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Reviews for Blood on the Ground

By : pepperdoc
  • From Dramionefan on March 07, 2015
    wow thank you so much, i love this story so so much, especially how Draco dominates her, ugh i think i have a domination fetish or something lol, *blushes* i loved the kinky bdsm scenes in here for sure *pouts* i so need me a man like Draco *sighs and drools dreamily* i am and will forever always be a Dramione fan til my dying day lol :D i love em both together, they so defintely suit one another for sure...

    love from

    Charlotte
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  • From cpetnm on August 11, 2014
    That was a great story! You write in a very engaging way.
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  • From erdufylla on August 23, 2013
    I don't normally write reviews, because, well, I'm a horrible fanfic reader. But you seem to be under the misguided impression that no one is reading your work, or if they are, they aren't enjoying it. And I'd hate for you to hold that belief and continue with that misconception, because what you write is fabulous. There's a lot of fanfic out there that's terrible -- poor or non-existent plot, awful writing, etc., so it's a real pleasure to come across an author who CAN provide a really enjoyable read, like you do.

    I loved this story, and I can tell you've got more to offer. I can't wait to read whatever else you might pull out of your sleeve. :)
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  • From ANON - Sammy on August 02, 2013
    I know I just submitted my review, but then I got all creepy and stalker-ish and clicked on your twitter link in your bio and it says YOU ARE IN TEXAS. Where at? (again, I'm being a total creeper. Good lord. I am the type of internet people our parents warned us about...) I, too, live in Texas! DFW area, actually. And now this is where it gets incredibly obvious that I make a lot of internet friends. Haha.

    So, yeah, being the creeper that I am my immediate thought was "OMG we could totally hang out" and then I mentally smacked myself. But yes. Small world? Ish? I mean, it is a very large state, but... yeah. I'm gonna stop ranting now. :)
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  • From ANON - Sammy on August 02, 2013
    Oh. My. God. Can I just tell you I love this story so much? I haven't reviewed a story in... years. Yeah. I am a lazy shit, I know, but you should be super happy cause your story was so good it forced me to review it. Wow. Just... HAPPYJOYSQUEELOVE! ...I sound like a teenager. Whatever.

    So well done. Such great character development. Such amazing images in my dirty little mind. AND I have mad respect for you being able to actually get a whole story posted while dealing with life in general. Ever since I've been married and living in the 'adult world' as some call it, I haven't been able to finish a damn fanfic for the life of me.

    Anyways, great job. Amazing story. I'm fangirling like it is about 5 years ago. I bow to you, madam.
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  • From ErisNight on July 06, 2013
    I can't even handle how sexy and good this was. Right up until the ending. I definitely enjoy the way you write and every chapter had me wanting to get to the next. I absolutely loved your Draco and god, I swear I was imagining if I had a chance to have a piece of him, he would never know what hit him! But alas lol, my love for a fictional character shall go unrequited unless i manage to bag Tom felton, die his hair and lock him away haha. :)I swear I've just spent the last 2 hours reading this straight through and cannot wait for your next Dramione! You are like seriously an inspiration for how I want to learn how to write!!

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  • From ANON - margiere on July 02, 2013
    That was a wonderful ending and great new beginning for Draco and Hermione. Their reunion was insanely hot and just what was needed after Draco's cruel imprisonment. Thank you a great story. I hope you write more soon.
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  • From ANON - AtlanteanDiva on July 01, 2013
    Your tenses at times are a little iffy. I also find Draco to be a bit to OOC for my taste. He's to much of a goodie goodie.
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  • From ANON - margiere on June 28, 2013
    Absolutely Incredible! I'm in information over load. After a 2 day conference, a 5hour layover and a suicidal taxi ride this just balm I needed to make my day.

    So Narcissa was the one to allow the wolves into Malfoy Manor. But does anyone know who placed the Imperious Curse on her to begin with? Lucius would be my guess because he was selfish to do it. I do hope that Draco can get over the trauma of his duel with his father and his subsequent death. Lucius was so insane and manipulative that his last word where nothing but poison.

    The depression Hermione is going through, is that normal for a Dom/sub relationship? Being very green to this lifestyle I don't understand her sever reaction. I get the pain of the separation but not how depression has taken a hold of her. Hopefully a good session with her Dom when he is free will sooth her frayed emotions.

    How is Draco during this separation? Do Dom's go through this same type of emotional upheaval when away from their subs? I've enjoyed this story so much, I don't want it to end.
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  • From ANON - AtlanteanDiva on June 28, 2013
    Well, it's good to know that the formal style of speaking is only for meetings.
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  • From ANON - AtlanteanDiva on June 28, 2013
    Hermione seems much older than her seventeen years, which would be her age if this is the end of the sixth year. It's not maturity per say, she just sounds like someone in her late thirties. Also, the characters speak as if they are ready to tread the boards. It's a bit to formal for teenagers, even in a war.
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  • From ANON - Grace on June 27, 2013
    Sorry to hear you've had a shit week. But I love your story!!! It's currently ten to six in the morning, I've stayed up all night reading this, that's when you know it's so amazing you can't put it down :)
    Can't wait for more :)
    - G
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  • From ANON - Vicky on June 24, 2013
    I am sorry for not reviewing sooner. I just found this story today and read it through from the beginning to this chapter. I was so engrossed in it that I didn't want to take time to stop. Fascinating in every way and very hot. I don't think Dom/sub stuff is for me, but reading about it does make me wonder because it's so arousing. I suppose finding a Dominant partner is important. ...Ron, even canon Ron, has always been prone to disloyalty and I am enjoying how you took this trait of his to the next level in your story. I am impressed by the communicative/prophetic power of the Dragon statue and the impressive magic you invented for Hermione to use on the wolves. Looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - margiere on June 24, 2013
    Thank you, thank you for such wonnderfully sexy chapter. You made my day. I even learned a new term. I had to google sub-drop and found a whole bunch of titillating terms.

    Hermione seems to be adjusting well to the new relationship and I'm impressed she is so secure in the 'lifestyle' change. She must have done her research because I was expecting her to freak out about being turned on by some of the kinky things Draco does to her. Draco's little show of jealous was terrific. He knows in his heart that Harry is a brother to Hermione but they are so close it would,it be hard to imagine them crossing the line.

    I felt so bad that little Pivione died. With the sweet little elf gone who can gain access to Malfoy Manor without Draco's permission? Are there our Malfoy relations or does anyone with Black family blood have access? Do those family marriage contract Hermione read shed any light on the possibilities? I'm not sure why others do review on this site but I have seen other arthurs get better responses from other sites. One in particular allows private messages, *fan fiction dot net* (I wish this one did because I have some many other questions). Just an idea.
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  • From ANON - margiere on June 24, 2013
    Thank you, thank you for such a wonderfully sexy chapter:
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