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By : KittyMama
  • From ANON - jburks on May 27, 2013
    I would just like to say that I didn't even notice the title being spelled wrong, so I feel you must have been flamed by a grammar Nazi. I also want to ask if you noticed that you posted chapter 3 again as chapter 4? I do like how this has started and I cannot wait to see where you go with it.
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  • From ANON - Diana on May 19, 2013
    Please, update soon!
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  • From ANON - Nici on May 10, 2013
    Hi there,

    oh, some family time for Harry. Rather fastgoing, but cute anyways. I especially like that Harry calls his fathers by different names (father for Sev, Dad for Fenrir and Papa for Remus).
    What about Dumbledore, Ron, Hermione and Co? Do they know about Harry being friends/family with a bunch of Deatheater? I hope they are treated well in the dungeons, well, except for the dungeon part.
    I don't know whether or not you realized it, but you uploaded the third chap twice.

    Greets
    Nici
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  • From ANON - lilly n.g.k on May 10, 2013
    y is the last 2 ch.s the same?
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  • From ANON - Diana on May 10, 2013
    You posted chapter 3 twice...
    Update soon!

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  • From ANON - Yume on May 10, 2013
    Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Diana on May 03, 2013
    Update soon!
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on May 01, 2013
    i am glad that i made you feel better :)
    i liked the new update and cant wait to read who fallowed him and is being held captive :) please be at least Ron i want him to be tortured a little 'giggles evilly' don't hurt Herminie she can be turned to the "dark side" and be an asset to them in my option. just offer her a promise of greater knowledge and a big library and i think she will be game. lol. i will admit that i was confused when he called snape "Father" but then it made sense. maybe Ginny fallowed him like the stalker that
    she is and can now be tortured and used by the death eaters for "Fun".
    did you know you posted the same chpter twice?
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  • From ANON - kyuubichild717 on May 01, 2013
    why is chapter 3 repeated?
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  • From Leania07 on May 01, 2013
    Okay, first you posted chapter 3 twice; second, HUH??!! I think you skipped the explanation on where Sev/Remus/Fenrir are Harry's fathers, how he knew/when he found out, and how/when Harry became friends with Draco and Lucius. Short chapters, and you seem to be rushing; take your time to explain things a bit more. You're doing good other wise, and things I've been able to follow with are really interesting. I offer to be a 'sound board' if you need (someone to bounce ideas from and suggestions), I don't mind taking time from writing my fic to assist. If you wish to, e-mail leania 07 @ gmail . com (no spaces). Keep up the ideas and attempts, things only get better with time.

    Leania
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  • From jami_lee on May 01, 2013
    do u know that chapter 3 and 4 are the same??
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  • From BAFan on May 01, 2013
    Um, hello? *raising hand* Chapter 4 is just a repeat of Chapter 3, as in you downloaded the same chapter twice. Thought you might like to know. ;-)
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  • From lissa on May 01, 2013
    Don't know if its just aff screwing up again, but you have 4 chapters up, and the last two are the exact same, word for word.
    Other then that Im looking forward to the next chapters
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  • From Leania07 on April 25, 2013
    Congratulations, you made me speechless. I'm having a difficult time thinking of what to say; I'm 'expanding my horizons' by reading other things besides Snarry (which I absolutely adore), and I thought to try this Harry/Voldie story since some of the others in the past have been decent enough. At first I thought, 'how can Harry speak Parseltongue while in cat form?' then I nearly smacked myself. Duh, cat's CAN hiss; it probably sounds more like a heavy accent (like when Fluer speaks), since it's a different species, but not completely unimaginable. There has to be a chapter that gives a bit more back story to how Harry wound up there, but I understand if you don't want to write one. I can use my imagination. Keep up the good work, look forward to more.

    Leania
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  • From ANON - Nici on April 24, 2013
    Hi there,

    nice beginning, even if it does seems to be a bit rushed but honestly? Who cares! The part with
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