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Reviews for DNA Mishap

By : blade-of-the-shadows
  • From Ladydragonstar55 on December 23, 2013
    This is awesome hope to see more
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  • From ANON - jujukitty on December 14, 2013
    have to pause in reading to point out two things: ch 1= it's *background* not "back round"; ch 2 (and i'm assuming further chapters) you really shouldn't interrupt the flow of the story with your little (a/n:...) things, it may seem cute "oh i keep forgetting it's draco now", but to the reader, it's disruptive. if you truly made an error, you have a backspace and delete key for a reason, if not, you're just pointlessly disrupting the flow of the story and ruining your own writing. if you really want to include an a/n, do it at the beginning or the end
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  • From Alicia29Britton on November 10, 2013
    I love this story!
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on October 14, 2013
    Reread first 14 and then on to the 15th: Really seem to be emphasizing Draco & Lucius relationship with Harry. Seems like Sev is way down on the"to do " list. I can understand in a way...just getting his brother & dad(family at last?) but Sev needs attention also (being the possessive person I am). I bet Hermione is Draco's mate!!
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  • From slearl on October 12, 2013
    I don't know if you're still writing this but if you are i woukd love updates.
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  • From chrissy on October 10, 2013
    Cool story!! Look forward to the next update.
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  • From Genuka on September 29, 2013
    *snicker* The wizarding world doesn't have a chance!
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  • From Mashkai30 on September 04, 2013
    Lovely story! I like it thus far and am looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing!
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  • From chrissy on September 01, 2013
    Interesting update!! Look forward to the next one.

    could you please add me to your updates list. thanks
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  • From ANON - uberfenix on August 24, 2013
    great story please keep writing and kill narcisa hahaha!!! i want a lot of malfoy-snape babies!!!! more than wesley
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  • From Leania07 on August 22, 2013
    Hey now, you can't leave it hanging like that!! ((well you can but still)) ARG and here I thought I gave it long enough to have quite a few chapters past this; but if you're having computer issues then there isn't much else that can be done. Computer's are expensive, whether you are repairing or replacing, and unfortunately, unlike the commercials, money doesn't grow on trees. Though I hope to read more soon, please, oh please, oh please!!
    By the way, that "reaching the Head's office" innuendo...*giggle snort* the mental image I got from reading it again was just too priceless. Secretary...or as my husband says...sexritary. Hope to read more soon!!

    Leania
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  • From dragonLuv3 on August 22, 2013
    awwws you poor thing im glad you didnt for get bout us all an your lovely story , keep up the great job
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  • From cullengal101 on August 19, 2013
    hey
    love the story please keep updating
    cullengal101
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  • From demonsangel on August 19, 2013
    *chuckles* Aw, poor Harry, two pissed off males XD Hopefully Lucius can get him out of trouble.
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  • From Genuka on August 18, 2013
    *cackle* this is going to be quite the reunion!
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