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Reviews for Dear Diary

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  • From SlytherinPenguin on December 15, 2015
    Please for the love of Merlin write a sequel or an epilogue or something! I must know what happens next!
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  • From xxfawnpwincessxx on September 07, 2015
    Really, Albus? Really? I love you and all but stop meddling!
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  • From Saraphinaangel65 on April 15, 2015
    Please update. I love this storyline.
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  • From TehEminator on August 20, 2013
    Please keep posting! I'd really like to see where it goes from here.
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  • From ANON - Tika on April 10, 2013
    What a cliffhanger at the end of Chapter 5! Please keep writing!! I like the mix of diary entries and current plot line. I like the structure of Chapter 5 because the diary entry seemed to flow naturally. If there's not a way to make more of the entries flow naturally or for longer entries, I like the use of individual chapters to have the entries. Thanks for writing! I have enjoyed this story so far and can't wait to see what else you write!
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  • From ANON - eri on April 02, 2013
    That was hot u def had my pupils dilating lol. I just looove dominant severus. At first i wasnt sure about the diary entries but u dont make hermione sound too ooc. Aside from minor typos and one wrong word it's great besides who cares about typos when the story is smokin
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  • From ANON - ALANRICKMANFAN1983 on March 22, 2013
    how does the headmaster know its hermione and severus in the diary enteries?? please UPDATE story with more chapters!!!!
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  • From ANON - ALANRICKMANFAN1983 on March 22, 2013
    who is leacking the diary enteries?? if its not hermione or and severus?? also surely this part of the entery shows its hermione and severus: I wasn
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  • From Lauren_W on March 18, 2013
    This is really really good. It's different and I definitely feel like a 17 year old is writing those diary entries while the story takes on a whole other feel. It's fantastic and the descriptions are just delicious. Great work and I'm looking forward to the next update!
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  • From guiltypleasure on March 16, 2013
    Oh how perfect that chapter was. Dumbledore, the diary and Hermione hiding. Poor Severus, he certainly doesn't have a leg to stand on now.

    Incredibly hot recount of their first time. :D
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  • From ANON - Missycam on March 16, 2013
    Fuck!!!!
    Update ASAP please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^^
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  • From ANON - cat on March 04, 2013
    If you mix it up with an entry and story its good, post soon!
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  • From DB1 on March 04, 2013
    @5 lol there in for some trouble now. Great story. Update soon!!

    DB
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  • From guiltypleasure on March 04, 2013
    Oh crap Dumbledore knows. Now lets see if he can "overlook" this indiscretion.

    I love to read what is written in the diary, so I wouldn't mind seeing something every other chapter since it would give me something to look forward to. :D


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  • From ANON - Missycam on March 04, 2013
    Love the chapter!
    Thanks!
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