Click Here!

Reviews for Marathon

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From moodysavage on July 06, 2013
    lol Draco moving in... it's funny how he is so pumped up and excited about finding the PERFECT solution for the life debt... he is giving his organizational skills and plans to brilliantly organize and fix the chaos of Harry's life. Hilarious.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - kit on July 06, 2013
    The perfect rearranger-draco malfoy is at your service! haha This should be really interesting to see.
    I enjoyed the past couple of chapters. Having james be excellent in potions is ironic, but it also seems to fit. I like the relationship that james and harry have. Harry's relationship with lily and albus are, unfortunately, not as effortless. I'm interested in seeing how malfoy will help harry with that.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Timeangel93 on July 06, 2013
    Oh, poor Harry! *snickers*

    Yeah, Draco could straighten out Harry's life a bit, but as I know the two there will more than just one argument about it! *giggles*

    Anyways, I hope things will get smooth for Harry again (or as smooth as it can be with being a trouble magnet :D)

    You really write great stories!


    Report Review

  • From bloodshound on June 30, 2013
    it's hard being the kid in a divorce, but i think it's hard trying to be the part time dad as well. mine was sad and mopy and as clueless as the way you're portraying har. like har he did try, but wasn't really around us enough to know what we wanted or needed.
    at least har is keeping usefully occupied. i'll be interested to see what draco's latest idea is. i think his owl is adorable as well.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Rebelghost85 on June 29, 2013
    This is one of your best written stories. Harry's flaws, Draco's misunderstanding of how to fulfill the debt... it's all wonderful. The characterizations are unique as well. I can't wait until the next chapter.

    PS Harry looks like he could use some parenting, relationship and general counseling. Poor guy.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - delia cerrano on June 29, 2013
    Continuing good story! I think Draco's idea for the life debt owed Harry will be something to do with his kids and the way he is semi estranged from them due to his fame.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Polka dot on June 29, 2013
    Lilly's a you little brat but 10 yr. old girls or 12-year-old girls tend to be I guess that's pretty spot on. Makes me feel sorry for Harry But his fault for having kids.
    Report Review

  • From bloodshound on June 26, 2013
    wow, lily is a selfish little brat in this huh. i mean, it's understandable to a degree and how do you make a kid understand that things just don't work that way, but seriously, she needs something to make her lose the 'tude.
    i look forward to seeing malfoys attempts at life debt payback. should be fun.
    al seems like a sensible kid.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - qwerty on June 23, 2013
    If James is more tolerable then I cannot wait for Chapter 3 lol. Everytime Lily opens her mouth I want to smack her for being such a spoiled, narrow-sighted drama queen. Interested in seeing what Malfoy comes up with to repay the debt!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - chester on June 23, 2013
    I like this story - I am interested in the relationships between Harry and his kids. I still think Lily comes off judgemental and spoilt. I was reading what you had said about Lily not getting enough attention from Harry and most of it having to do with his own awkwardness. But given Al's and Lily's reaction, it almost sounds like Harry needs a mental break and to yell at his kids for being selfish. But then again, they are kids.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - SP777 on June 23, 2013
    about #2..

    Lilly is starting to get annoying like her mother...and I don't care how
    UPSET she is, let me use the f*** bomb with my mother at that age, I wouldn't have been
    able to sit for 2 hrs.

    There is no respect there and Harry should have put his foot down on that little tantrum.
    Sorry but, yes he should have.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - delia cerrano on June 17, 2013
    Always enjoy your writing so will be following this one. Seems like a lot of angst & not much joy in this one but I'll hope it will cheer up. Never could stand Ginny. Hate it already that Harry's life is not great like a heros' should be. Hope Draco is going to start making it better soon. I do love Draco/Harry almost as much as Severus/Harry. By the way what "mistake" did Harry make that got him a divorce from that virago?
    Report Review

  • From ANON - moodysavage on June 17, 2013
    Very interesting start and I wonder what Harry's mistake was.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - qwerty on June 17, 2013
    I do not like Harry's kids in this fic. Lily seems straight up spoiled (oh no it was a 3000 and not a 3002! big deal). Albus I'm a little more forgiving because it would be highly frustrating to constantly be under your famous dad's shadow. But it still rubs me wrong that Harry is forced to watch underneath the stands under his Cloak instead of out in the open like the other parents. Withholding judgment of James since he hasn't really appeared in the story yet - I hope he'll be a little more mature than the others tho since he's older.

    Good chapter. Keep going!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - SP777 on June 17, 2013
    Interesting start for an introductory chapter, with the setup of what's going
    on in Harry's life.

    Personally, I think he needs an extended vacation from everyone. :-/
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!