. Set up a dinner with the Malfoys including Draco which should be interesting.
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From Leania07 on June 30, 2013
I gave it a bit so I could read a few chapters at a time; still enthralled! Lucius is protective of his son (he better after what he almost lost during the war) but I'm curious as to how Narcissa will take this. I'm sure she would approve of the path her son is going if they weren't still smarting from the after effects of their position in the war; she should be proud of the steps he's made and the positive view he is looked upon right now. "Should be" is the key word there, since I have no clue how you will write Narcissa to be; and it is your story. I imagine the dinner will be quite tense and I'm anxious to see how it goes. Will Harry have to take a Floo call and, because he'll be shielding the call from others, offend his hosts? Will they be in awe, though not show it, of his strength of power? Will they accept that Draco knows what he's doing? I can't wait to read and find out! Looking forward to it!

Leania
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From kadajclone on June 30, 2013
Hmm well here's hoping that Harry agreeing to meet up with Lucius and Narcissa wont cause a bigger rift between him and his friends and mess with his reputation further. Putting aside that it was Harry's testimony that got them there,this was a heavily bigoted family that:

-willingly and happily aided and abetted a man who was essentially the wizard version of Hitler

-who's patriarch was publicly known to have served Voldemort in the first war and then lied about it

-used intimidation and bribery to rise in the Ministry

-knowingly endangered the life of a 12 YEAR OLD girl and was an indirect cause of the whole debacle that was second year.

-attempted to curse Harry outside the headmasters office over losing a freaking house elf....that he abused mind you,

-tried to get Hagrid sacked and sent to Azkaban

-Went right back to serving the monster at the very first call.

-Threatened to kill Harry and his friends if they did not hand over the prophecy.

-Didn't even finish serving his first sentence at Azkaban

-(granted this was after voldemort essentially moved in and took over the mansion) Several innocent people were held and tortured in their cellar for close to a year.

-(this ones for the whole family) Was quite literally only a few feet away as Hermione was brutally tortured by Bellatrix.

-Given that he served in both wars has more than likely tortured and/or killed quite a few people.

Phew...totally did not mean for that to go that long lol. But yeah long story short Lucius grinds my gears. Draco I give a small pass to because lets be real, while he was a bully/bigot/coward there were lines he could not and would not cross even when his families lives hung in the balance and refused to name the trio when they were brought to the manor. Was a stupid kid who made a stupid choice and learned from it. Narcissa grew slightly on me and over time stopped being, and pardon my french, "that stuck up racist bitch" and became "that racist bitch who had the brass balls to LIE to freaking Voldemort" who it is known could easily get into peoples minds. At the end, her love for her son was more important than a madman's genocidal cause. And thus she made a step towards redemption and gave the Light side one last chance to win the war. Lucius.........beyond the occasional showing that he loved his wife and son.....was a cunt......a massive....freaking....CUNT who while he may have lost his reputation got to keep his freedom.

This was quite literally my reaction when I first read that Rowling said due to Narcissa lying to Voldemort that the WHOLE family got off:

http://24.media.tumblr.com/9cb4eff9c678a8fac34553a9c05f03cf/tumblr_mnsf6r0Zch1qdtcexo7_250.gif

this was my brothers reaction:

http://media.tumblr.com/e217a1c1935c6eddbf1d5f1a65efa6f1/tumblr_moprxrtGNI1rqfj79o1_250.gif

I'm just like, "so Narcissa grows a pair and does the right thing....and LUCIUS gets amnesty as well?!?!?!?"

Wow, ok kind of went off on a tangent there but now I'm back and here is the "true" review.

As always another spectacular chapter although it was sad to see Harry lament that he may very well start to lose people. It truly is lonely at the top eh? Also will we get any interaction between Briseis and Hermione? I only ask because I am constantly visualizing them as harry's shoulder devil/angel and them both being proud intelligent women but with different views on how Harry should be doing things.

-waits patiently for next chapter-
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From alexkdp on June 25, 2013
I'm so sorry i havent reviewed in such a long time. i have been newly employed and my life is in shambles. that was a beautiful chapter. And I just love it when harry shows the extent of his strength. and when draco is in awe every time he does. my favourite part really. love how you broke them with the prrrringgg. could have sworn it harry had a cellphone on him! haha.
loved it. moreeeee please. hugs.
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From CareLessLover on June 25, 2013
I feel honest pity for the Ministry. If I had been one of those 'Hit Wizards', I would have dropped to the ground and beg Dark Lord Potter to have mercy on me! Minister Tillipop is a fool. I hope the rest of the British wizards and witches see that soon.
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From BAFan on June 24, 2013
Ch. 25

Arrghh. So close! And then those stupid wizards interrupted. For that alone they must be destroyed! *g* Just kidding, of course. Great chapter.
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From moodysavage on June 24, 2013
lol that was fun to watch Harry facing off against all those wizards. I wonder if the public will know that Harry hasn't done a thing to hurt anyone and it's the ministry making an issue to attack first... though Harry did actually take over the school lol.
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