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Reviews for Unlikely Heroes: Redemption

By : KusanoSaku
  • From ANON - ChaosLady on February 03, 2014
    Wonderful!
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  • From ANON - ruby on February 03, 2014
    Forgot to say in the other review that I don't consider date rape drugs (lust potion) and rape pranks. I also consider that all 3 involved in the so called orgy as being victims and being raped.

    I also don't want Granger to have a child. However that is worked out I don't really have strong feelings about.

    Granger needs punished but not by condoning rape.
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  • From ANON - ruby on February 03, 2014
    Sorry. But even if I dislike the way Hermione has been acting to punish her with point loss and detention etc because she was raped is wrong. No matter the "morals" of the wizarding world you've created, date rape drugs (lust potion) and rape is wrong and should be punished a lot harder than the one who made the potion was. It is also rather hypocritical of the characters to disparage her beliefs and morals but at the same time support their own.
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  • From ANON - Dreamer27 on February 03, 2014
    Please don't have any of them marry Granger. As they are all from better families than her then through marriage Granger will get higher social status. I hope either she doesn't get pregnant or as it's a prank war that someone prank her with a potion so she doesn't have a baby or she's forced to get rid of the baby or it comes out that she is infertile. It would also then be good if Granger would then never marry. I just don't want Flint or Davies to have to be tied to her. They haven't done anything bad and it's not fair for them to be punished by having to marry her and then be stuck with her the rest of their lives. Also I feel bad for Uquarht he was thrown away by his mother and his father is dead.He shouldn't of done what he did, but he shouldn't be tied to Granger either. I also don't want there to be a baby because if there is then the child will grow up thinking they are evil because of how they were conceived and probably also feel that they are not part of the wizarding world or feel guilty that they are if they are raised by Granger. I just think that Granger would do irrepairable damage to a child and I don't want her to have a child she will just make suffer.

    So please don't have her get married or have a baby please because her social standing will rise her baby won't be a muggleborn but instead a halfblood and through marriage her social status will rise even higher and after all her betrayal she doesn't deserve to be rewarded by having a baby or by being married.

    I know I went on a rant and I'm sorry I just really want Granger to suffer and I think if she had a baby people would probably start being nice to her just because of the baby and if she got married people would be forced to be nice to her because she would gain a higher social standing and I don't want Flint or Davies to be punished by having to marry her and then have to live a life of sadness and regret because of it. I just think instead she shouldn't get pregnant and instead rumours about her should go around about her being a slut and about her trying to ensnare the heirs to pureblood houses. That I think would finally be punishment for her, to have her reputation totally destroyed and be looked upon as a slut and not a girl who got married and had a baby and lived happily off her new husbands money and forced her husband to live in sadness never getting to be with the one they loved.
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  • From ANON - Jessyka on December 06, 2013
    More, more, more!!! Please, please, please!!!
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  • From ANON - Csweaver on September 16, 2013
    You are a really good author the character development that branches so dramatically from JKR's original character set is done brilliantly I am slightly concerned that this story is listed so far from its original, I suppose that simply means you updated this one more resently. I hope you haven't abandoned this story because I am almost stricken with worry for Harry and Draco. While at first skeptical at your slow start into the second installment I am glad that you are taking your time to develop the grief of the supporting characters. Esspecially with how fast the other story was going it needed a breather. I am also leaving a more critical review on the companion piece. (Sorry you're great I just saw some problems in that one.) keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on June 07, 2013
    I think that their boy should have Severus' coloring and the girl should have Lucius'. Excellent update!
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  • From Meechypoo64 on June 07, 2013
    I'm glad you explained Severus' pregnancy in more detail. I thought his conversion of magic allowd him simply to become pregnant again not reverse a spell from a pregnancy in stasis. I'm so happy they're having a little boy and a little girl. I'm worried for Draco and Harry because 19 months will seem like a very long time. At the moment Draco is at least in the right frame of mind.

    ~~ Meechy
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  • From isiselizabeth on May 08, 2013
    I love this story!!!! Please don't make us wait so long for an update!! 😕
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on May 06, 2013
    Not bad.
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  • From ANON - reader on May 05, 2013
    I read the first part yesterday hoping to read more parts of the sequel soon
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  • From MyaMalfoy on April 18, 2013
    It's been almost 2 whole months! I'm hoping you'll be updating with a new chapter soon! I know how life can be, butting in to our Harry Potter world. Just wanted you to know there's at least one Potterhead out here that is hoping for this story to be continued!
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  • From ANON - pooh on April 15, 2013
    chap 2...hope another i coming soon, will be checking again...have loved this, don't know if it is Slytherine, or Irish...
    Till next time!
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  • From ANON - Brandi on March 22, 2013
    Yay! You posted! I have to say this story seems to be turning out pretty good! Keep up the good work and update soon!
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  • From jujukitty on February 27, 2013
    and yay for more story! and the fight was very well done. and snape's been infertile because he was already preggers lol nice touch. keep up the good work, i look forward to more :)
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