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From KikiLoa on May 03, 2021
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From ANON - bill560682 on July 23, 2013
PAIRINGS

harry is pestered by collin in

collins first year about wanting

pictures of harry so harry decides

to come up with an idea that he

thinks collin will NEVER go for

and that is 1 picture for 1 sex act

such as a blow job or anal sex.

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collin and dennis decide to cheer

harry up after his crappy yule tide

dance date as well as give him a

christmas present he will never

forget which starts with them

each giving him a good morning

blow job and then harry fucks

them both in the ass.

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dennis decides to take his and

collin's harry watching to the next

level by sneeking into harry's

dorm while he is in the shower

and then dennis decides 'i have

gone this far may as well get a

peek at him in the shower an if i

am luck get to see him wank off'

unknown to dennis harry has

started placing wards up when he

is undressed to prevent attacks

from people like malfoy so harry

knows he is being watched and by

who so decides to give dennis

something worth watching. an

once dennis gets into

daydreaming about harry harry

then decides to make dennis

dreams come true by fucking him

hard and fast.

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collin finds out that purebloods

use muggleborns as sex toys and

begs harry he will do ANYTHING

for harry to protect him.

THEMES

lily gets payed by james father to leave the country and never come back and as a result james ends up married to bella with 5 kids and lily ends up investing her money wisely an turns the 5 million galleons into 20 billion american dollars.

tom riddle could use that silver tounge of his to charm his way into being minister of magic an change things from within by doing things such as hiring those who would be death eaters in other worlds to work in law enforcement.

ron could get sorted into slytherin due to his greed and end up being a malfoy flunky.

draco since loyalty is a hufflepuff trait he could get sorted into hufflepuff.

dumbledore and grindawald could remain allies and end up taking over the world.

harry's soul died holloween of 81 but voldimort took over his body when the killing curse cost him his body.

what would be interesting would be to see what the muggle and wizarding world under different rulers? such as if germany had won the second world war along with japan and italy. what if russia had taken out germany and taken over all of main land europe and asia as well so that russia went from what is now france all the way to what is now japan? even the wizarding world has to do international trade to get things like potions supplies? how about what america would look like if the south had won the american civil war? maybe the goblins win against the wizards even though i think they already have won every war. since common sence says the wizards would have taken over the banks and all the profit said banks made if they had won. why would the goblins want it to look like they lost is simple goblins like 2 things profit and war if they write the history to say they won then the goblins still get the profit but no more war.

how would the books of harry potter be different without different people in it. such as no dumbledore or hagrid or granger or even sirius or peter the rat. take out just one person an the list or even one of your own an think how would things change? would they be better without hagrid to take the blame for tom all those years ago or would an even worse dark lord have come along? maybe without hagrid sirius would have gotten to take harry with him and thereby never went to prison that is for you all to figure out since only your minds can call the shots of how things happen.

how would snape being bitten by remus when they were back in school have changed the harry potter books? how would the vail sending sirius back to 1975 change the world, now we know sirius would at least try to kill peter but how would that affect the books as we know them? does he get to kill peter or does peter live an how does what he knows about the future come into play does he write notes to people an pay the goblins to deliver them at a much later time? what would have happened if peter had been taken to the castle in harry's 3rd year to stand trail have changed things. what if grindawald had stayed and married dumbledore all those years ago would grindawald have been a good guy or dumbledore become a bad guy? if grindawald had become good an married dumbledore would they have adopted young tom riddle an if so how would that have changed his life if it did at all?

how would the world have been different without lily or james in it? such as lily marries snape instead of james or james marries one of the black sisters instead of lily? how would these changes unfold on the harry potter books we know? would dear bella have ended up a death eater? would bella have given harry over to the dark lord to save herself? if bella did give over harry would the dark lord still have lost his body an what would have happened after that? would snape have become a death eater had he married lily? would snape have turned harry over to the dark lord? if he did how would he and lily's lives have chenged would they still be alive to raise him if the killing curse still backfired? would lily have taken harry and left snape forever after the downfall of the dark lord?

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how would the world change if harry were kidnappen at 6 monthes old, before his parents could go into hiding? an once he is kidnapped is placed on the thrown of both magical and muggle russia? an yes i know there is no longer a czar of russia other then myself since i claimed the title in early 2008 but those big bad meanies still will not give me my country back. so i as czar william the first of russia i do allow harry potter to use my title for this story idea. now harry would most likely be tutored at the royal palace from a very young age but would the dark lord still try to track harry down or would he go after the other child and maybe end up making longbottom the boy who lived? an you have to remember as czar harold the first of russia he can not just run off to a boarding school in a different country. an good old dumbledore would have no control over him nor would his birth parents as he is the legal and rightful ruler of his own country as decided by magic it's self which even dumbledore can not over rule. of course the internation confederation of wizards will not want to try to step in since that would end up leading to world war 3 with the use of muggle weapons in it. which in the end mean everyone just pissed in dumbledore's lemon drops an he is not a happy man.

i think a good way to take down the ministry is also the simplest, a compultion charm placed on all the lifts. with the idea to admit every crime you have ever done written in blood to the DMLE and the wizarding newspapers. now of course people like malfoy sr. who would most likely have good if not great mind shields would be less affected if affected at all but with the others spilling thier guts he would be finished as well along with fudge and most of the rest of the ministry. an if you wanted you could then pay a visit to every other ministry as well one by one. an with the downfall of so many crooks the only ones left to fill all those spots will be the halfbloods and muggleborns an once they are in power change all the stupid, biggoted and outdated laws for new fresh laws. such as truth potions every 6 monthes for every member of the ministry.

what i think would be funny is when tom riddle decides to start gathering his forces back in the early 70's is he is met by a force even he can not bully namely the mob. an they show tommy boy what fear really is by putting 2 bullets in the back of the head of anyone tom tries to get to join him. an yes this is the wizarding branch of the mob but they have picked up some things from thier muggle counterparts. i mean you want to see tommy boy throw a tantrum like a 4 year old that is how you do it. an as a result he ends up finding out who the real boss is and it is not tom riddle. so for the most part they just slap old tommy boy down and tell him he does not get to play with thier toys.

how would the world be different without the law saying you had to keep magic a secret? would there even be a ministry of magic an if so would it be under muggle control? would the muggles have wiped out witches and wizards or would they be the new house elves of the world? would wizards have wiped out the muggle or would they be the house elves of the world? would wizards and witches married more muggles so that the whole world is now magical? would the world have ever heard the names albus dumbledore, tom riddle or harry potter? if tom riddle had been created would he still have become lord voldimort? these are but a few of the questions that can come from such a question i bet you could come up with even more?

the steam engine has been around for over 2000 years, so what would have happened if the library at alexandrea had not been distroyed but used to it's fullest by starting the industrail revolution over 2000 years ago. how would the wizarding world have coped. or is it that the wizards did see what would happen an they are the ones who burned it down out of fear of what would come. an of course if the muggles were allowed to advance 2000 years ago who knows they may have figured out how magic works and learned to control it so that the oh so powerful wizards are now the house elves of thier time with thier magic controlled by thier muggle masters.the muggles could have had the space race 2,000 years ago and have all but left earth totally by now?

now if muggles can use there technology to find out on what waves magic operates on they can then not only track it by send out a signal to disrupt it thereby bringing an end to the magical world without having to so much as fire a shot.

i think it would be smart to buy up all the house elves out there then use said house elves to capture the death eaters. i mean who would think of being afraid of a simple little house elf. also it would funny for the rich snobs to have to get off thier bums an have to do some work for a change.

now what no one ever seems to mention or ask is what happens if the parents do not want thier child to go to a magical school or if the child themself does not want to go. do they kidnap the child as they did in harry's case or do they memory charm the parents to make them think they agreed. an what if the child does not want to go do they memory charm them to think a magical school would be great an if so what if any legal recourse do the people have after that, none i bet since memory charms are perfectly legal.so there is no kidnapping charges since all wizards are biggoted and prejudist against muggles.an no i do not care what they say thier actions speak louder then thier words since a wizard will not think twice about wiping any muggles memory. wizards think themselves god verses muggles.

now what would be nice would be sirius did not really go to prison as was thought but spent this time as an unspeakable along side mr. weasely. i like the stories were arthur really spent his time during the first war as an unspeakable. of course you could use that as the reason remus was gone for more then 10 years as well have remus and sirius as partners.

can you use the room of reqirements as a oversized time turner to go back in time to fix the past and if so who has used it as such? maybe dumbledore to tell his younger self things?

is there a problem with time turners? yes the light side may not want to use them for fear of messing up the time line but the darkside does not have the same fear so you could in theary end up with 5 darklords at one battle. you could also have the darkside go back an warn themselves about the outcome of a battle. an yes i know they were all supposed to have been distroyed in the d.o.m. but who says none were removed before that by one of voldimortes people. he does have at least one person working at the d.o.m. an why did none of tom's people not just use a levitation spell to float the prophesy out into a bag an take it to thier master.

how was crouch jr. able to make the tri-wizard cup into a portkey that could get threw the hogwarts wards without the headmasters help?

now what would the wizarding world be like if the american indians killed of the white man instead of helping them when they came over?

HOW COME NO ONE WRITES TOMMY BOY THE WAY J.K.R. SAYS HE IS EVEN HER? SHE SAYS HE IS SMART AND CUNNING, SO WHY DOES EVERYONE WRITE HIM LIKE A TWO BIT THUG? HE WOULD BE THE KIND OF MAN WHO WOULD TAKE OVER THE GOVERMENT FROM WITHIN NOT WASTE HIS TIME AND MANPOWER FIGHTING THEM IN THE STREETS. HE WOULD GET SOMEONE LIKE MALFOY AS MINISTER AND THEN FILL THE DEPARTMENT HEADS JOBS AND AURORS WITH DEATHEATERS AND THEREBY MAKE THEMSELVES THE LEGAL AND RIGHTFUL GOVERMENT. THAT WAY ANYONE SUCH AS DUMBLEDORE TRYS TO GET RID OF THEM THEY CAN LEGALLY HAVE HIM THROWN IN PRISON.

now the big question is why tom is so lazy and stupid? logic says the first thing you do when you get your body back is wage all out war. go after the arours and there families an since only a third of them will be working that means 2/3 are at home attack those homes an kill them and thier families. then you go after the ministry workers and wizumgot people you do not like and thier families an last but not least you go after the hogwarts students and thier families so that by the time harry is ready to start 5th year at least half the wizarding population of great britain are dead. but no you can't do that it would make sence. an don't say it is because you only have a very small army because the minute you start wiping out the law enforcement people will side with you out of fear. an if you are going to say we only have 6 people then send 3 two person teams or 2 three person teams, an you do hit and run tactics.

now what i would like to see is some sort of vengance law to were the purebloods like malfoy can get 4 or 5 people an go and wipe out a family and get a way with it because his family honor had been insulted. i mean we know the pureblood wizards like malfoy do not fight fair an such a law would be just the kind of thing they would come up with to make mass murder legal. an no i am not saying it should really be used by harry but it is the kind of thing you would think a scumbag like draco would try to use thereby giving harry the legal right to kill malfoy, crabbe, goyle and maybe even snape.

now one were the light never has a chance to win. harry did not distroy tom in the chamber of secrets because tom went and hid back in ginny. several years later say 2 years after ginny gets out of school tom decides to kill her off by sucking out her life force then he goes and creates 6 horecluxes of his own 3 that are simple stones that get dropped in the oceans of the world and 3 diary's. those 3 diary's are then given away to repeat the same thing so that before long you have 300 tom's and 900 horecluxes. of course these tom's then have to be killed in the proper order youngest to oldest because once they create there own horecluxes if you kill them then they just become disenbodied souls looking for a new home just like the first tom did.

now everyone always seems to have luna lovegood reading her father newspaper. now what would be funny is if it turned out that it was really a muggle stock report she was ready an that lovegood inc. was one of the richest companies in the muggle world.

question? how did the fake mad eye moody ever get to any order meeting IF said meeting happened at grimwald place? i do not know that it was in use at the time but if it was how would he get there?

now how would life be different if dumbledore was late for his meeting with treluarny an thereby no one ever heard the prophesy.

how would life be different if snape was late an never heard the prophesy to tell the dark lord?

how would life be different if harry, ron and granger all ended up dead at the hands of the troll in first year? would hogwarts end up closed?

how would life be different if tom riddle had gone to prison back in the 40's for opening the chamber of secrets? would there still be a dark lord out there in the 90's an if so who?

what would have happened if the monster from the chamber of secrets had killed everyone it came across in harry's second year?

how would life be different if the students charged snape and so thereby dumbledore with assult for him allowing thier potions to blowup on them? snape is a potions master and dumbledore an alcamist so they both should know how to banish a simple potion before it becomes dangerouse? an i am sure the hospital wing and the heads of houses have told him enough times about potions accidents that he should know his teacher is assulting students with the use of potions by not banishing the in time.

what would life be like if cedric was the only one to take the cup at the end of the tri-wizard tournament, an thereby no one ever found is body?

what if crouch jr. did manage to get away at the end of the tri-wizard tounament with harry?

what if crouch jr. got found out before he was able to get harry's name into the goblit of fire at all?

what if harry refused to go with hagred at the age of 11? would someone else have shown up an try to talk harry into going an if he still refused kidnap him and change his memory so he thought he agreed?

what if granger never came back to hogwarts after her first year? or better yet after she went home for christmas break of her first year?

what if harry questioned hagred more from the start an found out sirius black was his godfather who got sent to prison without a trail an got sirius a good lawyer?

what if voldimort did get the sorcerer's stone in harry potters first year an as a result of getting a new body with the stone also got a whole soul? that he then begins to use to create clones of himself with. so that he starts by making 5 horcluxes with then uses the stone to give each of them a new body with a whole soul, so that his clone army splits thier soul into 7 pieces 1 as a horclux for themself and 5 new clones. thereby the clone army grown from 5 to 25 to 125 to 625 to 3,125 to 15,625 to 78,125 for a total of 100,130 troops with 100,130 horcluxes spread threwout the world.

now with the room of reqirements could harry not ask it for a spell that would distroy voldimort and his horcluxes all at the same time. the room is supposed to give you what ever you want, right?

why not have the room of requirements download every known spell ever created into your mind and sort them for you so you can easily recall them all?

the forbidden forest is to dangerous for students to enter but as a punishment we will force two 11 year olds to go into it alone at night with nothing but a dog to keep them safe. who else thinks this is stupid? would be an easy way to kill of harry and malfoy.

what would harry potter world be like if all the muggles had been wiped out by the black death several hundred years ago?

why not use dueling dummies as your own private army? set them to their strongest level an set them loss.

now if you could get your hands on the goblit of fire you could commit mass murder at will. all you have to do is confound it like crouch jr. did then add peoples names having everyone listed as being from a different school. then have the first task start 5 minutes after the drawing of the names and last 20 minutes. the when none of those named show up they all die, plain and simple.

how come voldimort does not just use mind conrolling curses or mind conrolling potions to get the international confederation of wizards to vote him as ruler of the world. that is a much simpler plan then spending 100 years taking over the world one country at a time. an the magic of the i.c.w. would see to it that it was legally binding.

now why no one ever mass murdered the sltherines is beyond me. it's not like it would be that hard to do. you seek into their common room late at night an put silencing spells around their beds then murder them. then you drag their bodies into the common room and stage an internal house war. an make sure you use the dead students wands to cover the room in spell fire. then you just have to clean up the dorms and have someone erase your memory of the fact you killed them and you get away with murder.

how would the wizarding world have been different if tom riddle had used people like malfoy to take over in a legal way instead of threw war? such as getting tom voted head of the wizumgot and as head of the international confederation of wizards?

how would things be different if hogwarts had closed forever at the end of chamber of secrets school year?

how would things have been different if sirius has caught wormtail an taken him to the ministry in 1981 or even at the end of book 3?

how would things be different if malfoy had bought the job as minister of magic instead of hiring a flunky like fudge to take the job?

how would things have been different if it was found out at start of 5th year that umbridge WAS really part human part toad?

what would the wizarding world be like if tom riddle had gotten the job as defence against the dark arts teacher back when he tried out for it?

what would have happened if ron weasley had gotten himself killed by the troll back in first year?

what if harry ended up a cripple for life as a result of the fight with the troll? he could get sent back to his so-called family and killed.

now what would happen if hagred had taken dudley instead of harry when he went to pick up harry before his first year? an of course the second dudley sees harry's trust vault he is going to agree that he is harry potter. now if dudley is a squibe he may be able to get a spark or two out of a wand. an as far as not looking like a potter, well people tend to see what they want to see. so they WOULD see lily's cheek bones in dudley or james mother's blonde hair or james father's eye color or lily's father's weight problem. they will be looking for things to prove them right not things to prove them wrong. oh an dudley is smart enough or greedy enough to know if his parents get thier hands on HIS new money that he will see very little of it ever again. so dudley does go to hogwarts and flunks himself out or to be more correct he flunks harry potter out. so that he can get back to being dudley dursley with a secret inlarged trunk full of british pound notes he had the goblins change over for him. so as far as anyone in the wizarding world knows harry potter is a fat blonde kid with no scar because his muggle family had it hidden who flunked out of hogwarts as a squibe.

now as far as the tracking charms placed on muggleborns or muggleraised children talked about in book 7 dumbledore would have had to removed that spell from harry sometime after his run in with the dementors but before the end of 4th year. otherwise since the spell tracks all magic done around a person there would be proof peter was alive and that tom riddle was alive as well.

now how would the harry potter stories be different if the cupboard under the stairs that harry lives in also held things like bleach, an as a result harry's mental growth was greatly affected. to were he is in the retard classes at school an is lucky if he can walk and talk at the same time without drooling all over himself.

what would happen if no one ever knew about the dark lords horcluxes at all? an yes i know he would live forever, but would he really? would he really want to stick around for 5 billion years till the sun blows up? how many thousands of years can you play ruler of the world before it get boring? or what if the muggles nuke the planet an you become the ruler of a planet of one? since the dark lord is not in favor of muggles then there will be no space travel to find new worlds to rule over.

now what i would like to see is dumbledore having a really bad day, as in he sends nine teachers to talk to the new muggleborns and all he gets back is nine dead bodies since all the parents of these children called the cops. an when the teachers raised their wands to obliterate these cops the cops shot them all dead. an yes even in england that cop is going to show up with a gun when you call and tell them you have a crazy person here who broke into your house claiming to be a witch trying to kidnap your kid.

what would life be like for sirius black if he got his name cleared at the end of harry's third year only to find out he himself has kids? an i do not mean just one or two but a dozen children by a dozen different women. sounds like someone forgot to use his protection spell.

ron is overlooked by his family as just one more son. he sees how his mother just loves his little sister ginny so ron starts dressing and acting like a girl in hopes of getting some of that love. so since ron has spent 7 or 8 years acting and dressing like a girl what will happen when he gets to go off to school. he could end up being the school sex toy which would get him both attention and money both of which he wants badly.

now what would be funny is if you took the sorcer's stone and tossed it in the ocean. why this would be funny is flummel worked a long time to create that stone and as long as the stone can turn normal water into elixer of life then over time the whole worlds oceans would become elixer but flummel would never live to see a whole world of imortals.

now if harry gets sent to a different world that would mean both he and voldimort become immortal. since one of them has to kill the other unless of course you decide to allow harry to die by his own hand.

i say you get the location for the sun or the moon and send ole tommy boy there by portkey. one portkey works the same as any other, feed in the location then power it up then activate. it would just take more power to reach the moon or the sun is all. an if the portkey ran out of power mid way threw the trip oh well. his body will be dead and his soul will be unlikely to ever be found.

i would love to see stories were rich purebloods who are claimed to be dark put poor halfblood tom riddle in his place. an no his claimes of being related to slytherin would be worthless just as they were worthless to his mother's family and they were purebloods an tom is but a halfblood. the only thing tom has going for him is that he has no family to worry about were as the purebloods do have family tom can threaten to kill. if you think about it they think tom riddle is a muggleborn when he shows up at age 11 so they would treat him as one and likely be raped by every slytherin in the house all the time from age 11 threw at least 15 when he gets his prefects badge.

i would love to see what it would be like if the muggles got involved in the war with voldimort and they win, and by they i mean the muggles win over both the light and dark wizards.

snape was in love with james which is the reason his patronis is a dow to james stag. now snape finally got his dream come true to be with james oct. 31, 1981 by tricking lily to leave the house then snape took her place and thereby snape and james died and lily lived.

now why has no witch or wizard ever traveled to space? they can make brooms fly, they can create wards to protect themselves so why not create a sailing ship that can sail to the moon?

how come ravenclaw house does not win the house cup every year? think about it, if a teacher gives 10 points for a correct answer or for getting the spell done as one of the first few students then ravenclaw should get the most points because they are smart enough to study ahead.

one thing i never figured out is how tom riddle found out everything he knew? how did he find out he was related to slytherin? how did he find the chamber of secret's? his name was riddle so unless he got his hands on his birth records he would have no clue as to his mothers last name. an it is not likely his mothers name would show up in the book who's who of the wizarding world. an i do not think many people would be talking about the gaunt family since they are poor and near squibes with no real proof they are related to slytherin other then thier word and the fact they and slytherin could speak to snakes. it is not like they are in control of slythins vault and thereby get 1/4 of all the tuition money payed to hogwarts every year. i mean if i told my son i was related to slytherin and he then told my grandson the same thing then my grandchild could swear an oath to be related to slytherin since as far as he knows he is, an that is what the oath is testing is if he is telling the truth an as far as my grandchild knows he is telling the truth. i mean i doubt the gaunts are the only ones who could claim to be related to slytherin since purebloods interbreed it is likely half the purebloods in england to claim the same thing.

now wizards can make lepricon gold as ludo bagman did to scam those who won at the world cup. so why don't witches and wizards do this all the time on the muggle market to make billions of dollars? an yes the gold may vanish in a few hours but who cares you got your money from the muggles. an with a little magic to change your looks and a fake passport an your are homefree. the muggle done shoved the gold into his safe and has records of it on video so not your problem.

i think harry should have nothing to do with remus, i mean think about he he claims to love and care for harry but where was he the whole time harry was growing up living in a cupboard under the stairs? no owls from lupin before hogwarts or even after he starts hogwarts until they meet on the train in harry's third year. forgetting about harry for 12 years does not sound like someone who loves harry to me? on the idea dumbledore had him hid in the muggle world is bullshit. lupin has had to work in the muggle world for years do to the fact he is a werewolf which of course would be totally stupid since no one knew he was a werewolf till snape opens his mouth at the end of third year. but lupin could have used transfiguration to make himself a suite and a fake badge and walked into any police station in the country saying he worked for scotland yard and had them look up petunia's name or her husbands and thereby known within minutes where they lived. he could have checked tax records to find them, school records to find harry i mean he was using his real name after all. finding harry would not have been hard but lupin never looked. what answer can you give ? what mrs. figg oh yah she watched out for remus to show up but missed over ten years of child abuse on a child she watched at least several times a year if not more often then that. i mean hell lupin is a wizard and can become invisable for merlin sake. an black is worthless as well, trying to murder snape by use of remus to do the killing in thier sixth year as some kind of a so-called prank, an people wonder why snape hates them. i think the answer is rather clear someone tries to murder you and get what a slap on the wrist and told do not do that again? an snape is forced by dumbledore to keep it a secret about what happened, sounds like a reason to hate a lot of people. an one of the first things sirius tells harry is about trying to kill snape in 6th year at hogwarts as if this is something to be proud of.

now i wonder why no one uses i mind control curse to have someone else just shoot dumbledore in the back of the head with a reducto curse then have the person kill themself? i mean what is that to simple of a plan for a wizard to think of? sounds like wizards have never heard of the idea of K.I.S.S. meaning 'keep it simple stupid'.

the downfall of the wizarding world is simple. the answer is a travel guidebook. you can likely buy these in most wizarding book stores if one of these fell into the hands of the muggles they would know every place they needed to attack. a book like that would give directions how to get everywhere even going so far as to give the muggle addresses and street names of locations in case the witch or wizard finds themselves among the muggles they can get back to the magical world.

how would the world of harry potter have been different if voldimort had heard the whole prophesy and thereby taken young harry prisoner instead of trying to just kill him. an of course voldimort would make it look as if he killed harry then put him into a cell with no human contact what so ever. little harry would grow up to be a wild child who if he ever did get set free say 20 years later would never be able to speak because that part of the human brain only takes imput up to about age 10 and after that the ability to learn to speak is lost forever which has been proven with other wild children. now these children can very slowly be tought things such as to read simple words over a long amount of time. so for harry to get to say n.e.w.t. level at hogwarts would likely take 30 more years of very hard work.

now there is a spell used by magic users to keep magic contained. this is a fact, think about it how much magic is used in diagon alley in a day? that much magic has to have some bleed off so that only part of the magic goes into the spell and that is why muggle items do not work around magic. so why are there muggle buildings around diagon alley? the bleed off from the alley should short out muggle items for blocks in each direction, and thereby be a big red flag to the muggles saying 'here we are'. the same goes for the ministry and the hospital which are all in london. this could be used in one of 2 ways, to make it is muggle items CAN work around magic or as a weapon. if i hit you with that spell it would block your magical core from being able to send out magic for you to do spells. as to why purebloods have never thought of this to use on muggleborns is because purebloods do not think outside the box as in i could use i sticking charm to pin you to a wall then a summoning charm to summon your heart and kill you. they only use spells as they have been used for ages and ages not in new ways.

take a muggle notice-me-not and change it to be a wizard notice-me-not could be great fun. you could rob wizards blind since the goblins who CAN see you will care less about you going to this persons vault with them. you follow the person to thier vault all just start filling your bag and when they start to leave you leave with them an before long you have half the gold in wizarding great britain. you could also use it on people you do not like such as draco malfoy and have it tried into his magical core so that he fuels it and password protect it. an malfoy would think this was great for a while till he got bored of pulling pranks and killing people he did not like an if you portkey him to a different country like china he is screwed. an yes i know draco MIGHT be able to steal a broom and fly back to great britain but first he needs to find a magical broom to use and even then at say 200 miles per hour for 10 hours a day it will take him a few days to get back. but i do not think he speaks chinease nor does he know a translation spell and even if he did he can only talk to muggles.

you want a great thing for evil dumbledore, have him use his power as headmaster to sign muggleborns over to his personal sex slave trade. an after 30 or 40 years when you are to old for that to make him money he turns you over to his curse department were he is payed to allow you to be cursed by anyone who is willing to pay as long as none of the curses are permanant or fatal. once you no longer are any fun to the guests there you get turned over to the death department were you are cursed with the worst curses wizards can come up with as long as they have the money of course. now some muggleborns are allowed to join the wizarding world after getting out of school so that no one gets the wiser but most are claimed to have gone back to the muggle world to live out their lives.

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From ANON - BAFan on June 08, 2013
Ch. 2

The right application of pain? That sounds ominous. I don't quite trust this Tom Riddle.
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From ANON - moodysavage on June 07, 2013
Omgosh awesome awesome chapter... And my beloved Snape! Evil! More story more story! What went wrong with Severus isactually more intriguing than what went wrong with Harry. And Tom must be a lot older?
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From ANON - ladylilymae on May 30, 2013
Love so far can't wait 4 more
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From ANON - Angelica Faerie on May 29, 2013
Oh, please update this! I've always loved your work ever since you started posting on AFF. The final paragraph of this first chapter has me itching to read more, but it doesn't seem to be part of your regular updates yet. I hope that changes. I can't wait to see what the other worlds have waiting for Harry.
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From ANON - rabias on May 29, 2013
Wow the ending really threw me off. I'm excited to see how that came about.
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From moodysavage on May 17, 2013
I LOVE this concept! It is a lot like sliders which I absolutely loved way back when. It will be a lot of fun to read when you post :)
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From ANON - heartstar on May 17, 2013
wowo Intersting I would love to see more.
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From BAFan on May 16, 2013
Okay, didn't expect that. Now I'm really intrigued!
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