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By : ErisNight

From HarryGinny4eva on August 12, 2013
Wait... WHAT?! In answer to a complete massacre and the emergence of a new evil, the "brilliant" minds of that group came up with passing the marriage law?! And, what is wrong with Kingsley? Is it Kingsley? (Your mind, btw is brilliant, as those spells and the execution were awesome!) I know Hermione has to be okay, or the story would end, but I am sorry she got so hurt. I can only hope she remembers him calling her by her name, so she understands that he knew it was her. And, I also have my fingers crossed that they actually talk for the first time in forever and for a change. I admit to having a bit of fear about where this marriage law is going to take them, but I also trust your plan for your story and look forward to more as fast as you can get it to us. Best of luck in your studies! Thanks again, HG4eva
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From tiachutis on August 12, 2013
Aaahhh, soo good. I seriously could not read fast enough. Please don't make Hermione have amnesia, let her remember that Draco said her name.
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From ANON - Aranel on August 12, 2013
Oh SHIT!!

It all just went down didn't it. Man that was sudden. Oh where to start. Okay, really cool alteration on the anti apperation spell. Where is Ron?
They almost got it on!!! Kinda upset that he hasn't figured out that she is a virgin. I'm sure he has been with enough women to know a fresh piece from a used batters box. Especially with all the feeling around and licking he was doing. Hmmm... Should've noticed that bit Draco.
Poor Luna, I have a feeling that these types of things affect her strongly.
I was basically screaming like a crazy person in the movies. Like, " Don't go in there, girl! Don't be trusting him!! HE GONNA KILL YOU!!!!" I don't trust this not so dead minister! Dafuq kind of defensive spell protects a minister like that!? Didn't do Fudge a lick of good!
May Ginny exploded, yes? That would be nice.
Kind of glad Hermione was the one to get hurt. She would have been shits for damn annoying, running around trying to solve everything during all that chaos. No... This was good. Way better than if she had been there. Kind of not worried about her being okay since this is a marriage fic for Draco and Hermione.
Very excited about all that is to come though.
Oh, and you're right, Hermione isn't an idiot. Just rather illogical when it comes to Draco. /laughs evilly, she still didn't get any dick.
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From ANON - buttercup on August 12, 2013
best chapter yet cant wait to read what comes next...
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From demonsangel on August 11, 2013
Er, wow. Just wow. That's about all I have to say and I think it sums it up perfectly lol
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From ANON - Draconian on August 11, 2013
Ohhhhh myyyyy!!! This is the first story I have honestly gotten into and I was checking the site at least once an hour for the last 3 days for the new chapter. Please ace your class and write write write! Absolutely love the story! This chapter was wow! Such a heated exchange between 'Mia' and Draco and the heartfelt worry when Draco rushed her to the hospital. Awe I can't wait for the next chapter!! Thank you Eris!!!!!
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From ANON - saman on August 07, 2013
This chapter was absolutely amazing..couldn't control my giggles and and my grins whilst reading it.
The eeriness is also making me really curious.the crows n the funny tasting drink..
Wonder what you have planned for the later chapters.
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From ANON - Aranel on August 07, 2013
Hermione never stops amazing me with how undoubtably stupid she is. Honestly, how did she want this night to go? Draco goes home with Mia and proves that he is still a man whore, Draco rejects Hermione and proves that he is loyal but then she doesn't get any dick, OR he sees through it all and she gets dick. Draco isn't too bright when the blood flow leaves his brain, cut him some slack Hermione.
Ugh this whole chapter is just so eerie!! The crows, dark wings bring dark words! The building and all it's history. THE DAMN RIDDLE!! Which by the way is making me feel like a bloody idiot! Can't figure the blasted thing out and I just know MorningSnow is sitting there on her throne laughing at me! And that cliffie! Omg and that kitchen scene!! Oh my glob and that dare!
Cliffie! I laid here yelling at my phone over that mess! You have now been called a special assortment of names, live with it! That kitchen scene?!? Sploosh. Love Draco just taking it. Getting his bump and grind on, making Hermione dizzy as shit, letting her know he wants to put the P in the V! Can't wait for that! Oh and that lumping dare! Kinda hope he loses so he has to kiss Harry! Like, a big ass "I wanna make gay babies with you" kiss! Ugh, why does that do it for me?
Can't wait for the next chapter, you're driving me crazy. So glad you enjoyed that last post. It just made me thirsty. I will remember my promised dance of Luna and Harry, and the gift story of Draco/Hermione/Harry (that is exactly how I want that sandwich to go). You're awesome and you know it. Keep on keeping on.
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From HarryGinny4eva on August 06, 2013
Hey! I am enjoying "Daylight," too! :-) Now, your update. I can honestly say I said "crap" out loud when I realized it was over. I loved the long update and thank you for every word, so don't think I'm complaining, because I am not. But, now I have to wait for dddaaaaaayyyyyyyysssssss for more. I'm already dying! That was one of the best setups I've read...ever! Their kitchen encounter was HOTT! I enjoyed every moment of their flirting and found it very interesting that neither thought they'd gone too far or too fast. I wonder how far she would have gone if Harry hadn't come home just then. Methinks she would have been a virgin no more. Then her setup and plan... Her plan was so perfect, she out-planned herself. lol She was only missing the one fact that she doesn't understand or believe; that Draco can be and is now a one-woman man. I am so proud of him right now! Him turning her down flat and then getting so ticked with Harry might as well have been a proposal of marriage. lol Now, Hermione just has to wrap her large brain around the fact that he didn't want "her," because he only wants her. ha ha ha LOVED IT!! Harry's little moment of torment was almost funny, as he tried to explain without explaining. And, though I love Ron in canon, I have to say in this story I laughed when she turned him down and for Harry. I hope he gets to find out that it was Hermione, too! That way he can't claim he was pining for her all this time. I do wonder where Ginny is and kept expecting to see her there somewhere. I didn't miss the strange taste to Draco's drink, nor the ominousness of the crows. I only hope Draco and Hermione get to be honest with each other before all hell breaks loose. Now, I will try to concentrate on the rest of my week as I wait for your next update. It will be difficult, just so you know! :-) Thanks! HG4eva
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From ANON - Mocha Midnight on August 06, 2013
I can't express how much I love this story! It is honestly one of the highlights of my week when I see you update! Please keep going as I can't stand waiting for your chapters. Thank you so much for giving us a piece of this magic.
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From demonsangel on August 06, 2013
*bops Draco on the head with a book* That's for failing to notice. *bops Hermione* That's for being upset when he didn't recognize you, which was the point.
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From ANON - Black Buttafly on August 05, 2013
Is this the last chapter of this story? When is the next chapter going to be up? This is a really good story! I love it! Keep up the good work! :-)
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From ANON - Dakota on August 02, 2013
I've beeennn watching and alas an update. Reading on my iPod sucks though laptop was dropped and now no laptop for this girl to read on. Bah humbug! Anywho!! Didn't stop me from reading and keeping an eye out for the chappies! Gah poor Draco I'm back to wanting to bop them in the head again. I mean bahhhhh! Come on guyssssssss! Until next time also here's a side note I have never actually reviewed any of the stories I've read until recently. Surprise! Haha
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From HarryGinny4eva on August 02, 2013
Well, that was the epitome of two people hitting rock bottom. I felt bad for both of them, but even more so for Harry, as he had to know and in part feel both sides. I loved his little fight with Blaise, as it showed how much both men care about their friends. You really wrote the "guys dealing with emotions" scene beautifully. I am glad Harry and Luna are happy together and that Hermione has Luna to lean on and talk to through all of this. Draco said it right, why couldn't they go through this stuff as teens so that they would know how to handle it better now? Well, of course, they were a bit busy. lol It is sad how much they have individually let their insecurities ruin them, but it is understandable on both sides. Though, their individual stupidity has been somewhat funny for us, I can only imagine the last few weeks have been killing them slowly. Hermione finally breaking things off with Adrian was great, but not telling Draco was just plain silly. Hopefully he's at least noticed that they haven't been going out. I love Luna's honesty and joy in life, and I think Blaise is awesome. So, now we just have to get past Hermione's fears, Draco's self-flagellation, the Ministry's machinations, Ginny's/Ron's reappearances (I feel that coming), and the next few days until one of them breaks. Whew! I am so loving this story!!!! Thank you, HG4eva
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From moodysavage on August 02, 2013
ackkkk!!!! Hermione wants to seduce him and he's avoiding other women! And when he figures out who it is and plays along then Hermione will think he's still willing to sleep around and be hurt. Oh no I don't see this ending well!
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