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Reviews for The Heirloom

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From ANON - Donavon on May 12, 2013
    How wonderful to have a new multi chapter story from you. I find the plot very good and as per usual you have drawn me into the story and will be looking forward to reading more.

    Best wishes, hope all is fine with you and yours.
    Donavon.
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  • From mageemi on May 12, 2013
    Ch 6:

    Oh I am really liking this premise. It makes sense in a twisted kind of way, that the Malfoy's family would have such iron clad magical contracts. So strong that the magic is still in effect years later. Poor Hermione, or maybe not. Perhaps they will both find exactly what they need. ;)
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  • From mageemi on May 12, 2013
    Squeees a happy little fangirl squeee! I am so happy to see that you are posting a new story. I have missed your fanfic and ofter re-read my old favorites of yours. I am loving this so far, especially this last chapter. Lucius is just being so damn contrary I want to choke him. Can't wait to see what's up next. :)
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on May 11, 2013
    That was so sweet. Wow. I loved his closeness and tenderness with his mother. But, I think he may have lied to her by mistake, as I don't see an easy, amicable divorce in 6 months. :-) Thanks, hon!! HG4eva
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  • From ANON - Lu on May 11, 2013
    After reading your sshg I thought to check and see if you'd put anything else up. Was so pleased when I found this, and another to read. Love this, your Lucius is always good. Looking forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - Alesia on May 10, 2013
    I completely adore the idea that Lucius' mother is still around. Your description of her is wonderful. I can see her in my head. I really want her to meet Hermione. Do I really have to wait two days for the next chapter?
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  • From LadyBlueEyes on May 10, 2013
    Chapter 8

    Lucius' Mom! We dont know anything about her in canon, and I dont think I have read a fanfic yet where she is part of the story. She obviously loves her son and he loves her. Sweet chapter and I like where Lucius' thoughts about Hermione are centered!!

    LBE
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  • From ANON - Flaming Moth of Doom on May 10, 2013
    Good to see you back and writing again! You're one of my favorite fic authors here :)

    I usually ship Draco/Hermione, but you write Lucius so well, it's a delight to read this story. Looking forward to more!
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  • From LadyBlueEyes on May 09, 2013
    Chapter 8:

    *sigh* (again) LOL Will we ever find out what Lucius is thinking when he is looking at her face at 4 in the morning? I would think Hermione's responses and reactions to his touch were quite unexpected to him. I, like Hermione, wonder why he stayed. Regardless I think him staying, and the second bout of lovemaking has changed their relationship more than either of them realize at this moment. Harry and Ron's reaction were typical. Harry has a hero complex, even if he never asked to be a hero in life anyway. He needs to remember Hermione is a big girl and can take care of herself. Ron is just...Ron. Predictable...lol. I do adore Hermione's defense of Lucius and how she put her boys in their place. Me thinks she has started to care more than she knows.....

    Love
    LBE
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  • From LadyBlueEyes on May 09, 2013
    Chapter 7:

    *Sigh* This was sweet and tender. I think I said it before, Lucius is a very proud, arrogant man. This side of him that you have shown makes me love him all the more because it isnt the kind of behavior he shows the outside world. Can I have a turn with this Lucius?? ;)
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on May 08, 2013
    Interesting how her confusion with him turned to defense of him in a hot second. lol That night must have been amazing! ha ha ha Also very interesting that he chose to do it a second time. Methinks these two are not on the road to divorce. :-) Loving it! Thank you, HG4eva
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  • From ANON - Alesia on May 08, 2013
    Okay that chapter was short and sweet and amusing as Hell. Ron and Harry really don't know her at all do they? After all this time they should know better than to tell Hermione not to do something. The fact it's in the papers complicates the idea of the divorce in six months. Lucius won't want to be divorced. I wonder if it is Draco that is going to bring him to the stark reality of being stuck with her.
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on May 08, 2013
    great lemon scene i loved it and i have always been of the option older man are better in bed then the younger ones ;)
    please update soon i cant wait to read what happens the morning after!

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  • From ANON - Alesia on May 07, 2013
    Wow they are going to have a hard time walking away from that, and really why should they? Why do I feel like there is more to this than they know currently? Did Roman and Juliana invoke other magic Lucius and Hermione aren't aware of yet?
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  • From ANON - sethiel on May 07, 2013
    i love this story... cant wait for the next chaps!
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