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By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - SP777 on October 09, 2013
    about #19

    Nice chapter, I admit I'm surprised you actually included James in this one. I was
    beginning to think it would just focus on Lily, with the occasional mention of Scorpius.
    It was nice to see all three kids here.

    The feeling that Harry got when he heard James was hurt, I almost felt, with him, his strength
    & ability to take no shit, of course with Ginny there things are about to backslide I guess.

    I'm guessing Draco has a another motive for taking on Scorpius' life debt?
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  • From ANON - Polka dot on October 07, 2013
    Well if she gets alimony she is probably worried about Harry not having a paycheck.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on October 07, 2013
    What is Ginny going to say now too mess things up!! I think she is vindictive. Scorpius & Albus sound so sweet...James too. I hope Draco doesn't go home but tells Harry he won't let Scorpius pay the life debt or maybe that he isn't finished "fixing" Harry (which is probably to the truth).
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  • From BAFan on October 07, 2013
    Ch. 19

    Could Ginny maybe be a little pissed off that Harry didn't let her know Jamie had been injured? I'd sure as hell be upset, in her place. When will we find out why Draco is so adamant about Scorpius not having this life-debt hanging over him? His reaction to Harry's letter should be interesting!
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on October 05, 2013
    I wish Malfoy would stay to help Harry with Lily but I can see why Harry doesn't want him to. I wish I knew why Draco divorced his wife. Most of all I wish Harry would toughen up and make a move on Draco! Or is it soften up & realize how he feels. While I'm wishing, I wish he'd stop whining about Ginny and what they should have had or could have had...they were never right for each other. They never even really knew each other & really Harry doesn't even admit to what he is or feels. He keeps listening to what other people want him to be.

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  • From ANON - Staycie on October 04, 2013
    Wow, it's amazing how life works out! I've been feeling like Harry in this story, the life that just seems all wrong and the people you can't seem to please at work or at home. I was on this site to find a good story to help me relax and just randomly clicked on this master piece! I honestly could relate to the story and the issues the characters have, even the advice was an eye opener! Thank you so much for your creativity and insight on problems people can have with life. You have really made my day and given me things to think about and hopfully change in my own life!!
    -Staycie
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  • From ANON - SP777 on October 03, 2013
    about #18...

    I really do hope Harry CAN help Draco in return, man acts like he has a stick
    shoved up his...*ahem*...AND he seems to have this wall around him.
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  • From JetlagLily on October 03, 2013
    I'm sorry, but... was that it? I'm disappointed! Not because it was bad, because it really wasn't, but because it's over! I want more! o.O Please, write more!
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  • From ANON - SP777 on September 28, 2013
    about #17...

    1. I know who the Spiders are, they're from Mars and their Leader is a man
    named Ziggy...and if that flew over your head, well...

    2. Seriously, it would be SO ironic if once everything was said & done and everybody
    and their momma [literally] wound up waiting with bated breathe to see if Harry winds
    up hooking with Draco after speculating that *gasp*...Harry could be gay and THEY would be the ones
    who accepted that fact first before Harry did, because they are just waiting to see Harry come out
    of 'denial'. ;-)

    ...and they would feel 'justified' that they KNEW all along before Harry did! At that point, I would just
    hex everybody.

    Get what I mean?
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on September 27, 2013
    Harry is kind of not with it when it comes to what Draco is thinking or feeling or am I reading more into Draco's eyes & expressions?
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  • From ANON - Polka dot on September 27, 2013
    I wonder if Ron thinks Harry is gay too. I am sure Ginny floated the idea by him.
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  • From NAnderson on September 26, 2013
    How can things feel like they're getting straight and yet messy at the same time? Ah well, wonderful work :) Looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on September 21, 2013
    Good job Harry!
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  • From ANON - SP777 on September 21, 2013
    about #16...

    'Never give up, never surrender'
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  • From ANON - polka dot on September 21, 2013
    well quitting was extreme i think Malfoys advice has turned bad
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