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Reviews for A Match Made In Convenience

By : ErisNight

From ANON - baobei on July 27, 2013
More please!! Really love this fic. Your plot, dialog, and characters are so well done. Hoping for more chappies soon.
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From ANON - SlytherinEnchanted on July 26, 2013
When I finished chapter 17, I was frustrated with Draco, sympathetic towards Hermione (because what girl hasn't had an unreciprocated crush or love?) and then there's the young attraction between Harry and Luna that you KNOW is going to blossom into something completely sweet and innocent. This story is well thought out, imaginative and well written. Through the angst you see the character's strengths and weaknesses (even if I'm not a fan of constant angst). Keep writing! I look forward to the coming chapters!
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From ANON - Meagan on July 26, 2013
AAAHHHHH! I need more! This is a great story, can't wait for more! Thank you again for sharing!
Meagan
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From ANON - Ann on July 26, 2013
Oh and I've read the discussion board too, I understand and like what you're doing with this piece! I hope you don't get discouraged because people don't understand. Dont change a thing!
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From ANON - Ann on July 26, 2013
This story is too amazing for words, I pretty much just read all of it without stopping and cannot wait for more please update!!
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From ANON - rae on July 24, 2013
alright...first off, I've enjoyed most of this story a great deal. You have a delightful voice and technique. The characters are well written and well rounded. I may not be particularly fond of some of their personality traits, but that only stands to reason as they realistic. That said, the whole up/down extreme misunderstandings between Draco and Hermoine are a bit much. After frolicking in her lingerie sans panties in magical rain with him and then all but doing the horizontal poke and retreat she ducks and weaves to avoid him for a week? His solution is to try to whore his way to a mended heart because she's avoiding him and thus must be rejecting his as yet unknown to him love? The addition of an antagonist that starts out as a possible conquest who then becomes a friend furthers the story well. So long as that's all it is and not another disturbing notch in the bedpost. Honestly, the virgin girl saving it up while 'the' guy fucks everything moving even after falling in love is just yucky...It will be interesting to see how you spin this in the next chapter.
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From ANON - Aranel on July 24, 2013
Hermione has THE worst timing. It's so strange how comfortable she is with her body but not her self worth. She is so logical and illogical. Ugh, such a girl. Draco, you sleeze. Love it.
I almost hate that hermione and Harry can't just take one for the world and be together. It would just be so easy and nice and wonderful.
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From ANON - Anon on July 24, 2013
Please update when you can; ur updates are super consistent which is great. i hope draco doesnt follow through with this chick - maybe a trick is up ur sleeve with this moment so it can be avoided. pls pls pls dont let him continue to be a manwhore. yay. also hermione as great as i find her in this fic. is a lil too much of a push-over where draco is concerned. want more backbone/more take charge mione. thank you. the writing is great and flows really well.
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From HarryGinny4eva on July 24, 2013
Wow, so much going on... Let's start with Harry. His complete infatuation with Luna is absolutely the most touching and sweet thing in the story. I feel like I am in the throws of a crush reading his thoughts and actions with her. I love that she flirts with him, but is so subtle that he can't truly tell. lol Her statement about seeing him all the time and him not noticing her was beautiful!! His thoughts on Hermione and Draco were nice, too. I completely got the "big brother" protecting his family feeling from him, at the same time as he wanted to somehow help them get together. (Well done!) Celeste... a great addition for the moment and I LOVED her take on things, though I wish she knew both sides of the story, so that her future book could be correct. lol But, she is going to get her "payment for services rendered" so I guess she isn't too unhappy about it. ha ha ha Hermione, the poor confused, hurt, so very wrong woman. If only she would stop avoiding him and actually talk, things could have been so different. But, instead she was her normal insecure self and left him open for another woman. Stupid, silly girl! lol I cringe at the thought of them the next morning. Sigh... And Draco... stupid stupid (sad, hurt, confused, in love) man. I did actually wince when he decided to sleep with her anyway. It can't end well and it's only going to hurt them both in the end. I did laugh out loud that he thinks he can actually talk himself out of being in love with Hermione, though. (Draco, hon, things just don't work that way. lol) I wonder also what Blaise will do to help, as he doesn't seem the type of friend to just let things happen. Plus, we've got Ron still to deal with and all the crap he will pile on her. Eek! I know you said it was an angst chapter and you were right, but man alive, did you get everyone into the worse possible place. lol Great storytelling, as usual. I am waiting for the next chapter.... huh! Not posted yet? Fine! I will wait some more. lol Thanks!! HG4eva
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From ANON - Dee on July 24, 2013
Like the angle taken w/ Herm. and Draco's r-ship. I am curious about what will happen next - I'm not fond of the 'infidelity' while he is aware that Herm. is special to him even though he claims she's "broken" his heart. I like the cliff-hanger left and can only hope that you've a TWIST in store for us - secretly the idea of him 'cheating' on his own heart makes me want to rage.

It's quite strong, this bond b/w them - I was wondering whether perhaps this was going to evolve into a fic. concerning the 'veela-bond' that the Malfoy family are renown for having w/ their mates once found.

A little more disinterest from Hermione - perhaps now that she thinks he is still a 'womaniser' despite his charm and good manner - would be greatly appreciated (I am a sucker for angst just not... what Draco appears to be about to do in chapter 18 (I mean, srsly if his feelings were SO STRONG another woman simply wouldn't do! Wouldn't do at all!). Please update when you can! Thank you
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From moodysavage on July 24, 2013
I'm not talking to you... I'm just NOT talking to you. Draco didn't get a clue when he saw that Hermione looked devastated... and he's going to sleep with someone to prove something to himself. Ok... now I'm going to go back to not talking to you.
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From ANON - Heather on July 24, 2013
Arrrrggggggg!! Damn the agnst! Another good chapter that I have enjoyed reading. Thanks for the update.
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From ANON - stella on July 23, 2013
I love the angst and the deepness of the story!! Oh and love it when u write long! It helps me wait for next chapter hahahaOmg my heart just broke at the end of this chapter...sob I love it. It felt like draco is actually going to forget about his true love...but I trust u wouldn't let that happen. But still at the moment ..the story lives. I really enjoyed when draco got jealous and that feeling of possession. I want to see it happen again..but of course I will still love it without it since I love how this plot is going :) thank you so much! Keep on writing please
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From ANON - Anon on July 23, 2013
Let me first say I love your story. However I don't like the turn it has made. The short is just getting to long and complicated.
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From ANON - atlantean_diva on July 23, 2013
This story is entertaining, for the most part, even though there are certain aspects of it that I find very manipulative. I roll my eyes on occasion, but for the most this AMMIC has kept me entertained. However, I was disappointed with chapter fifteen, and not whole chapter mind you; the part that started like a bad porno. Hermione decides to put on chemise and take her underwear off on the night of this scary storm when Harry's not home. So she goes to Draco's room, and of course he's in his underwear. On top of all of that, let's make it rain. This chapter would have been so much better if it hadn't been so contrived. It was just cheap. Lately, the mention of Hermione's lack of dress and Draco's looks have become redundant. I feel as if you're spending more time on that than you are developing a real relationship between the characters. Yes, they've spend some time together, but it's been facile and overshadowed by constantly repeating what the other thought.

You have an idea, but I felt as if you've rushed the past few chapter in order in order to move on with the plot. This is just my opinion. I do like this story. It's been a minute since a Dramione tale has held my interest. I like your characterizations of Draco, Harry. and Luna. (We need MORE Luna.) I'd decided to stop reviewing and just enjoy the story for what it was, but chapter fifteen just...I can't even really express how...ugh, I found Dramione scene in the chapter, and it started so well. l
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