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Reviews for Dear Diary

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  • From SherlockedInSlytherin on March 04, 2013
    Ahhhh oh man what's Dumbledore gonna say??? Liking it a lot so far :)
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  • From Talented_Mrs_Lupin on March 04, 2013
    Well to me the story is called 'Dear Diary' so i think that the start of each chapter should have an entry or part of an entry so we get the story of the past as well as a story of the present. It helps the reader know why Snape may at the way he does or why Hermione feels the way she does, plus if there is conversation about what the students are reading then you don't have to go back to memories because we've already read it. I like this story by the way thank you for writing it and please update soon.
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  • From guiltypleasure on February 27, 2013
    Chapter 4. Oh dear God, that was incredibly hot and nothing actually happened.

    I loved it!!!!!

    More please, give us more.

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  • From JanaThrash on February 27, 2013
    This is a very clever way to reveal a much used story line. I simply love the narrative. Great job.
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  • From Skyla-lilly on February 26, 2013
    Absolutly genius i love the mystery of who ivy and Alexander is even tho its obvious i cant wait to read more and get more insight to how their relationship started. keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Citten on February 26, 2013
    i am loving this story and i cant wait to see what happens next! i love severus when he is the snarky master and hermione is his slave-or what ever she is going to be and i love that diary pages have been found! i do hope that we get lots more and not just pages of rememberances and that we get more of now time story too!! :) post soon!! PLEASE!
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  • From ANON - Missycam on February 24, 2013
    Ohhhhh Merlin.... Please continue!!!!! ;-P
    Thanks for the update ;-)
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  • From DB1 on February 24, 2013
    @4 loving this.

    Update!

    DB
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  • From ANON - Giraffe on February 24, 2013
    I'm really liking it so far. The only critique I have is to relax "Ivy"s diary entries. Its all very flowery and Jane Austin like which deson't fit her character or the time period and takes a little bit away from the wonderful story you've got started.
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  • From guiltypleasure on February 19, 2013
    Oh dear, so much for wanting to go public. They can't possibly now can they.

    Leave it to Ron, he never thinks Snape is good enough. Why is he always so surprised that someone could love the snarky bastard.

    Please continue. :D
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  • From DB1 on February 17, 2013
    @3 lol let the madness begin with wild theories of who the couple could be!! Update soon!

    DB
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  • From Talented_Mrs_Lupin on February 16, 2013
    I love this story update soon.
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  • From ANON - Missycam on February 16, 2013
    Argggg how I want to kill RONALD!!!
    Thank you ;-)
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  • From ANON - colao on February 16, 2013
    Oooh, this is deliciously different. I look forward to more.
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  • From AnasumiHideki on February 15, 2013
    I love it! It just goes to show that nobody's business is their own while in school. lol. Can't wait to read more! XD
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