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Reviews for Shrinking Potions, Silk Scarves, and a Dollhouse

By : onecelestialbeing
  • From ANON - littlemouse on May 26, 2016
    It's nice to point out Snape's age by some random moments that remind the readers that he is already 40-ish. And this mousy really loves the friendly banter of the two, to the point of obsession with the idea of time-travelling. I really would love to see the two as equal in age. Though I have no qualms with the huge age-difference in terms of these two. Overall, its really cute.
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  • From ANON - FasIkbenVanEyck on October 31, 2015
    Great as always OneCelestialBeing!!! Write more, please
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  • From FieryPhoenix on March 02, 2015
    Another resounding hit!! This had me giggling out loud and grinning madly! Fabulous indeed... What I wouldn't give for a Monday like this!! ;)
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  • From LadyHemlock27 on June 23, 2013
    awesome! thanks for sharing such a funny and sweet (in a deranged kind of way) story
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  • From ALANRICKMANFAN21 on June 13, 2013
    PLEASE TELL ME THAT ISNT THE END TO THIS SEXY BRILLIANT STORY???
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  • From Trelweny on June 09, 2013
    ooo... I'm jealous! :laughs: What a cute notion!

    My dollhouse furniture was better made than most of my real furniture too. I kept them, most of them being made of some sturdy metal. Unlike the house itself which being a cheep plastic affair only had the uniqueness of its shape going for it.

    Very fun story. A delightful read. Thanks for keeping Severus snarky.

    Thanks for writing.
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  • From ANON - Missycam on June 09, 2013
    Love every minute of this fab story!
    Thank you!
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on June 09, 2013
    That was deliciously fun! Thank you. I love the fact that you left him rather crude, but still made him loving. Wonderful! Thank you, HG4eva
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  • From CryingCinderella on June 09, 2013
    Oh most impressive indeed. Your descriptions are beyond aesthetically pleasing and the whole event from the build of their friendship to their conquest is pleasing. Well done!
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  • From shsa0702 on June 08, 2013
    Absolutely lovely! I really enjoyed the creative and unique story plot, these off-the-beaten-path stories always seem to carry so much more to them. I almost felt like Hermione there with how drawn out their coupling was, but believe me when I say it was delicious torture! The witty banter between the two kept them wonderfully in character in a VERY non-canon type of story. Fantastic as always, I always know that I'm in for a treat when I see your penname heading a new story. Thank you!
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  • From ANON - from a worshipper of god on June 08, 2013
    Jfc i freaking love this story. Kudos to you
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  • From ANON - Sapphire Phoenix on June 08, 2013
    I applaud you for your inventiveness! This was a cheeky little story that I enjoyed immensely. Of all of the locations that I have read for the Hermione/Severus pair ups, a dollhouse has never been one of them. Well done.

    I did notice one term in your story that needs to be changed: the term is 'counterclockwise', not 'anticlockwise'. In fact, I don't think that 'anticlockwise' is an actual word.
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  • From Mrs_HH on June 08, 2013
    I got a twitching finger (wink!)

    Loved it my lovely xx
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