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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on April 11, 2014
    Harry really seems to be getting better at knowing what he thinks & feels. Much of it thanks to Draco bringing him up short and telling him the truth and the likely results. Ron is probably going to be a handful as he's always yelled first then thought.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on April 11, 2014
    about #49..

    Well, he has 2 children down...still one to go. :-) Personally, I think Harry has the right to be
    rude, at least, every once in awhile, when it comes to trying to enjoy doing activities with his
    son.

    Say, can you up the romance a little during an interlude, when nothing life threatening is happening
    to Harry? In other words, a romantic interlude with the two of them....that is if Harry can get Lilly away
    from his hip at the moment. :-)
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  • From moodysavage on April 06, 2014
    lol lovely lovely lovely confrontation... I love how Harry handled that... awesome awesome awesome :)
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  • From ANON - SP777 on April 03, 2014
    about #47..

    *goofy grin* Daawwww! That was sweet at the end. That was a very nice [hot] interlude
    between them...now I expect Lilly to wake them up later. :-)
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  • From CareLessLover on March 30, 2014
    Oh, the Minstery is not going to like this at all. How will they retaliate?
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  • From ANON - SP777 on March 26, 2014
    about #46..

    1. LOL! Now that's a funny image, Harry suddenly cackling like a hyena, while
    trying to talk to the press.

    2. Uhh...he does have a plan that's going to work, right?
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on March 26, 2014
    Still reading and enjoying. Things seem settled between James and Lily and Al seems to be willing to "think about the things"
    which is good. Maybe we haven't seen the back of Ginny yet...what a witch! I'd like Harry to see put even more in her place...she's the one that wanted the divorce rather than talk & work on it not just complain. She really thought if Harry wasn't spending enough time in her bed to suit her that the only reason had to be he was having an affair? It couldn't be that they bored each other (or him anyway) or problems at work, a health problem (testostorone, depression, mid life crisis
    etc.) What an ego.
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  • From BAFan on March 26, 2014
    Ch. 46

    Hmm... I don't imagine the Ministry is going to take this lying down. Harry better be ready to face the consequences.
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  • From ANON - Polka dot on March 26, 2014
    It's not wide to burn bridges. I hope Draco has enough money to support Harry if this comes back to bite him.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on March 22, 2014
    about #45..

    Draco L. Malfoy would make a great children's counselor...and just corrupt
    children Everywhere! :-) This was a nice interlude.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on March 19, 2014
    That was a fun chapter. Especially Lily popping in on Harry & Draco while they were still in bed. And Draco's questioning her was inspired! It should create more "easyness" between Draco & her if not friendship. Lets Harry know his daughter more. When is Scorpius going to join the party so to speak?
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  • From BAFan on March 19, 2014
    Ch. 45

    The first part of this had me lol-ing! I'm surprised Harry didn't trip over the sheets or something trying to get to Lily. I especially liked the "creative wand-waving." *chortle*

    Loved Draco in this chapter. Good job!

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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on March 13, 2014
    Very emotional chapter. Ginny seems to be realizing that the marriage is over and she did a lot to kill it by herself. Being how volatile she is and self centered she may well go back to her original blow hard yelling ways. I think the kids are doing much better with calm truth being told them and a feeling of steadiness from Harry. I don't see Harry as a primary teacher or primary school owner. An investigator, Hogwarts professor or private teacher of defense sound possible. Or how about as a healer or a mind healer either private or St Mungos or Hogwarts. After everyone tinkering in his mind and all the trips to the infirmary he could really understand how children or people in general would need to be handled/helped. Harry must be tired of warfare and fighting and all the tension...mental or physical... they've caused him all these years.
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  • From truthseeker on March 07, 2014
    wait and re wind..... did we not have that scene earlier or is it my imagination? And didnt Scorpious already try to take the debt into his hands already because Al wanted Draco away from his dad. Al and Ginny are idiots!

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  • From BAFan on March 01, 2014
    Ch. 42

    Wow. As you said in one of your review replies, it's gotta hurt Ginny to know that she caused the end of her marriage because of a mistaken premise. When she asked Harry that last time if he'd been unfaithful, I halfway expected him to blow up at her. After all, how many times had he already denied it? But no, he kept his cool and perhaps now she believes him. Kudos to Draco for refraining to make typical Draco snarky remarks!

    Well done!


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