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By : goldhorse
  • From ANON - white dragon on June 09, 2013
    Thank you for this one-shot. I am an avid fan of your stories and this one is a classic example of why. You manage to draw me in with such vivid characters. They maintain a great deal of canon personality yet you are able to build new and interesting dimensions within your AU world. The consistent symmetry in this tale, where the last thing that hermione remembers is draco's eyes, acts as a landmark during their journey to growth. I know that writer's block stinks, and hope that you are able to break through. I just wanted you to know that I envy your ability to create an entire world that so readily envelops the readers. keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - margiere on June 09, 2013
    Beautiful! You brought tears to my eyes. Severus had such a tragic life but was blessed enough to find two extraordinary loves. It is truly disheartening that Ron let his hurt feeling cause such a rif in Hermione's relationships with everyone she cares about. You would think that after the war he would have gotten it that Life is bigger than pride.

    Draco's devotion to Hermione...sigh...he has so much love for her. But it must have been difficult to watch her pine away for Severus all the time, understandable but hard all the same. I'm glad he let his actions speak for him. Hermione got to see the measure of the man he is and not just the boy she remembered from the past. Nicely done!
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  • From Jewels812 on June 09, 2013
    Amazing...that is the only word to describe your story...I was mad at Ron, sad at her predicament, happy Draco was there for her, cried when she moved and comforted when they moved on...great job for no muse and can't wait for the next chapter in Fooling Fate
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