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Reviews for Peverell's Children

By : Zakaira
  • From ANON - delia cerrano on April 25, 2013
    Nursery is nice. I think Draco is going to be livid when he finds out Harry told Hermione. I would be to. Harry can't seem to keep his mouth shut around Hermione and Ron. And whatever they know they end up blabbing. It's like he feels he owes Ron & Hermione and that is more important than his promise or duty to his love.
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  • From TalisRuadair on April 25, 2013
    I am more focused on the fact that I am sure either the two of them are having twins or they are having a Peverell Wizard. Wouldn't it just be perfect if they were having twins. I am sure that Draco will not be happy when he finds out that Hermione knows; however, he might understand how it happened and be fortunate for Harry's lie. Then again, they plan on listing Harry as the mother, so technically Harry is Draco's halfblood girlfriend. I can't wait to read the Saturday then but better yet see how Draco reacts to both the nursery and the catalogs for selecting baby things.
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  • From dark-huntressmoony on April 25, 2013
    Well with the way that Draco has reacted to things in the past....i foresee this going down very very badly. I almost cringe at what is going to happen to Harry
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on April 24, 2013
    This story is such a delight! Harry is so serious & sweet trying to make his baby & boyfriend into a proper family & take care of them with so little information & experience. I really hate that Snape wants o break them up practically before they are together.
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  • From ANON - Diana on April 24, 2013
    Update soon!
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on April 22, 2013
    Draco is a very sneaky self centered guy isn't he? Poor Harry...I don't know Harry wants love & family so much he'll put up with too much. I feel like it's almost like he is being used...actually he is being used. Draco seems to care for Harry a a bit but not enough to stop being a "git" as he says.
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  • From TalisRuadair on April 21, 2013
    I would say that your sex scenes are grand. With regards to proposals, I must admit that my husband and I desired to get married after we had our daughter. There really wasn't a proposal in that situation. Harry has already shown some romantic tendencies with the ROR scene. They both already seem to love the lilac beach. Perhaps a romantic dinner much like they have already enjoyed. There's the idea of putting the ring in bubbly, but perhaps it could be carbonated water. If it is just a normal romantic dinner between the two, perhaps it would be an real surprise. He could use a temporary sticking charm to the bottom of the glass to prevent Draco from swallowing it. I'm sure that Dobby could help him pick the perfect dinner for the two of them. Maybe it could be a moonlit beach instead of in the sun with a large full moon under an open air structure. Perhaps the area could be lit with teeky torches. Maybe he could have one of the elves spell out Will you Marry Me on Draco's cake dessert before presenting the sprinkling water. I guess that's the only thing I can think about. You know since I didn't really get nor want the whole romantic proposal. Then again I guess I'm a bit too practical for that.
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  • From dark-huntressmoony on April 20, 2013
    Good chapter, the apple bit was cute.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 19, 2013
    My hubby took me shopping @ the mall (in cutoffs and flipflops no less !)and while I window shopped he picked out the one I showed the most interest in and knelt right there at the counter. For Draco in this fic tho' it will have to be private because of his paranoia (justified) of Voldemort finding out. Maybe Harry should ask Narcissa for permission in front of Draco that would seem more of a pureblood way to propose.
    BTW really enjoying this fic
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on April 19, 2013
    Wonderful!
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on April 19, 2013
    Can't believe how uncaring & selfish Draco is. Harry is going to have to assert himself & be firm or he is going to be a 2nd class parent to his own son & totally walked over! Romantic proposal? We just always knew we were going to get married. Maybe with a romantic dinner & a walk by their sea or a garden with music, candlelight, & flowers. He better have his good logical arguments ready. Poor Harry loves even though he has never had much love shown him now he has Draco who continues to not trea him very well. Doesn't Draco know what he is potentially throwing away? Someone who would be devoted to Draco & their child!
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  • From ANON - Diana on April 19, 2013
    Update soon!
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  • From dark-huntressmoony on April 19, 2013
    My husband is in the military so he proposed to me on one of his leaves. We went to a lovely little italian restaurant that was on a riverfront and we had a nice dinner then when i went to the bathroom i came back to see the small string quartet by our table and he had ordered tara misu for desert and when i sat down again i saw something on the whipped cream and it was a beautiful diamond engagement ring. then he took the ring cleaned it off and the quartet began to play my favorite song from Phantom of the Opera and he proposed to me. it was the most romantic thing i have ever had done to me and i said yes right on the spot and havent looked back since
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  • From gossipgirl84 on April 18, 2013
    Okay, I don't think Snape should have said how Harry and Draco had sex, that is just wrong and gross, Snape had no right and I think Dumbledore is an idiot who should be fired. What Harry and Draco do together, shouldn't get him expelled. Maybe I'm confused but being sent to prison wouldn't be up to Dumbledore. Harry needs to learn to stand up to both Snape and Dumbledore. They are just the professors not his parents. Can't wait for your next update, hopefully it will have Snape and Dumbledore not sticking their noses where they don't belong.
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  • From TalisRuadair on April 18, 2013
    I do admit that I am really liking this story. I think you came up with a plausible explanation for male pregnancy. I hope that Draco decides to keep the child and that they can successfully hide him. I can't wait to find out about Narcissa's reaction, and shouldn't someone be held accountable for Harry's ignorance. Surely, Dumbledore must have suspected Harry's Peverell ancestry because he was inspecting that bloody cloak. Will Narcissa be a bit mad that Harry was raised by Muggles and no one had an opportunity to educate him properly in pureblood things like marriages and abstaining from sex until marriage. I look forward to your next update.
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