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Reviews for Survival of the fittest

By : Sasunarufan13
  • From ANON - staar on November 01, 2014
    I'll start with thank you for the update.....Really don't know about Hermine there ok...Ron well you know that just someone needs to get him out of all the misery .....and so when can I see when they all get to kill the headmaster...he really just needs to go away....loved the presents they got for each other ...well now I'll have to wait again :):):):):):)):):):) see you soon !!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - staar on October 17, 2014
    I wonder who was the kid that found out that Harry was prey's and his the one that told the headmaster ...wow going to get really bad thanks for the update and see you soon !!!!!!!!!
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  • From AidaLily on October 03, 2014
    I didn't think you'd have them break up. I thought you'd make Harry miscarry due to their time apart. I am glad that didn't happen. I love Luna in this and how much she does to help everyone. I don't think people give her enough credit. I am happy that they are back together and think someone surely should have checked Harry for spells if Draco was under one. The adults really should have realized there was probably more than one curse in that room unless he was hit after it.
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  • From ANON - staar on October 03, 2014
    so Harry had a curse on him...can I ask are all the adults with them blind !!!!!! or what man if it was something else he could have died well hell !!!!! even the animals didn't get it....shit !!!!!! and if you would have separated them I would stop reading !!!!!!!!!!!!! or not thanks for the update and see you soon again !!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - staar on September 20, 2014
    Update yes !!!!!!! my god Draco needs to get to harry and fast !!!!!!!! they need to talk...FIX THIS NOW !!!!!!!! harry know it was a curse so why is he acting so ?? ok done talking , see you soon ok loved it !!!!!
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  • From ANON - Meechypoo on September 19, 2014
    Im glad that Draco was smart enough to understand he needed help and went to Severus. Now knowing exactly what occurred will help Draco when he finally can corner Harry long enough to talk but now he will have the guilt of knowing how deeply he hurt his mate! Let's hope they can get through this too!

    ~~ Meechy
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  • From ANON - Kat on September 19, 2014
    Awesome!!!! Just like RL. When bad stuff happens angst occurs. I love this story!!!
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  • From ANON - staar on August 30, 2014
    OMG after reading the first part(story) now this one I'm in love with them !!!!!!!!!!!! but please don't wait a year to update this I'll die !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! after all the shit they have gone thought your really need to fix it ~~~~~~~~~` see you soon with another update please !!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Meechypoo on August 29, 2014
    Though Harry will struggle past his insecurities and trying to fight through what happened, I have no doubt he will prevail. Just when he starts to truly doubt, Luna will be there to give hm some advice and a swift kick other ass to make him see the truth. Draco will be hard pressed to help Harry recover but in the end he will prove to Harry that he is loved and can be trusted! Ok...too mushy? Nah, I'm the HEA kind ofmgal and I will always hope that love wins out over doubt!

    ~~ Meechy
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 18, 2014
    Just an error I saw between the title and summary, but how can someone who can either impregnate women better or is able to get impregnated better a bigger threat than Voldemort? Fitness is the capability of reproduction: Survival of the Fittest being the competition of who can leave behind more offspring. If the strongest leaves behind one but the average leaves behind ten then the line of the strongest will die out while the legacy of the average continues on.
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  • From blackicekitten98 on March 14, 2014
    Story definitely hooks the reader!
    Looking forward to the next chapter if not.

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  • From littlepanther on March 13, 2014
    kyaa!!! Can't wait for the next chapter. That ravenclaw bastard better be thankful he's in azkaban where i can't do him harm *smiles evilly* btw. It's too hot, i needed to get rid of my blanket after reading the sex scene lol.
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  • From littlepanther on March 13, 2014
    geez...if were Harry when Sev's explaining that difficult stuff my nose would have bled. :) how can h say its simple??? Lol haven't read for a long time, is there anyway for me to know if you updated the story? Thanks! Would love to read more of it.
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  • From ANON - easyreader on February 08, 2014
    Orange!! lol Really nice chapter. Can't wait to see how Harry handles actually showing.
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