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By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From ANON - Scheclair on May 17, 2013
    So sad and at the same time so sweet... I love your stories!
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on May 16, 2013
    Poor Lucius. Losing one's mother, no matter the age, is painful and difficult. No matter what he did in the past, I am glad he has support and a friend in her. I am sorry he is experiencing grief, but I hope they find some joy from it. Thank you! HG4eva
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  • From DB1 on May 16, 2013
    @11 really enjoying this story. Please update soon
    DB
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  • From ANON - Alesia on May 16, 2013
    I really appreciate the way you have put this story together. It's almost like glimpses or pivotal points that when you looked back on them you realized they were significant but maybe didn't at the time. They only have another month. Humm The sweet side of Lucius was quite endearing and the fact that Hermione just wants to be there for him is as well. I can't believe we only have 3 more chapters to go.
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  • From ANON - Toto on May 16, 2013
    I'm so happy to see that you are writing again!
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on May 15, 2013
    that's sad :( we finally meet the women who made Lucius who he was and then she dies. i am saddened by how much Lucius is affected by this turn of events. he loved his mother a lot and i hate to see a grief stricken Lucius. but this will bring them together because she was their for him when he needed her most. hopefully . please update soon
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  • From ANON - Sampdoria on May 15, 2013
    Yuppi. I am trilled that my hunch about this story migth had more chapters here at AFF than at GE, I have had a wonderful time reading the submitted chapters. You still wield magic through your pen (or pc, but you get my gist:-)) this story is just as wonderful as your others stories have been and I can't wait to read the rest of it.
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  • From ANON - Leah on May 15, 2013
    I'm so glad you're back! I've missed your writing! I really love this story, it is a little slower than some of your other works, but it flows with the tone you are going for.

    I like the characterization of Lucius and Hermione! I really enjoyed the love story between Roman and Juliana was lovely and well done!

    Lucius' relationship with his mum was touching and a great way to humanize him, so many times fanfic writers don't really give the reader a reason to see him as more than a death eater, you allowed us to see him as a loving son.

    I can't wait to see what happens next! I know you just updated a few minutes ago... but you need to update again. :D
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  • From LadyBlueEyes on May 15, 2013
    :( I would've liked to see more of Ariadne Malfoy. I am so glad Hermione attended the funeral, and I love Draco in this fic. He justs accepts her and includes her in a way that Lucius won't. Not because Lucius doesn't like her, we know he does, but he is like a throwback to another generation, where they kept their thoughts and feelings hidden. Me thinks Ginny nudged Hermione in the right direction by talking about Lucius not having anyone there for him. I wonder if Ginny has noticed Hermione reactions to Lucius or the mention of him and has decided to push her friend gently in the direction of her happiness?

    LBE
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  • From ANON - AtlanteanDiva on May 14, 2013
    I don't usually read Lumione, but I quite like this.


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  • From ANON - Alesia on May 14, 2013
    I love the way you did this chapter. Umbridge was the perfect foil to Hermione's display of peek. I can't wait to find out what the headlines will say about that! Know that they have gotten together a third time, I wonder what they will do. :)
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on May 13, 2013
    i love it ! these two are amazing together and you just write them in such a way that i cant get enough of them!
    i enjoyed the argument/quickie in the cloak room with frog face right out front. that made it even better! wish i could have seen her face when they walked out.
    Herminie has a point in her argument he should not take the whispered bullshit options of a society that doesn't know him at all. and just say "well i cant change what they think". he does deserve respect all the malfoy's do. past is past, let it go. and if someone is different(god forbid)then you once thought, accept that you were wrong and move on. but we cant accept that we were wrong in books or real life. which makes me sad.
    please update again soon i cant wait to read more .
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on May 13, 2013
    Hi, I hope Umbitch has a coronary over what she just heard! I think these two are so far from divorcing it's not funny. lol Thank you, hon!! I am really enjoying this. :-D HG4eva
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  • From ANON - Nightqueen on May 13, 2013
    OMG!! LOL Absolutely Fabulous!! Well they showed her!! I loved the entire chapter from start to finish. I love Hermione and Lucius together and no one writes them better than you!
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  • From LadyBlueEyes on May 13, 2013
    Chapter 10:

    Shagging in the alcove! Hot and fun!! =) Im glad Draco wasn't a prat to Hermione, it makes things a tad bit easier for her. I KNEW her feelings had already started to change. She defended her husband to that fat cow Umbridge as is her right! I guess Lucius has spent so long being a social pariah he forgot what it was like to have someone defend him. Poor guy...I don't think Hermione is done defending him though. Great chappie!!

    LBE
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