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Reviews for Masquerade, who is who?

By : dark-huntressmoony
  • From ANON - Diana on March 29, 2013
    Update soon!
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on March 27, 2013
    Well you were doing terrific. What is Jason doing back? I'll bet Draco throws a fit over this. Can't blame him...being Veela especially. Hope Harry gets all dominent and claims Draco very clearly so Jason knows there's no chance.
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on March 27, 2013
    screw Jason! he left harry not the other way around. Jason packed his shit up and left him high and dry and ALONE! harry moved on and is finally with the real love of his life Draco. they were ment to be together as mates by creature inheritance, which TRUMPS stupid Jason's "u don't love me, im leaving to teach u a lesson!" crap that he pulled. i say turn around kiss Draco deeply and walk away saying "COME along MY Darling MATE WE need some privacy....." WITH not so much as a second look at the dumb***.
    ok now that i vented and got that out of my system lol. please UPDATE SOON. not many stories get to me like that, so wonderful job and please keep up the good work
    and please email me when u update if u can im hooked now lol
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  • From Bickymonster on March 27, 2013
    Kind of really like this story; just a couple of comments though: in chapter 2 you misspelled Fleur as Flure, and in chapter 3 Zabini as Zambini, so you might want to go back and correct those. Other than those, it reads and flows well, and has a potentially good story starting to pick up :)
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  • From alexkdp on March 27, 2013
    that last bit was a little too fast for me. but otherwise i think everything else was rather well executed.
    Nice touch with the Jason bit there.
    Dont wait too long to upload a new chappie.
    x
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  • From jujukitty on March 27, 2013
    ohh, this ought to get interesting with the old love interest back in the picture. but at least harry and draco have started things. keep up the good work :)
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  • From ANON - Diana on March 27, 2013
    Update soon!
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  • From ANON - ditch kitty on March 02, 2013
    I believe this is shaping up to be an interesting story. Something tells me there will be quite a few twists in this plot. Also I like the Phantom of the Opera lyrics as titles.
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  • From jujukitty on February 27, 2013
    oooh, very nice start, and could definitely feel the chemistry between harry and draco. can't wait to see how it plays out. keep up the good work :)

    (Btw, it's Fleur, not Flure)
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on February 27, 2013
    Now the story is heating up! Hope they meet again soon...bet Jason comes back to interfere between them. Maybe this this story Draco will be more understanding since he left in no uncertain terms in the first place & Harry will be more determined in putting Jason out in obvious favor of Draco.
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  • From moodysavage on February 27, 2013
    I liked everything about this chapter! It was intense between the two of them, how Draco called him Potter and Harry guessed who he was, how Draco thinks that Harry is his mate. Did Draco know that Harry was in a long-term relationship that ended when he came back?
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  • From alexkdp on February 27, 2013
    his mate? ah. this is going to be good. looking forward to more. and the smut, oh the glorious smut.
    keep it up and dont make me wait to long for the next chapter, mon ami ;)
    xx
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  • From ANON - delia cerranov on February 23, 2013
    Oh yeah, good start for a story. Jason? Three years? He was all sad about the break up? I'm hoping that Jason was not a "love of his life" kind of thing not even an "important person" in his life but a "usable filler" only. I like to believe that Harry & Draco are the loves of their lives...star crossed lovers...lightening strikes when they kiss etc etc. Hey unrealistc? Maybe, but it is a fantasy story anyway so why can't I have what I want?
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  • From Oishiinam on February 22, 2013
    OK this is a good start and you have piqued my interest! I look forward to seeing where this one goes, though I shouldn't be surprised as I have enjoyed your other stories as well!
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