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By : Lomonaaeren
  • From Cesumiss on August 23, 2013
    i like
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  • From moodysavage on August 22, 2013
    I LOVED this chapter! Even though Ginny listens like a box of rocks it was nice to see that harry got angry on his own behalf and actually showed it. Go Harry!
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  • From ANON - Polka dot on August 22, 2013
    He should have just been honest and told her after three kids, that bod wasn't worth hitting anymore.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on August 22, 2013
    Sounds like Harry is finally understanding more of what's going on around him...standing up for himself...no more door mat.
    Still would like to know more of Draco's part in all this? I think maybe he is into Harry more than he even realizes...or is that just what I hope?
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  • From BAFan on August 19, 2013
    Ch. 10

    For the first time, I have a bit of sympathy for Lily. A tiny bit, lol. At least she wasn't a complete brat in this chapter. Good for Harry that he stood his ground and didn't give in to her childish, unreasonable demand. Draco has already done Harry good. Is Harry's denial of being gay going to come back and bite him in the ass, I hope?

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  • From moodysavage on August 17, 2013
    I liked the father/daughter time. She didn't bug me quite so much this time even though she still had that 'but you weren't thinking about me at all times' attitude which is accurate for children to fall back on the viewpoint. It's how they don't really realize that their parent is a separate individual and are only seen in the role of their parent. I really liked that Harry stood up for himself again and refused to give his daughter any hope that he would try to get back together with Ginny. And I am soooo looking forward to that conversation that he is going to have with Ginny about how she mentioned to their DAUGHTER that she thought Harry might be gay. That is not something she should be saying to her daughter. Give her what for Harry!
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on August 16, 2013
    Reading...liking it it a lot...Lily seems spoiled and immature wanting parents to get back together for the childrens sake.
    Once they grow up & leave the parents are stuck with each other or at that late date have to try to find someone to love. Harry's not gay? Maybe he just doesn't know it. He was so unusually brought up with little to no interaction between friends or certainly normal action with relatives. He seems to not understand his own feelings sometimes but goes along with what others make him think he feels...sort of...if you can see what I mean...it's late and I'm tired.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on August 10, 2013
    about #9...

    I didn't think I couldn't STAND anyone as much as Ginny...until Lily was introduced.
    Are wizards against butt whoopings???
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  • From BAFan on August 10, 2013
    Ch. 9

    "Ginny closed her eyes for a second and stood there. Then she opened them and said, 'I would have come after her right away if she didn
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on August 09, 2013
    This continues to be one of your best I think. But does he still love Ginny beyond the affection of shared children? Say it isn't so!
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  • From ANON - polka dot on August 09, 2013
    lils what an awful nickname, no wonder she hates him so much
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  • From moodysavage on August 09, 2013
    lol I still don't like Lilly. She is a manipulative little brat and Harry has missed parenting 101... don't let your children give orders. They can make requests but not orders... that's a real good way to raise a kid who feels entitled to be put first.
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  • From moodysavage on August 04, 2013
    Poor Harry... he's probably shocked too that just that small compliment had such an impact. He has been getting all negative responses from people for far too long. Harry will probably find that he wants to follow along with more of Draco's instructions just for that positive feedback. Now about that daughter... lol can't wait to see how Draco sees that situation.
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  • From BAFan on August 04, 2013
    Ch. 8

    Very interesting so far. I don't think I've read a fic before where Harry's relationship with his children is so troubled. Ginny, yes - that's a popular theme - but not the kids. I'm looking forward to Draco meeting Lily; will he side with her or think she's a spoiled brat? Or possibly a bit of both? Should be interesting, either way!
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on August 03, 2013
    Story continues to be interesting. Waiting to read more of when Harry & Draco talk/see Lily, Al or Scorpius or Ginny.
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