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By : ErisNight

From pepperdoc on July 14, 2013
Poor Harry!! That stupid bint almost killed him! *&$#&^%* So much cursing should happen! If I were Hermione I would turn Ginny into the Aurors myself! And BTW, right on, Harry! "Never want to see her again" Yeah! don't even give the bitch the satisfaction of your rejection!
And wait. Did Ron really just break up with Hermione? Seriously? What a jerk! Such a hot-head. This is what makes me hate Ron so much. Ron is a terrible character though, and your portrayal of him is even worse. I mean that he causes so much trouble, not that your portrayal is wrong or off, if anything you just made it into a more potant mixture of what makes up the Weasleys.Bah, I'm goin off on a rant, never mind.
The Wizard's Oath bit kinda threw me through a loop. Is the healer bound by something to keep him from spilling the beans on that? Like the HIPA (or HIPPA) laws? Ohhhh, I hope that doesn't come out and start a media shitstorm. It probably will though.... "Revenge of the Ginerva"? Blackmail the Healer and reveal Harry's darkest secrets? What a great title for a chapter that would be!
Also, I like that Draco's Dark Mark reacts to the Dark Magic signature. He reacted so strongly to it filling back in while he was alone, though. Is it shame? But he showed it to Hermione without hesitation. Hmmm... so telling of his feelings, I think. It's the little things that make me want to swoon over that beautiful man LMAO!!!
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From HarryGinny4eva on July 14, 2013
Giny, Ginny, Ginny... Sigh... Yes, I face palmed. Good gracious! What the hell was she NOT thinking?! I can't believe her desperation was that bad. WOW! But, if she wanted drama in their relationship, she's going to get it. For your part though, that was positively BRILLIANT! Draco wanting to comfort Hermione was subtle, but so sweet. And, "...she couldn
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From ANON - Victoria on July 14, 2013
I love this fic and I cannot believe that Ginny was such a dumb cunt. And to think her apology seemed so sincere. I have noticed that the fic has gradually slowed? Can we please get just a little bit of Dramione action next chapter? Not much to say other than I really miss feeling the Dramione love.

Keep up the good work. At the beginning of one of your chapters you typed the word 'one' when I'm pretty sure you meant 'once'. Also a sentence I have issue with, 'She was amazing in bed, the best and he had ever had.' I don't think you meant to put 'and' in there. I'm sure 'and' is just one of your default words. When I type there are certain words I default type or I want to capitalize everything. Common mistake just figured you might appreciate someone pointing it out.

Speedy update plz?

Victoria

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From ANON - appleblossum on July 13, 2013
okay for serious, I have been checking back for an update every hour for the past two days. I must have more!! The torture...it is acute. Please post again soon, I miss Draco and Harry already.
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From demonsangel on July 13, 2013
Wow, that was an easy out for Hermione o.o Though I doubt it will really be THAT easy. Ron is a lot like Ginny and may try and pull something. I love the thought Hermione had about how she can't really be that lucky. But I hope she remembers that she is happy she is "free" now. Can't wait to read more, interesting idea with Harry btw. Slave spell and botched love potion, creative.
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From ANON - Heather on July 13, 2013
I read chapters 13 and 14, and I must say I really enjoy the chapters that are full of characters' interactions and action. The chapters where characters discuss magical theory and history are a bit dry. I am really enjoying this story!
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From ANON - sheedy on July 11, 2013
Loved the last two chapters!!!!
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From ANON - Victoria on July 11, 2013
This review has been a little put off but I'm finally getting around to it. I don't remember which chapter it wa in and should probably do my duty as a reviewer so, hold on, ... Okay, now I'm back it's the beginning of Chapter 12 'The Truce' and Draco is remenicing on his realization of his interest in Hermione. You said, 'It had been humiliating to watch the Italian grin every time he was made to repeat it; but Draco had said it out loud and he had meant it. I like Granger. '

I pictured this slightly different, insteaded of grinning I feel like every time Blaise made Draco say it he would have burst out laughing. It wouldn't have been malicious just slightly funny for Blaise to hear that his best friend likes Granger! Whichever way it is written the jist was gotten and it was hilarious in my head.

Also I think I've stated this before in a review although I can't remember and am too lazy to go look through all the reviews to check but you should really consider posting on Hawthorn and Vine. I think you gain quite the following and possibly awarded (I would nominate you at least :) It's a strictly Dramione site (dramione.org) in case you didn't know)) and I feel that is where your fic belongs. I appreciate all the time and effort you put into writing this fic and I absolutely love it!

Victoria
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From ANON - buttercup on July 11, 2013
cant wait for more.. i so hope that harry ends up with luna, but please dont put ginny with blaise i truly cannot stand that coupling
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From HarryGinny4eva on July 10, 2013
Howdy! While I love canon-Harry and Ginny, and most fan fic versions, too, your Ginny needs to be bitch-slapped, so I am more than okay with him finding happiness and sanity with Luna. :-) Thank you for what was a very busy (in a good way) chapter! Let's see, from the beginning...

- I am glad it was Ginny because she needs to go even more than Ron does. He's stubborn, silly, and too big-headed, but he's not a manipulative beyotch. I am glad Harry couldn't get Luna off his mind and ended the night on a high. :-)

- Hermione realizing she was comparing Draco to Ron, and that Ron was losing, was very well done. ;-)

- Draco and Hermione having a nice night together and then that cute little moment was very sweet. I was almost as bummed as he was angry when Ron showed up the next morning. But, I liked that it made Draco want to be a better person for her. awww

- Harry figuring Draco out was cute, but I am glad he kept it too himself. And, EEK! to the bond they made with one another. Stupid boys! lol

- I, once again, LOVE your Blaise. Him teasing Hermione and ticking off Draco was artistic in its beauty. lol

- Hermione coming to finally understand that she was A LOT attracted to Draco was written perfectly for the character you've created. She was methodical, logical, and then emotional. Perfect! Now, to see what she dos with it... lol

- Ginny's manipulations... ARGH!!!!!!!!! But, all three of their reactions were just as expected. Though I did giggle to myself when Hermione didn't pick up on Draco's instant protection of her. Snort! Slowest "smartest" witch ever! lol

- The end was just right!

- the spoiler - Loved it. So, can we have 14 now? *insert puppy dog eyes here* ha ha ha

Thank you!! HG4eva, but not in your story! ;-)
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From pepperdoc on July 10, 2013
Draco being jealous was sooo funny to me. His arrogance was wonderful there. 'Pfft, I'm used to just snatching the girl away, it ain't no thang' is what I heard him thinking during that scene when he realizes he's jealous. Cracked me up.
Stupid Ginny. "Oh, I only invited one" Is really her defense?! &%$#@^&*!%
So then there's a drunken scene coming up? I love drunken scenes. They're gonna be drunk right? LOL I'm not being serious.
Your tone is changing slowly in these last two chapters, I can see you are becoming a much better writer as you work through these chapters. Maybe it's the formatting making me think your tone is changing, but regardless, the plot is becoming much richer and your tone is becoming equally richer. The character's motivations are becoming more clear by their actions and brief insights into their thoughts. Yep.
But, I am a bit confused on what you mean by the 'floorboard spell' Could you elaborate on that please? Is it one which makes the floorboards creak?
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From ANON - saman on July 10, 2013
Wow..I love the direction this is going. .at first I thought the pace is a little slow but its great as il be able to read more of the story.i check the updates to this story about twice or more in a day..>_
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From demonsangel on July 10, 2013
Ok Harry, you are just being dense and if you take her back now, you are just a fool. It's time to dump Ginny, same with Hermione and Ron. These two need to realize that love is a two way street and the only times the others concede something or make a sacrifice, is to keep them from being dumped. It's pathetic given Harry and Hermione are supposed to be intelligent >.< lol Great chapter though, I look forward to reading more as always.
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From ANON - colao on July 10, 2013
I'm soooo ready for Ginny to get the boot! Lovely reading, thank you!!
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From moodysavage on July 10, 2013
I liked that Draco and Hermione were both jealous. But I'm actually disappointed in Harry. I'm sure he realizes that him and Ginny are totally in different places now in what they want from the relationship. Harry should break up with her because it is more kind to end it than to continue with her oblivious to the fact that they aren't the same people they used to be together. What is he waiting for?
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