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Reviews for "To Change Your Life"

By : AnasumiHideki
  • From FieryPhoenix on March 01, 2015
    I wish you had completed this story!! It's fascinating and exciting and I love the idea of heroine going back to save some many! Please consider continuing
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  • From ANON - Squid on August 03, 2013
    I really love this story, and hope you decide to finish it. All the characters are quite lovely, and I'm enjoying how you're fixing everything - even past relationships gone bad. I'm quite interested to see how Snape as a Death Eater in this time goes, and find out what happens when Hermione "disappears." Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on June 23, 2013
    Poor Severus!
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on June 22, 2013
    I am so sorry about your ongoing illness, but I hope you are resting well now. Thank you for continuing this story, despite not remembering it. Wow! I hope you find more inspiration, because I love the story and look forward to seeing this all work out for them somehow. Thank you, HG4eva
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  • From Trelweny on June 22, 2013
    Sorry to hear of your hospitalization but I'm glad you're out now. Try to get some sleep. Just think: if this story so far is what you can do Without sleep imagine what you could do Rested.

    Hopefully Severus will be lucky and not have to do too many vile things as he becomes entrenched within Voldemort's ranks... and hopefully he rises through them quickly when the time comes.

    I'm surprised Remus managed to retain an expression of boredom with Hermione teasing Sirius... and Severus. I certainly didn't! So very funny! Cute too, in a way.

    Thanks for writing.
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  • From demonsangel on June 21, 2013
    Welcome back! Why were you in the hospital?! I hope you are doing better now. Get more sleep hun! Great chapter by the way, poor Seri, you're going soft. I can't wait to read more hun.
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  • From DB1 on June 09, 2013
    @13 wow loving this. A very different story!!! Update soon

    DB
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  • From Trelweny on June 06, 2013
    In chapter 5... if you're going by canon it's Regulus Black who steals Slytherin's locket. Unless you just skipped his first name, starting with his middle name?
    Speaking of Regulus we should see him around Slytherin common room sometime, even if he is younger than the primary characters.

    Thanks for writing.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on June 05, 2013
    I am hoping she's panicking over nothing and he's just taking a while to find the book. But, I am not thinking I'm right. Sigh... I am glad they got the cup so easily though and hope at least a few other things go easily, too. Thank you, hon! HG4eva
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  • From Trelweny on June 05, 2013
    Hm... I suppose a cat is more useful than say, an otter. ;) Severus the bat. Cute. I like how he is showing he is just as brave as he becomes later. I hope nothing bad happens to him at Malfoy Manor and that he returns soon to relieve Hermione's fears.
    I hate to agree with Severus on this, wishing as Hermione does that he could forgo the Dark Mark completely, but his idea seems to be the only way. Even having an animagus form he'd still have to know where Voldemort is or would be. I highly doubt any of them would want to wait until his attack on the Potters, giving them a known time, especially as Hermione as they know her will not be there to assist in any way. Although I suppose that IS an option, that leaves a lot of time for Voldemort and his followers to do terrible things.

    Thanks for writing.
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  • From demonsangel on June 05, 2013
    Sev, it is not nice to scare a girl like that. Hermione, you should have checked the map and saved yourself some frantic searching.
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on June 05, 2013
    Forget what I said about Severus and transfiguration, I didn't read your author's note for the last chapter until after I reviewed. I understand why you did it that way, so I retract my criticism of that part of the chapter. I realize I could delete the review entirely and start again, but it's a long review and I stand by the rest of what I said. Not to mention, it would be the fourth review I have made concerning the chapter before last and I refuse to do it again!
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on June 05, 2013
    Okay, my review from last night got lost, so here goes: It was very thoughtful of Severus to get Hermione a kitten to cheer her up, it was also thoughtful of Dumbledore to send the Marauders to amuse her. It is regretful that Snape may have to join Voldemort's ranks again in order to defeat him, but they may have no other choice. The rest of their plans are good ones. Now, for this chapter- I'm not surprised that Hermione almost became an animagus on the first go, but I am surprised that Severus did. I realize that the concentration needed to occlude as well as Severus does would probably help with the meditation needed to become an animagus, but you also have to have a talent for transfiguration and I'm not sure Severus does. Potions, dark arts, mind arts, yes, but not transfiguration. You also made the same mistake that a lot of fan fiction authors make- you have Molly and Author Weasley as members of the original Order of the Phoenix. They weren't members the first time around, because they had young children. Molly's brothers Gideon and Fabian Prewett, were members and Molly and Author probably acted as support staff and informers for the Order, but they were not officially a part of it and were not privy to any of it's secrets, nor were they entrusted with any missions. Other than that, it was an excellent chapter. It is ironic that Snape can become a bat, considering what his nickname will be in the future and Hermione being a cat animagus is perfect.
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  • From ANON - Cat on June 05, 2013
    This is really good, I've read a few time travel stories but this is a new spin on it. I really like it. I sort of hate that Sev has to do his but I get why. It's too bad they can't just like run into him at the store and off him with like posioned milk lol.

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  • From HarryGinny4eva on June 04, 2013
    I suspected that would be the case eventually. Sigh... I am glad she let him know he had her trust without question. He will need to know someone believes in him as things get harder. I loved that he got the kitten for her! Thank you, hon! HG4eva
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