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Reviews for Slightly more perverted "Harry Potter" Reboot

By : Artemis1990
  • From ANON - Anon on May 17, 2013
    it looks like you are going to do the same bash ron story, and gave harry all the girls. i hope not.


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  • From ANON - Irongray on May 15, 2013
    Excellent storyline, well thought out, and masterfully constructed. Can not wait for the next installment.
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  • From ANON - Steve on May 12, 2013
    Good story, very good, eloquent even. Smart pacing, believable situations, looking forward to whatwhere you are going with this.
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  • From pfeil on May 11, 2013
    Apparently that recalled "vibrating broom" toy was more canon than they realized :)
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  • From ANON - someguy on May 05, 2013
    I'm really liking this story so far, I'm not seeing much of the "more perverted" part, but I guess that's why you said "slightly". Keep up the good work, and don't stop the updates.
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  • From Aleria18 on April 30, 2013
    Honestly Artemis little things, tiny things. Like instead of Hogwart Hogwarts. Other then that yet another great chapter, and don't listen to those asking you to pick up the pace I think your pace is just fine. I'm enjoying the story as it unfolds. Again thanks for sharing your ideas!
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  • From ANON - Dylan on April 30, 2013
    i think u r doing an excellent job and i didnt mean that the slow pace was a bad thing i actually enjoy stories at this pace. keep up the good work and if u can post updates more often if not its cool i just love reading it so much i want to read more and more
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  • From ANON - bill560682 on April 30, 2013
    now as i see hogwarts ron costing his house 150 points would be a very likely reason for people who care about house points to teach ron a lesson as in a very painful lesson. now of course ron being ron would blame harry for the fact he got cursed 5 times a day every day for a month but it would still end up getting the message threw ron's thick skull not to do ANYTHING to lose house points again and if you do then made sure not to get caught. an none of the weasley brothers will stick up for ron since percy is likely the ring leader of the prank group and the twins are no stupid enough to start an inter-house war over the event.
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  • From joeparas1988 on April 30, 2013
    lolwhat?

    Did you really just say that falling from 3 feet is a life-threatening injury? Surely a typo?

    And they're eleven, you should probably start writing them as eleven year olds, not late teens. How can Daphne be an 'Ice Princess' at her age?

    The whole story would read much better if you had kids start school at sixteen, but seeing as you haven't, you should probably suss out how much we're supposed to suspend disbelief while reading, it's getting a tad bit ridiculous.
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  • From WilliamLamb on April 30, 2013
    I like the fact that you're taking your time getting to the more sexual parts instead of rushing them right to it. It's a refreshing change of pace.
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  • From ANON - Chandra on April 30, 2013
    Very good story. PLease try to post upadtes faster
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  • From ANON - Dylan on April 26, 2013
    great start if a bit slow for this site but i still cant wait for the next chapter and maybe continue the story through year 2 and introduce luna i think she would be able to fit quite nicely
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 19, 2013
    Too slow paced. Not perverted enough.
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  • From ANON - Peitro on April 19, 2013
    I love it so far I am looking forward to you to keep writing it
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  • From Aleria18 on April 18, 2013
    Much easier to read now. Thank you so much! Not sure that you need any more help. I am very much enjoying your story so far and can't wait to read more. I really wish this site had some way to let you know when a story you were interested in was updated. Anyway I digress, lovely story so far. Love the differences you have so far made from cannon.
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