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Reviews for Angels vs Veelas

By : Rachael_
  • From MotekElm on March 01, 2017

    A nice start. Annoyingly abandoned


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  • From ANON - lunalumos on October 25, 2016

    where is the rest? oh where where?????????????I desperately need to read it...please please have mercy on your readers..write write write.........


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  • From DB1 on April 02, 2013
    @5. Yay an update. More please.

    DB

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  • From demonsangel on April 01, 2013
    Draco, you have issues man. You might as well just cut out the tough guy shit lol. Hermione's patience only go so far before she uses allowed spells on you.
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  • From ANON - AtlanteanDiva on March 24, 2013
    There's to much tell and not enough show. Also, you have way to much detail, she pick this up, put this down,etc. It's good to have detail, but you want to include more inner dialogue. Remember the sense, touch, taste, and smell, adding these to your descriptions will help the flow.

    thanks for updating
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  • From DB1 on March 24, 2013
    @4 good story looking forward to more.
    DB
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  • From ANON - Citten on March 23, 2013
    I love this story!! :) i am so excited to see what you will be writting! i am also hoping that you will be following your pattern and not jump a lot! i love long stories and ones that give lots! :) i am also really happy that you will be posting frequently! yeah!! :) cant wait for the next chapter to see what will happen next!
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  • From ANON - AtlanteanDiva on March 23, 2013
    I hope you continue this story. I'm love a jealous and slightly dark Draco.
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  • From ANON - Sinfully_Yours on March 23, 2013
    Wow! Draco is such an arse. You would think the war would change his attitude but evidently not. Hope he gets brought down a notch or two(or ten) Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 21, 2013
    This is awesome!
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  • From ANON - Cat on March 19, 2013
    I like it so far, good job! I'm excited to see where you take this! post soon.
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  • From StarrCrystal on March 19, 2013
    MORE! I need more to survive!!
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  • From duckducknbear on March 19, 2013
    I am totally loving this story!!! Can't wait to see where it leads too! Thanks for updating it so fast too. :)
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  • From demonsangel on March 19, 2013
    Wow, Draco is a bigger ass then before o.O One would have thought he would learn some humility by now. Obviously not. I hope he gets taken down a notch soon. Great chapter, can't wait to read more!
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  • From StarrCrystal on March 18, 2013
    UPDATE! UPDATE NOW!
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