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Reviews for A Match Made In Convenience

By : ErisNight
  • From ANON - Heather on July 01, 2013
    Another great chapter. Thank you for the update.
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  • From moodysavage on July 01, 2013
    whoo weeee is Draco sexy as all get out... that loop spell idea was pure genius.
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  • From ANON - Victoria on June 30, 2013
    I love this fiction! The chemistry you convey between these two characters is amazing! On a more critical note you should really check your spelling better. Maybe enlist a beta? Keep on those speedy updates I really appreciate it!
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  • From ANON - Vicky on June 30, 2013
    This chapter was interesting but it disappointed me. Instead of seeing the new, powerful, magically gifted and compassionate Draco who was interested in something long-term with Hermione, we got the old manipulative mean-spirited Draco who ruined his chance for even a decent friendship with Hermione. This seemed out of step with where I thought this story was going. I hope it gets resolved soon or I don't see how these two can live comfortably in the same house.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on June 30, 2013
    Wow! That was HOT! I think he could make millions as a professional kisser. lol I am soooo looking forward to more progression between the two. Draco needs the hope and Hermione needs the reality check. I look forward also to seeing how he uses his time manipulation skills later. tee hee hee Simply delicious! Thank you, HG4eva
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  • From MagicWords on June 28, 2013
    I'm very much enjoying the story and will continue to do so as long as you keep posting!

    Regarding pacing--Regardless of what others think, THIS IS YOUR STORY. The pace is set perfectly for the way the story in your head is playing out.

    From an author's perspective, we write a story as the characters in our heads dictate and try to do them justice in the process. Despite the fact that the characters belong to JK Rowling, in this scenario, in this story, the characters belong to you and interact through you.

    For those who complain about the pacing being too slow, or the interactions too repetitive, I say, "To each their own. If lemon after lemon is what holds their interest, they might want to stick with stories that cater specifically to that and forego stories in which plot and the build up of sexual tension between the characters happens at a slower pace.

    I don't judge-- I read. ALOT...as in 150 pages or more per night after a full day at work.

    And, as I stated previously, I am enjoying your story and your take on the characters...if I have any complaint it's that I want MORE of your story and as soon as possible. (Well, maybe that's not exactly a complaint, but you get my drift :-)

    Keep up the good work!

    -S

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  • From ANON - Victoria on June 28, 2013
    What? That's not cool! Come on, we want more! But enough of that. You have a great way of writing. It's almost like I can feel you emotions in the words you've written. It's very good. It's like you pull me in. You trap me in the words and I think of nothing else until the chapter is through. Kudos! For you're first fic you have a natural talent and a way with words. :)

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  • From ANON - lolo on June 28, 2013
    i think we can all agree that harry should be with luna
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  • From ANON - Victoria Cox on June 27, 2013
    I like the story and the powerful time magic concepts. However, I think it's way past the time for both Hermione and Harry to drop their respective Weasley paramours.
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  • From ANON - Thegirl191 on June 27, 2013
    That ending was just mean ... I want more :P
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  • From ANON - kit on June 27, 2013
    Ah!!! I was tricked. This was an excellent chapter update! It definitely left me gaping in shock, confusion, and disbelief. I NEED to read what happens next! The anticipation is going to kill me, i know it.
    I want to say thanks to your sister for convincing you to update on wed. May she have a great birthday.
    Well, until next chapter!
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  • From moodysavage on June 26, 2013
    oh wow... what was that!??! it was very very hot... I liked Draco's reactions to Hermione and that Hermione was able to think at all... but him just now walking in... what did he do?!!?
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on June 26, 2013
    Happy birthday to your sister and thank you to you! :-) I made my sister read mine online, too. lol This chapter was so utterly delicious, until (I assume) he used his time turning abilities and rewound things, darnit! :-) Man, I want a kiss like that before I die! Brava, my dear! HG4eva
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  • From ANON - Heather on June 26, 2013
    Thanks for the update complete with sexy Draco action.
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  • From ANON - AtlanteanDiva on June 25, 2013
    I'm looking forward to seeing Luna. She's such an awesome character.

    I want to really like this story, but I find parts of it annoying and improbable. Ron and Hermione's relationship is a total cop out. It would have been better if they were two people who'd grown apart because of distance. The idea that Hermione Granger is even considering marrying Ron, or has even stayed with him this long, is ludicrous. Seriously! Hermione Granger! I've read stories where Ron's an ass yada, yada, and they haven't always bothered me, but this one, annoys the hell out of me because it's farcical. Hermione Granger! REALLY????????? O yeah, and the Weasley's demanding a manor and George living in said manor is...girl stop, just stop. Ginny I can take or leave depending on her characterizations. That being said, I prefer Harry with someone else, she's tiresome.

    Have Harry and Hermione switched instincts? Hermione thinking Draco is up to something while Harry completely trust his roommate. "Things that make you go hmmm."

    I don't mean to be harsh. The fact that I've read all eight chapters means that the story is interesting. There are few DHr stories that hold my interests these days, and I mean every few. The story is well written and I like the idea that you're taking your time with the Marriage Law and not springing it on the reader in the first chapter. I like your characterizations of Harry, Hermione, and Draco. I look forward to reading what you do with Luna, and I wouldn't mind a little HL lovin or even HHrD lovin. *Shrugs* I just wish that the good part out weighed the annoying parts.

    Lastly, OMG!, I get that Draco and Hermione are attractive, but it doesn't need to be rehashed to death.


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