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Reviews for A Match Made In Convenience

By : ErisNight

From ANON - EEvans on August 22, 2013
Oh man!!! What a way to give your readers (and Hermione!) apoplexy!
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From dracolover1 on August 22, 2013
I seriously hope that Hermione makes Draco squirm in the next chapter, but then I hope that she says yes right away also. I'm also in love with this story, it's so freaking amazing and very unique. I look forward to seeing that you've posted. I even check on random days hoping that you've posted a new chapter lol can't wait for the next chapter =)
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From HarryGinny4eva on August 22, 2013
Yay!!!! You're back! Congratulations on finishing school!

Imagine this... you have a house full of people... you are happy to have them over... then one of your favorite stories updates... what do you do?

Answer: you take your phone and sit in the bathroom to read it! lol

I couldn't review, but I got to read it. :-) I love that Draco and Harry's bond has them sharing personality traits. That's fantastic! Giving Harry the cajones to get Luna to marry him so soon after dating was great! But, I am sorry it gave Draco all those worries and insecurities. Thank goodness Harry forced their talk on him. I actually sighed very loudly at all the missed opportunities between Hermione and Draco. I mean, even they knew what was happening and couldn't get past it. That night in her room, I could happily have killed Ron and smacked her around for her reaction. I still don't get the Ministry and its decisions...idiots!! And, finally, ummmm I don't know how to react to that proposal and have a bad feeling she won't either, after their past few days and his actions and words that morning. Add to it the fact that I can see her brain going to Harry and Luna's love and happiness and I see disaster. Poor kids... will they ever get it right? Finally, who are these evil people and what the heck is next?

I AM SO GLAD YOU'RE BACK!!!! Thank you, HG4eva
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From demonsangel on August 21, 2013
*thunks her head on the desk* Really Draco? Just...seriously? I'm not sure if I want to laugh or shake the boy XD She better say yes...
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From Draconis on August 21, 2013
how rude! leaving us hanging like that! arrrrgh! now I have to wait to see if she says yes...not nice Eris! however I absolutely loved this chapter. you could see the sadness that Draco felt. I'm loving it (ba da ba ba baaaa lol)
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From ANON - Anon on August 21, 2013
O-ho! Wonderful cliffhanger on 22. Bravo.
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From tiachutis on August 21, 2013
Please tell me she didn't already say yes to Ron, just for spite. I don't think I could handle it. Also, that's the best proposal you could come up with, Draco?
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From ANON - Aranel on August 21, 2013
SQUEEEEEE!!!!
So I'm laying here reading the last part and I'm like "now kiss!!!" At Harry and Draco and their little conversation. I love their relationship, no bullshit! Just a deep respect for one another and an envision of each other's personality traits.
Mmmm, you treated me twice today didn't you mama! First I get my gift of Luna/Harry action and in the shower no less! She is so damn sexy, just stripping and walking off humming. Got the weirdest lady boner over that. Homg and Harry can barely control himself when she is concerned. Love him losing it. And the love behind it is so passionate! He loves so hard cause love is precious to him. Something that he grew up without and now he cherishes it so dearly and loves so hard when given the chance. Surely he has enough love to invite Hermione and Draco into his relationship. I can dream can't I!! Lol
"Marry me." Oh man! Oh geez! Oh glob!! In my head I see Hermione doing the single ladies dance all over the sitting room after Draco popped the question. He's about to put a ring on it! For the love of glob Hermione! Don't granger this up!
Okay, honestly, those terrorist pureblood haters are so in on this marriage law thing. I feel it in my jimmies!
Fuck off Ronald! Gawd! I can't even handle him right now. Like, not even once.
Love this story, love you. Can't wait for more.
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From ANON - Draconian on August 21, 2013
Eris!!! You're killing me with the cliff hangers!!
I loved the vivid detail of Draco sitting in constant wait for Hermione to wake up. Very endearing and it's making me fall in love with Draco even more! That prat Ron is getting on my nerves, however. He really does treat Hermione like she is a doormat!
Putting the Valiant into the mix was a great idea. I think that it gives all the characters a new reason to keep on fighting with all their might. (For their lives, their loves, their well-being)

I will be waiting anxiously for the next chapter :)

(Congrats on the 94!)

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From ANON - MargeW76 on August 18, 2013
This story gets better with every chapter! I want to know SOON if Hermione is ok, did she hear Draco's confession of love? Please update soon! The suspense is killing me!
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From brioche on August 14, 2013
Between you and MorningSnow (Daylight) I am happy to have found two new fics that I looove although you can't update fast enough for me! This last bit - the reason WHY the marriage bill passed - that was a complete surprise. I hope that you'll make sure to make your villains nasty enough, sometimes when they are unmasked one thinks, "Is that all?" but I'm sure you have something up your sleeve. I had discovered Daylight just after starting your fic so I had to laugh when you added that blurb about it - they're both very different treatments of Dramione, but very good. Enjoying it! Write more please!
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From kthrnlxndr on August 13, 2013
I love this fic so much! I've been hooked since the first chapter, and always am excited to see an update. I enjoy DM/HG a lot but I feel that a lot of stories on this site are very similar, and not all of them are very well written in terms of spelling and grammar. This story, however, is excellent in all ways. I like the fact that Draco and Hermione weren't all over each other from day one, and I like that there are layers in the plot so that it's more dynamic. That way, it isn't just about Draco and Hermione; it's also about the world they live in.

I can't wait to see the next chapter! :D
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From moodysavage on August 12, 2013
This chapter was amazing! I totally did not see this coming. You did an amazing job of describing what happened after the explosion and the tension in the whole scene was great. I loved how Draco spoke to Hermione and how his first priority was to protect and save her and then to get back to the ball. Did him insisting that he had to go back even though he had a concussion have anything to do with his bond with Harry? Anyway... it was totally awesome. I loved how Harry handled himself and how Draco helped to change the situation when he attacked the main guy. Hopefully Hermione will stop hiding her feelings after this too.
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From ANON - Darleen on August 12, 2013
I kinda stopped reading this story at the last chapter. I've been skimming it, mostly to see what happens with Luna and Harry but you've lost me with Draco and Hermione...it's beyond irritating. The whole Mia thing shows Hermione's immaturity. How did she expect Draco to behave? And Draco seems like someone who wouldn't really put up with these kinds of games. When did Hermione become such a silly person? You should include out of character warning on this fic for the later chapters. Also if he loves her so much why would he suddenly take her virginity at a party? Ultimately it's your story and your muse, but I think it lost a lot of momentum.
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From ANON - kit on August 12, 2013
Right when I read the title of the chapter, I was on edge as to when the violence would occur. I love the way you led up to it with the creepy crows and funny tasting drinks in the last chapter. I never expected it to happen when it did (such an inopportune moment!!- right when draco was gonna tell hermione that he knew it was her!! no!!) I'm glad they were in the balcony when draco disapparated ....wouldn't want them to end up like everyone else. speaking of which!....I hope blaise is okay and I'm curious about the other characters that were at the masquerade, ginny, ron.

All this drama, i love it! I need to know what is wrong with the minister. it cant be him right? that sentence of bringing them to justice sounded very much like what the masked man was saying. another spell that they have modified perhaps? Its amusing to see that right after there is a blood bath...the ministry passes a marriage law, really?
Harry had every right to be upset!!....but he should also be suspicious... How will this affect harry/luna and draco/hermione? Based on the story summary, every eligible pureblood must marry a halfblood or muggle. so they should be alright...right? since harry is halfblood/luna is a pureblood and draco is a pureblood/hermione is a muggle.
Anyways....as you can probably tell...I am really excited for the next chapter! Thanks for taking the time to write this awesome story!!
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