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Reviews for a not so golden life

By : eleonora_kleopatra
  • From ANON - delia cerrano on October 10, 2013
    So good. Reread the first several chapters and 1st read of the last three. So glad to see everyone that I've never liked get found out and I hope punished. I've always wondered why everyone expects an unexperienced boy to actually fight a highly experienced very bad man & all his henchmen.
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on September 29, 2013
    glad she was willing to believe the truth. and be helpful in the trial. cant wait to read the Draco meeting update soon !!
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on September 26, 2013
    Enjoying this story a lot. It's really getting into it now! Draco is coming into it (romanticaly I hope) & I'm dying to see who all is involved in ripping Harry off...Hermione is'nt one of them I think. She just got to Hogwarts so she wouldn't know anyone yet to plan anytrhing with.
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  • From ANON - Phoenix5 on September 26, 2013
    Hello,

    I like this story, but I think that you forget that Harry's vision was correct in the room at Gringotts and he don't wore glasses anymore.
    I know that because I read it just minutes ago...

    continue with the good work, I'll be reading until I fall asleep, cause it's 1:28AM
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on September 26, 2013
    with harry being resorting i think that working on his relationship with Draco is a wonderful idea. i am eager to find out what will happen at the meeting.
    i think that Herminie should be good and be his friend. i think that she should be tricked, then realize that she is being used. i think that maybe she can spy on the people who oppose him and let him know when they are going to make a move and what not. just my idea.
    thank you for writing this and updating this story and i am awaiting your next update.
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  • From ANON - Sara on September 26, 2013
    Cool chapter, please please please don't let Remus be a traitor ;(
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on September 22, 2013
    Enjoying your story a lot! Hope you will write more soon. It must be frustrating to not have all the equipment you need to do your stories.
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on September 21, 2013
    happy to see an update. i am happy that he is going to be resorted and love his new pet. please update again soon i want to read more ....
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  • From djaddict on September 21, 2013
    Not sure how to pm here.

    I beta. If you are interested email me pepmart1@comcast.net and we can discuss.
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  • From djaddict on September 21, 2013
    This is one of my favorite types of stories. I love it when Harry finds out he was betrayed and something actually gets done about it. I think your premise and story line are really good.

    That being said, I have a bit of critisism for you. While I believe you are not a native english speaker, ( I inferred that from your author's notes) you still should use some type of spell check. Incorrect word choices are more easily ignored rather than consistently misspelled words.

    Also, you need to think about in-story consistency. In the most recent chapter, Severus and Harry have a conversation about re-sorting and how Harry should have been in Slytherin. This conversation already happened a few chapters ago. In addition, there is the issue with Harry's eyesight which was fixed really early on in the story and then a few chapters later he was dealing with his ugly eyeglasses again.

    It is a good story, I just think it needs some finetuning and perhaps a beta.
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  • From ANON - Nessie on September 20, 2013
    I think this story has potential, but I've only just started reading it. The only thing that I might suggest is getting someone to read it for clarity, consistency, grammar, and punctuation. I find (for myself at least) that these things make a huge difference in a readers ability and desire to stick with the story. If you'd like assistance in these areas please feel free to contact me.
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  • From Sheylenna on August 26, 2013
    I'm rereading this story and I remembered something that REALLY bugged me... when Harry got his Potions, Oblivates, and various other things fixed by the Goblins he also got his EYES fixed. But in THIS chapter Severus says that he can't get his eyes fixed till he was 16 and he would need contacts. I'm Confuzzled.... (P.S. I probably would have reviewed the first time I read the story but at the time I had forgotten I had a account here.... And the only reason I found my account today was because of a whim.)
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  • From jules3677 on August 15, 2013
    Just found this story. It has a great beginning. I am interested to find out who else is involved in the abuse of Harry, especially from the Weasley family. Looking forward to reading further chapters of this story.
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  • From ANON - whitebuffalowmn on July 16, 2013
    What a great story! I'd like to read more of it. Please continue on with your updates as often as you can.


    thank you and kudos!
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  • From cullengal101 on July 11, 2013
    hey
    I love the story so far please keep updating
    cullengal101
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