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Reviews for The Problem With Spitting

By : hot_stuff11
  • From Persy on July 16, 2021

    Very, very NICE!!! HOT and SENSUAL!!!!!


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  • From xxfawnpwincessxx on September 07, 2015
    Absolutely riveting. Deliciously soaking with beautiful grammar and hot sex.
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  • From ANON - Cara on June 21, 2015
    Well snapes a bit of a tool there isn't he? Great story! Well done and bravo to Hermione!
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  • From ANON - RiskyBusiness on October 13, 2014
    Positively delicious. Thanks for sharing :)
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  • From ANON - Mari on August 16, 2013
    Really hot!
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  • From ANON - Aaron on July 13, 2013
    I am impressed nice she spit in his face he came on hers nice touch.

    Thinking about a sequel I think Miss Granger needs more detention to see the error of her ways.

    neilin
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  • From ANON - RhiannonULlewelyn on May 27, 2013
    Omg that was friggin hot. I love this pairing because of its complex dynamic. Snape is not a teen boy, he's lived a hella life & knows a hella lot. Hermione would not be interested in a boring/brainless guy. So love this.. Dark & erotic as heck. Could definately flesh this out with issues of power & control. Theres so very few solid dark/in character fics with this level of plot and substance. Thank you!!! Keep it sexy.
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  • From ANON - Esther on May 11, 2013
    so damn good! absolutely loved it! please write more! this was not your average snape/hermione story.
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  • From ANON - fruit on May 09, 2013
    Holy shit that was so dirty. I loved every freaking second of it. Can't wait to see more!!!
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  • From ANON - Nixer on May 08, 2013
    I'm so sad this is over! Can you not be persuaded to write one more chapter?
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 26, 2013
    Ahh I love it! Please update. :)
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  • From raineandrews on April 24, 2013
    Oh wow! HAWT! Seriously, so far it is very steamy. :-)
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  • From Kayrox133 on April 20, 2013
    That was fantastic and very stimulating! Next chapter please, oh pretty please?
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  • From ALANRICKMANFAN21 on April 19, 2013
    willl this be only a 2 chapters story?? Honestly, she was dealing with enough already. Her one-time crush constantly eating the face of one of the most vapid girls she had ever had the misfortune of knowing? Check. A pandering, political professor constantly trying to "collect" her? Check. Big, bumbling bear of a boy, in whom she hadn't the slightest interest, trying to get in her knickers? Check. The conviction of one of her best friends that a certain blonde Slytherin was the root of all evil? Check.

    also i thought she was in love with Ron so why is she feeling this way about snape?? wet knickers when snape is near her??
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  • From HeavyMist on April 18, 2013
    very tastefully written! Your wrting is poetic, and the use of the crude words is done at the right time, giving the whole scene more allure, and at the same time avoiding the vulgar. kudos, great job! the hinting at " rape" IMHO is not necessary, though it was through Hermione's consent the issue was evaded. However many readers might object, so I understand your notice. Hope to read "la pi
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