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Reviews for A Match Made In Convenience

By : ErisNight
  • From ANON - AtlanteanDiva on June 25, 2013
    I don't understand why some authors are under the assumption that Hermione would stay with Ron if treated her like shit. It's absolutely ridiculous. This is my biggest issue with this story, that and why Ron must be the a-hole. It's not impossible to write a dramione story where Ron isn't a jerk. He did grow up at the end of book seven, too many people seem to forget that.

    I do like this story. I'm not fond of the formatting, but I do like the story. It's a bit refreshing. However, I do believe the back and forth Hermione and Draco inner dialogue about each other is redundant at times. It's like, I get it already.

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  • From ANON - Victoria on June 25, 2013
    Aw!! Why'd you stop it there? Keep it going. Hurry up and update! I love this fic! Plz consider posting on Hawthorn and Vine?
    Anxiously awaiting the next update!
    Victoria
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  • From ANON - serpantstongue on June 25, 2013
    I like the direction this is going in. Hopefully this will turn into a Harry/Luna! *fingers crossed* Ginny never seemed right for Harry to me. It's nice to see a mature side to Harry and Draco. I do want to see Hermione get rid of some of that Malfoy hate. She sounds a bit too much like Ron for me right now, but at least she isn't afraid to stick up to Ron for Draco. Your time theory works well. Very inventive! I like that its moving well, without being too fast or too slow. I can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - guest on June 25, 2013
    I am very much enjoying reading this story. You have created some interesting and unique ideas such as the time spell. I am thoroughly sick of Ron and Ginny, and I hope they get the boot
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  • From demonsangel on June 24, 2013
    Interesting chapter, though I am not seeing where the "pay back" comes in.
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  • From moodysavage on June 24, 2013
    Oh no!!! Hermione and Harry have to be separated from the Wesley's before the law gets passed or they will rush them into marriage because they are pure bloods!!! Course Draco can't marry Astoria so that will be easy :)
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on June 24, 2013
    Oh Hermione... methinks thou dost protest too much! tee hee hee She is in for such a rude awakening. lol Draco making her that necklace and then declaring that this time he was really going to stay away from her, makes me say the same to him. Oh, they are going to be explosive when they do finally give in and admit their feelings. I hope she is ready to lose her virginity, because it's not long for this world. ha ha ha Harry, Lucius and the voting few... eek! I keep forgetting you plan this to be a marriage fic eventually. Thank you, HG4eva
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  • From ANON - Siona_the_Green on June 24, 2013
    Usually I don't leave a review for every chapter when those chapters were written months ago but I HAVE TO it's just that good. "I want you Granger" and he does so much. Usually in fanfic the reasons why Draco focuses his attentions on her are shallow and unrealistic but this is very believable. I hope in future chapters he falls in love with more parts of her personality. Details like loving the way she laughs when she's tickled and how cute she looks when she's angry make my heart go all gooey :) thanks!
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  • From ANON - Siona_the_Green on June 24, 2013
    Wow! This is great! Draco's reaction to the twins was priceless. I also like how you are showing hermione's heart of gold struggling over the decision to chuck Ron while respecting herself. Well done :)
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  • From ANON - Siona_the_Green on June 24, 2013
    Wonderful first chapter! So well written I know I won't be disappointed with the rest. The characters are very very well constructed. I hope the sex scenes are as well described as this scene ;)
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on June 22, 2013
    I realized I wanted to review here because when others look at your story, I don't want them to think it's no good because you have so few reviews. :-) So, thank you!! I love that she was so obvious, and I think Draco will have to play with her a little soon. I mean, how else will he know if she's really interested. Plus, she DOES want to see his rooms... *insert smirk here*. Thank you, hon! HG4eva
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  • From ANON - dracosgirl007 on June 19, 2013
    Great story! I can't wait to read more, SOON!
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  • From Trelweny on June 19, 2013
    Thank you, thank you, that with all the ways Ron and Ginny and perhaps others of the Weasleys have changed with their fame and new money and new mansion that Arthur seems to have retained his role of loving, supportive father-figure to both his blood and honorary family. His little speech to Hermione had me sniffling right along with her in happiness.

    I've grown to really be uncomfortable with Ron/Hermione pairings in general but you've made Ron even worse for her than normal. Not good, not bad, just commenting. It does however make it easier for accepting a break between them. Still I hope he gets out of the course he's set himself for Someone. I don't dislike Ron in principle... I just think he's not right for Hermione; that her being with him is "settling" and while she may be content (with a nice Ron) in the end it would be like putting her light under a bushel.

    So Zabini sees further into Draco's "feelings" as they are than the male in question. Not really surprising. I just hope Draco doesn't do anything to hurt Hermione. Does Draco even know she's a virgin? Certainly Blaise doesn't, or he wouldn't have made that comment about Ron not giving her what she needs. I'd hope you Blaise, who seems relatively nice at least even if a playboy, wouldn't be pushing Draco to have a one-off with a virgin simply to get her out of his system. That would be beyond cruel.

    Thanks for writing.
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  • From ANON - moodysavage on June 19, 2013
    That part where Harry was wondering what ifs was so sweet.
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  • From XiaoZhen on June 19, 2013
    Have you ever consider posting this elsewhere, say Hawthorn&Vine or Granger Enchanted? I like AFF since this place is really for Mature content so there's guarantee that everything will stay intact and stories here are generally very good, but it's pretty hard to navigate around this site. I mean, there's no subscribe/follow/favorite button to alert me if you update.
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