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Reviews for Peverell's Children

By : Zakaira
  • From ANON - ChaosLady on May 18, 2013
    This chapter is very angst-y, but it makes the story more interesting.
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on May 18, 2013
    Neither of those web address work.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on May 14, 2013
    Wow! That was a surprise. Please let Draco be ok and the baby also. Lucky that Severus was there to handle it so quickly.
    What was Ron thinking? Faking what? Pregnancy?
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  • From Akari-Seikatsu on May 14, 2013
    I hope that everything goes well with your surgery and recovery. As for what should happen, I think Ron should be expelled for what he did. I love the canon verson of Ron, but when it comes to fan fictions I generally hate him because he's so dense that he makes for a good mini villian. I would also be interested in seeing how Harry handles the entire situation. As stated before, I hope everything goes well and I can't wait to read what happens next.
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on May 13, 2013
    You rarely ever to cliffies so you're forgiven. Short but sweet.
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  • From ANON - Diana on May 13, 2013
    Update soon!
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on May 11, 2013
    Pretty creepy. If you decide to write more about that side effect, I'll just skim over that part. Hope Draco starts acting nicer more "boy friendy" to Harry soon. It seems like Draco is just taking advantage of Harry more than any caring at all...everything is for Draco's own benefit. And poor Harry just wants to be loved and wanted and have a real family.
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on May 11, 2013
    It's nice to hear from you! Wonderful update! The sex scene was great!
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  • From dark-huntressmoony on May 09, 2013
    They're not creepy but the way you described Harry turning around when Draco walked in i was reminded of some creepy slack jawed monsters in like bad ghost movies or maybe something from Amnesia or even Husks and parts of the Reaper monsters in Mass Effect. The image made me giggle. Kinda feeling bad for Harry with the whole botched proposal, but it could have gone alot worse!
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  • From Bickymonster on May 09, 2013
    I do think all the extension,stretching and other spells they are using for sex are all kind of creepy, but in a good way, sort of. It feels like it is all part of the concept of the Peverell wizards and that Harry and Draco find it hot and sexy is enough.
    I kind of really enjoy that they are so blunt and inexperienced with each other and don't really have a clue what they should do or say; that Draco has these romantic ideals that Harry is floundering to try and meet and while Harry is coming off awkward with his attempts, Draco seems to love it, so that is what matters.
    The relationship between them is just so different in this story.
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on May 08, 2013
    The vomiting spoiled the sex scene. Otherwise it was a good update.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on May 08, 2013
    Oh my poor Harry! He says he loves Draco and Draco just accepts it as if it is his due. This is such a one sided relationship. Almost a slave master relationship. Harry deserves better but he always gets used and gets the left overs. He tries so hard and is such a loving soul. But he always gets the bare minimum and that grudgingly.
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on May 07, 2013
    That was very sweet of Harry and very sensible of Draco. But I also ache for them both. Excellent update!
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  • From Bickymonster on May 07, 2013
    Congrats and good luck on your final exam, I just did my final exam for my degree on friday, great feeling to finally be free of it. :D
    Really enjoyed the chapter. :)
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on May 06, 2013
    Draco, Draco, Draco, you are such a downer some times. You wanted Harry to be more romantic. So he is and what do you do?
    Cut him off at the knees. You could have said how much you cared for him already and would love more as they grew together or something. Harry always seems to be trying so hard in this relationship and Draco just rides along expecting Harry to know & understand everything and do everythig the way Draco wants.
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