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Reviews for The Mimicker

By : TalisRuadair
  • From ANON - ChaosLady on April 04, 2013
    I thought that Sirius was a SUBMISSIVE concubine and REMUS was one of Harry's dominant mates?
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  • From ANON - reba on April 03, 2013
    One part story and one part hot sex scenes. Lovely concept.
    I do hope those are all the mates because I am loosing the overview.Meaning it starts getting confusing and boring.
    And that would be a shame whith such a hot story.
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  • From ANON - i can't help myself on April 03, 2013
    Still loving this story. I was happy to see the cock ring explaintion and was happy you could readbwhat i wrote (auto correct on phones is a prude)

    I love where this story seems to be going. Maybe its the fact im a woman, but i love fics with preg and m-preg. However, maybe you could look into doing a little more character based chapters? Especially with these two New mates i personally would like to see more character interaction that dontt only involve delish sex scenes. Not that there's any complaint with thone. I understand your trying to get them all set up and fully harem-ified but maybe a chapter or two to remind us of all the mates and the personalities you're painting? Either way, can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From Wicked-Lovely-17 on April 03, 2013
    loved it :D
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  • From DrarryPerv on March 24, 2013
    I'm loving the story line, but the continued use of dominate as opposed to dominant when referring to Harry's mates is a bit grating. Not enough to stop me being excited for the story to continue, but something to watch out for.
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  • From ANON - D on March 23, 2013
    Its a really good story! Keep it up.. I can't wait till the next chapter.. please don't take long! Its a breathe of fresh air.. its not like the typical style story.. I really like Dominate Harry..
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  • From ANON - Brandi on March 22, 2013
    Thank you for the congrats! :) I love the twist you put in this story! Poor Theo, Severus, Sirius, and Reggie- I hope they all have a happy ending after their past childhoods. Keep up the good work and update soon!
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  • From jami_lee on March 22, 2013
    WOW!! Can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - AR on March 21, 2013
    Interesting. I'm liking the premis--looking forward to cubs, although I know you said not everyone would be duffing it all at once, right away. A few grammar / misused words sprinkled about. The most consistent, and I've noticed this in a few other fics, is "shuttered" instead of "shuddered".

    shuttered past participle, past tense of shutter
    Verb
    1.Close the shutters of (a window or building).
    2.Close (a business).

    Have you given any thought to possibly adding more mates in the form of original characters, possibly breaking passed the Gryffindor/Slytherine houses? Will you explain why Harry transformed into animals (snake and deer) when going to claim his first two mates? Do you have an ultimate goal in mind for this story, or is it simply whatever takes your fancy?

    ~AR


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  • From ANON - i cant help myself on March 21, 2013
    Like this story! It's very smutty yet also sweet. One small thing that always bothers me though, coco ring don't keep guys from cunning. It's a common misconception made by authors who have probably never used them in real life. All they do is keep a penis erect even after organism and at most delay said organism. Not a big deal, just something for me to nitpick. Regardless, I enjoyed reading and can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on March 21, 2013
    This was surprisingly good.
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  • From ANON - Diana on March 21, 2013
    Update soon!
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  • From dragonlilly1993 on March 21, 2013
    OMFG I LOVE THIS STORY!!! I CAN'T WAIT TO READ WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!
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  • From ANON - emma elizabeth pressnell on March 21, 2013
    i love it!!!
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  • From WolfPup5683 on March 19, 2013
    wonderfull
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