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Reviews for A Match Made In Convenience

By : ErisNight

From ANON - colao on September 04, 2013
Yay! I don't usually press writers, but I would love it if the wait isn't too long for the next installment...
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From ANON - Anon on September 03, 2013
Omigosh..I have been waiting forever for this update...i check back so often..almost 12 times today alone!! why is there no update? I really do love the story..can't wait to see where draco and hermione end up!! and harry and luna!! love it!!
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From ANON - MargeW76 on September 02, 2013
Finally she said yes!!!! Cannot wait for the next update. Ooooo is Draco gonna be surprised when he realizes she's a virgin!!!! Update soooooonnnnn. The suspense is KILLING ME!!!!
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From moodysavage on August 31, 2013
I agree... FINALLY!!! Next on the agenda... Draco finding out that Hermione is a virgin lol
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From ANON - Charlotte on August 29, 2013
Okay, I have been following this story since about 2 am on the 16th. And I feel so pathetic because every single day I'm on this site about 4 times, looking to see if you've updated yet, and then trying to figure out what to do when I realize you haven't.
Everyone who knows me is laughing at me because of this. I mean, the internet has basically been ruined, because I'm so hooked on AMMIC! (Not blaming you for that at all, but it's really weird having spent the entire summer on pintrest, that now it holds no interest for me because you haven't updated.)
I really do love this story. I really do. It's one of the few stories I've found that has a valid separate plot(or a plot at all actually), valid characterizations (may I say that Draco makes me so happy I don't know what to do with myself), and a pace that, while highly upsetting to my need to constantly read this story, is very real, understandable, and well-done.
It makes me really happy whenever I find a well written fanfic for anyone of my favorite ships, I tend to get a bit overexcited... Just a bit. BUT IT'S SO EXCELLENT I CAN'T HELP MYSELF!!!!!
In other things, I had kind of a hard time with Ron's characterization when I first started reading, I've always imagined that he got a bit of a hero complex, but it was very intense when I first started reading. It's gotten a lot more understandable as I've continued though, so I have no problem with the Weasley bashing now. (Is it wrong that I always saw Ginny the way you have shown her, I mean, I'm supposed to like the canon, right?)
I look forward to seeing what you do with Christmas (Christmas Eve at Hermione's, and Christmas at the Malfoy's, right?), Kingsley (he really is acting weird, isn't he), and of course, Hermione and Draco (such as WHEN THE HELL WILL HE START CALLING HER HERMIONE!!!!), and of course, our villains and hanging threat, The Valiant (good name, by the way, I love how its the evil ones proclaiming themselves as heroes. Poor deluded them.) (And I love how you took the fallback from the pureblood rebellion and turned it into the opposite for this story, it's a beautifully realistic thing and I adore that part.)
Also, on a personal note, no problem with the story (I really don't have any problems with the story thus far), but I don't like Hermione nicknames. Can you explain a little why you decided to have some people *cough*RON*cough* use a nickname for her almost exclusively? It just seems to me that Hermione is not a nickname type of name, and I don't see that she would like having a nickname like "Mione", her parents calling her Mia I can definitely see, there are some names my parents call me that I wouldn't let anyone else use in the world, and that's basically how I see Hermione with nicknames (same with Draco and Drake, now that I think of it, but I can see that easier.) and I would just like to understand better.
Otherwise, I love your story, I love your discussion page, and I am ANXIOUSLY awaiting chapter 24--that was a not so little hint, I will wait for it, believe me, I've come this far I'm not going to just abandon your story, but I'm dying here without it. So in my thoughts, sooner, would be better. Just saying.
LOVE IT,
Char
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From ANON - Draconian on August 26, 2013
Ohhhh goodness!

Ugh Ron you foul mouthed PRAT. You don't deserve her!

Absolutely loved this chapter, Eris! You did it again: making Draco so endearing And perfect to me. Love how you brought all of the goodness of the Slytherine prince together with Hermione listing everything and her mum sealing the deal!!

Awwwwwww!!!!!!
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From kthrnlxndr on August 26, 2013
Thanks so much for the update! I can't get enough of this story, seriously.

One thing I was a little confused about was the whole "Hermione was going to say yes the whole time" thing because I didn't really see how that was played out, but it didn't take away from the story at all. Just something I didn't see.

I also like the fact that the chapter was also the title of the fic, a perfect name (and honestly you could totally end the story here and it would be an awesome end and a good time to start a sequel, haha). I like it when things come full circle like that. (Also, not saying you should stop it there, just saying it would be a cool thing but either way the story is great)

Can't wait for the next chapter!
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From ANON - bella on August 26, 2013
Its 4:30 in the morning and i just finished this chapter and all i could say is FINALY!!! I swear this is best story i have read in a while. I love it and i hope you update as fast as possilebecause this is the first story i look for when i refesh. I love it, I love you. Now i can't sleep i will probably read this chapter agian to bask in its gloriousness. lol
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From ANON - Aranel on August 25, 2013
Okay, so I was watching season 4 of torchwood and there was this part where capitain jack tells this guy that he is in charge and he just pushes him down to his knees by the shoulders and head and makes him get to work. For some reason I could only think of Draco. Not only this Draco but the Draco from "daylight" by MorningSnow. Ugh, can't wait for their wedding. It's gonna be a crazy honeymoon.
For a moment there I was like homg, random breast cancer. But then Draco went and healed her mom and I'm just like, whelp...that sealed the deal. Honestly, your Ronald and Ginny are just the worst people. A part of me kinda wants them to come around soon. But they probably won't and that's okay.
Daaaaw, Luna Potter. So cute. She makes him so happy. If only it wasn't for Loony, we could get that Harry/Draco/Hermione party started. But I love her so much, she makes everything so bright and good.
Hermione + Draco = bed by j. Holiday. Yes. Oh man.
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From pepperdoc on August 25, 2013
Oh. My. God. Eris, this was such a great flippin chapter. Seriously. I was literally sitting on the edge of my seat through the whole thing. And then you drop this amazingly hidden little gem of Draco curing cancer and saving Hermione's mother. Holy shit. I loved it. Thank you!
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From ANON - EEvans on August 25, 2013
FINALLY!!!

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From ANON - Victoria on August 25, 2013
There are elements of this story that are fabulous: time magic, a new group of dissidents, Luna & Harry. However the unresolved sexual and romantic tension between Draco & Hermione has gone on wayyyyy too long. Let's move along already.
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From demonsangel on August 25, 2013
Great chapter! What an amazing way to give Hermione the push she needs. Sad, I almost cried, but I loved the happy ending to her mothers story.
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From HarryGinny4eva on August 25, 2013
Hello there! First, thank you for the nice, long update. I love when it's not over too soon. :-) Next, I am glad they are finally officially engaged. But, I do hope they, at some point, actually talk TO one another. I loved loved loved Harry and Luna in this chapter and am thrilled that they are happy. I also appreciated the Molly and Arthur in this, as they supported their "children". The writing in this chapter was lovely, clear and well done. You are very good, my dear. :-) Now, Hermione...

You said, "You'll be frustrated with Hermione for sure with this one but I think she redeems herself:)" Um, no! I am straight up ticked off! No, his proposal wasn't the smoothest, or the most romantic, but he gave her the space and time she asked for from him. Then, he stood by quietly as she threw Ron in his face and brought him into Draco's home over and over again! Finally, he poured out his heart to her and BEGGED her to say yes. And, through all of that, she was TESTING him?! She was PRETENDING to be confused and unsure?! What kind of person does that?! She knew she was going to say yes a month before and still let him hang like that?! That was just plain cruel! And then, she was STILL going to make him wait for another day once she actually fessed up to her parents?! I am so sorry her mother was dying, and ecstatic that she's fully healed and whole. Go, Draco for actually creating a cure! But, seriously?! Until she found out about her mother, she was going to keep him hanging, play it cool, and act still unsure?! UGH!!!!!! As I said, I am glad she accepted, but she has some serious apologizing to do!

NO!!! Blaise can't go! How about you write in a really cool, sexy woman *cough...me...cough* who has loved him from afar, but just gathered the cajones to tell him. lol Anyway, thank you again for a compelling story. I know I will forgive her soon, but right now, she has sorely disappointed me. Sigh... I know I have to wait for the next update, but if you wanted to post early, I wouldn't be upset. :-)

Thanks, luv! HG4eva
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From ANON - Cuppatea on August 23, 2013
I love this story so much, it's nearly 2 in the morning and I've just finished chapter 22 reading under the covers so the light doesn't wake my partner. Dedication or what! I can't wait to see how you handle the next bit, I'll bet my left sock the newer stronger Hermione doesn't just roll over and agree. Thank you for sharing such a great story with us. You've got the characters down pat now, you make 'em dance!
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