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Reviews for The Only True Lords

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - delia cerrano on April 28, 2013
    Waiting for Draco to be closer at least to Harry. Wonder why Harry can tell what's going on with Severus sometimes but not always. Must be the intensity of his emotion?
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  • From SomethingElse on April 28, 2013
    I like this twist on how to keep the Slytherins out of Azkaban, mostly.
    Harry's Lordship could be seen as a lesser, or worse, punishment for their involvement with the Dark Side.
    I wonder if the centaur thing was a premonition or just weird logic and loyalty on their side, though they've never been particularly fond of Harry before.
    Great job as always,
    Bob.
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  • From Sasunarufan13 on April 28, 2013
    Interesting chapter. I guess Ginny doesn't trust Harry that much anymore after hearing what he unconsciously did to Blaise - though why she thinks he could hurt her when she isn't even part of the bond is beyond me, unless she thinks he would suddenly snap and attack her with his wand or so.

    I admit I had to laugh a bit at Harry's description of Snape when the latter admonished him for his use of 'sir'.

    I wonder what the rest of the, well, bond partners think of the whole situation. So far we've mainly seen Blaise, Snape, Draco and now Pansy as well reacting to the bond, so it'll be interesting to read how the others will react.

    Anyway, another great chapter :) Looking forward to the next one
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  • From Leania07 on April 25, 2013
    Interesting, I'm curious to see where you go with this. I hope you update soon, thought if you said every 5 days I might hold you to that ;)
    I'm not quite sure why they all believe being tied to Harry is such a bad thing; they're Slytherins, if a Gryffindor is supposed to protect them, wouldn't that be a comfort that anyone who hurts them would have to answer to Harry Potter, and over 85% of the wizarding world wouldn't want to cross their Savior. I can understand Severus' reluctance, after all he's still suffering from his misconceptions about Harry; but the other's don't know him at all. Well I'm curious to see where you take this, and I'm wondering who the pairing will be (or is it a multiple?). Keep up the good work, I look forward to more.

    Leania
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  • From ANON - Jien on April 25, 2013
    I'm curious what sort of consequence Blaise's action will bring about.
    Nice chapter :)
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on April 25, 2013
    Is Zabini's arm burned horribly or just just burned? Maybe it was just internal & nothing shows? Seems like everyone is just about hysterical and really just need to sit quietly talking to see what everyones concerns are & what ideas they all might have for getting rid of the bond rather than assuming things.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on April 25, 2013
    about #3,...

    I take it Zabini was used as an example to show how fruitless it was to resist the bond
    between Lord & vassal? And how stupid actions causes unecessary grief.

    Harry needs to start laying ground rules or they will all test his patience...and he will
    wind up killing them accidently out of irritation. Nice to see the centaurs make a brief appearance
    in your story.

    ...and must Harry remain short throughout his young life in this story?

    Other than that, it's good to see you take the 'Harry as Dark Lord' theme and put it in this section,
    so folks can get a taste of something new, I don't think I've said that yet. If I already did, well here
    it is again! All in all, I'm enjoying myself.
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  • From Sasunarufan13 on April 25, 2013
    I would have expected Draco to be the one to rush in doing something to try and undo the bond. Didn't really expect Blaise to be the one, but it made for an interesting change to read things from his perspective (because you usually write the perspective from Harry's, Draco's or Snape's side)

    I do wonder though - would the bond have killed Blaise if Harry hadn't been able to find a way to stop the punishment on time? Because I'd think that trying to kill your Lord would be the worst possible offense that would be punished by immediate death.

    Anyway like always I'm curious to read the next chapter :) For some reason, I'm really interested in reading Snape's reaction when he discovers what Blaise tried to do.
    Anyway, great chapter :)
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  • From ANON - Jien on April 24, 2013
    Lovely chapter. Will stay alert for updates :)
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  • From ANON - Nathoca Malfoy on April 21, 2013
    Fantastic! Please continue! Don't take too long to update!
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  • From ANON - heartstar on April 21, 2013
    your welcome wow hopefully harry isn't to late and blaise didn't do something stupidmaye he left instead? more when you can hun...
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  • From ANON - SP777 on April 20, 2013
    about #2...

    An interesting second 'start'. I get the feeling there will be a LOT
    of walking on eggshells here, until intentions are truly accepted & clear.

    Hopefully, Harry becomes the best Lord the Slytherins have ever witnessed and
    ones who grows in strength and grace. But that's down the road....
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  • From ANON - Rainbow12004 on April 20, 2013
    I love this story. I can't wait to see what happen next.
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  • From ChrisF. on April 20, 2013
    Harry is such an idiot. Im not saying he has to like it (I would) but he needs to grow up and deal with it, not whine about it. Besides, I think most writers forget that Harry is British. The Monarchy and royal protocal is ingrained in him, the idea of being a Lord shouldn't be that farfetched for him. I'm glad to see you updated so fast. A lot of fics on AFF get lost and forgotten because you can't track them like FFN. Sadly FFN isn't loading for me. Cant wait for more.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on April 20, 2013
    I think this could be a lot of fun! Poor Snape the third Overlord!! And he feels such a need to protect Draco and the rest.
    Where did Zabini go? Can he just leave without his lords' permission? I guess he can since he did except maybe he has to be punished now?
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