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Reviews for Of Shield and Sheath

By : KusanoSaku
  • From ANON - delia cerrano on June 26, 2013
    Certainly enjoying the different view of our favorite characters. Hoping to see more Severus/Harry soon.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on June 24, 2013
    Dumbledore and Ron are quite the pair aren't they? I'm liking your brave Harry friends with Draco & Severus very much.
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  • From ANON - harryluvsdray on June 24, 2013
    Don't get all tetchy on me,I just want to point out that you are spelling a character name incorrectly. It is Parvati, not Pavarti, which is closer to Pavarotti, the opera great. Truly it is not just you, this is rampant in fan fiction. Most misspell Ginny's given name, Ginevra, as Ginerva. Don't even get me started on Blaise Zabini. I just wonder why, if you don't know, you wouldn't look it up if you're going to write fan fiction? Again it's not just you. It also ties into my pet peeve about the dreadful spelling in many stories. It's distracting to me as a reader. Surely you writers would rather have readers riveted on plotline and characters rather than spelling and grammar. Thank you for your efforts.
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  • From ANON - K on June 24, 2013
    I found Harry's reaction with Dumbledore very weird. He doesn't set out to be disobedient doesn't matter. The fact was, he IS disobedient(irregardless of his intention). If Dumbledore didn't punish him then that would be a bad example to the rest of the school, "Be disobedient and be awarded." It doesn't matter if it was for a good cause. Yes, if he hadn't went then Hermione would probably be in danger but there was NO way of knowing that Harry and the rest wouldn't have been hurt or killed as well. The rules were set to PROTECT the students. If dumbledore didn't punish him in at least a small way, then other students would follow Harry's footsteps and would probably get hurt. Breaking rules and punishment though can be influenced by intention, it should no way condone behaviour that PROMOTES or encourages students to place themselves in danger. That's why punishment should be meted out to stop or at least deter this type of behaviour. They are FIRST YEARS for goodness sake, they shouldn't be allowed to do those kinds of things. It doesn't matter that Dumbledore gave the punishment for a different reason. If he didn't, then at least the Head of House should give out those punishments.

    Yes, Harry obviously know Dumbledore has something against him but the punishment itself is not uncalled for and to speak out about it would make Harry very arrogant indeed. He is not above punishment.

    In a normal scenario, anywhere on earth. If a child was awarded for saving their friend but by doing so they had actually gone against an order which was set to protect them and also had placed themselves in a situation of danger. the parent of that child while proud, may also be furious. "You award my child for almost getting hurt? What if he had gotten himself killed? Why did you allow him to go there?(when in fact the child was disobedient)"

    That's why, while I actually WANT Harry to save Hermione and probably EXPECT him to do it again if he had to repeat it, I still expect the teachers to reprimand him because as teachers that's is what they're supposed to do. There's be too many repercussions if teachers allow students to willy nilly let themselves get hurt.
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  • From ANON - reggie on June 24, 2013
    Loved the chapter,I like how they all worked together to defeat the troll!:) I think you should bring back Lily and I have a general idea how,she didn't die when Voldemort attacked the Potter home,he only stunned her because of Severus' request but then Dumbledore arrived and put her in some kind of magical coma...she's still in a coma but she communicates with Harry in his dreams like you've shown and what Harry told Severus was a clue to get his help but she hasn't told Harry the truth because she doesn't want to get his hopes up!!! Looking forward to the next chapter :)
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  • From ANON - reggie on June 23, 2013
    I really hate it when Dumbledore influences the sorting,but I love the story so far so I'm trying to not let it bother me...other than that,keep up the good work! :)
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on June 22, 2013
    You're a very good writer! I worry over a character in a story...just want to protect and and make other people be careful of him and care for him. How silly is that for heaven's sake!
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on June 21, 2013
    So far so good. Ron is really a prat in this one!! Looks like Dumbledore is really going to outdo himself in evilness. It has to be him that wouldn't let Harry be sorted into Slytherin. I hope Draco and Harry figure out that they are being kept apart & take a "it's us against them".
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on June 20, 2013
    That nasty Pansy! I wish Draco & Harry would be smart enough to see through Pansy's & everyones attempt to keep Harry away from Draco.
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  • From LeVeen on June 20, 2013
    Yeey new chapter each day! Wow! I really like this story and the way you write. I wonder if Harry ends up in Slytherin.
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  • From ANON - blj.14 on June 20, 2013
    Not quite a T,but definitely a D. I only read the first chapter. I just can't read another downer of a story. How awful can we treat Harry this time? I just read all 32 chapters of Bound to You,and am dying for something fluffy. I want Harry to be happy,not abused and beaten down. Evil manipulative Dumbledore saddens me. I need a happy,funny fix like "Some Jokes Just Aren't Funny," or "Raspberry Jam."
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  • From wherdatcomfrom on June 19, 2013
    Quite enjoyable. I love the way other characters are foiling Dumbledore's plans.
    Even the best laid plans can go that way, and I'm guessing that Ieson is Fawkes????
    Keep going, this is intriguing.
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  • From LeVeen on June 19, 2013
    I really like this story. At the end of chapter 4 you posted chapter 5. And then again in chapter 5 ;)
    When is the next chapter due?
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  • From ANON - reader on June 19, 2013
    like this story repeated last chapter in previous though
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