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Reviews for Face of Evil

By : dweek
  • From serasgiovanni on April 29, 2015
    I thought FACE OF WAR WAS THE AFTERMATH OF FACE OF EVIL BUT IF NOT SO, IF FOR THE LOVE OF GOD LOVE AND SEE A SEQUEL TO BE DESTROYED A TOM humiliating way. Is that asking too much?
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  • From ANON - Sincerely on September 23, 2013
    Whoa, what the heck!! I did not see that coming, not even sort of!! I love your story, please please post a sequel!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 22, 2013
    WOW. Please write a sequel, I am dying to see what happens with Daphne and Draco and Harry/Voldemort and Ginny.
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  • From ANON - B on September 22, 2013
    Hello again, ive really really enjoyed this fanfic - please please write a sequal i must know what happens :)
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  • From ANON - Dru on September 21, 2013
    The end?!
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  • From Kain on September 21, 2013
    Oh damn your are cruel. Now you MUST write a sequel after ending things on that note. There are still so many unresolved plots and you would be evil to keep the identity of the prisoner of cell 14 a secret. Going by the ending I take it that their is still some part of Harry lingering and it is subtly influencing Tom?

    please please please, write a sequel.
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  • From ANON - B on September 20, 2013
    Hey ther really enjoying this fic please update soon btw if u dont mind me asking how many chapters are you doing for this story and is there going to be a sequal? Thanks
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  • From kadajclone on September 17, 2013
    Gahhh teasing us with the identity of the prisoner in cell 14, your are evil lol. If it is who I think/hope it is, then Ron either made a booboo or this is some risky Trojan horse plot. Curious about the other prisoners in the cells as well and what became of the other Muggleborn's of not just the school but the entire Wizarding world. Did they escape? were they banished? or simply imprisoned or killed?

    For a while now it seems that Daphne has been going through a prolonged "Break the haughty" experience(tv tropes for more info) and now has had to deal with the big scare of giving birth to the Dark lords child. I also like the dynamic change she has gone through in regards to Ginny. in the beginning she looked down on her as the Dark Lords toy and now she is relying on her for protection and is noticeably less cocky. Blaise and Draco and still working there own schemes in Slytherin fashion but they should tread lightly because if Voldy finds out what they have been doing and what they have kept from him......whoooo boy, they would be in for some hell.

    Gonna be nice to see how Ginny fares in the meetings and if she will be able to hold any sway on the new direction of the wizarding world and whether or not any resistance will form to fight the new order. Also loved seeing her insult Bellatrix and Tom defending what he considered "his"........he is still evil but I enjoyed that.

    One last thing but is Tom still immortal? As I recall he has no more horcruxes and beyond being very powerful is still mortal. Unless I missed something while reading and it was already explained.

    -waits patiently for the next chapter-
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  • From ANON - Allison on September 14, 2013
    I seriously do not know why this story doesnt have more reviews. I enjoy the story line immensely! The only possible advice I could give you, is that you tend to jump around from first to third person point of view, and your verbs dont always follow the same tense.

    but its easily read past, despite my grammar nazi tendencies. Your storyline is well thought out, and extremely enticing. And I love that you have a group of main characters, rather than just one.

    I cannot wait for the next chapter!!!!!

    Please for the love of all that is good in this world, update soon.

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  • From Kain on September 07, 2013
    It is late where I am so this review will be a small teaser for the one I will give sometime tomorrow.


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  • From kadajclone on August 14, 2013
    Ah missed this.

    Well figured Draco had done something with the tea he gave Ginny and it looks like even Tom's inner circle are beginning to understand that if you fuck with him, he will wreck you...........or someone you care about. Looks like Draco just got a big helping of some humble pie. In the beginning of this I did not care much for Daphne or any other slytherin types for that matter do to them playing games with Ginny and Luna but now it seems there getting a good idea of the madman they through their lot in with and I am slowly starting to feel pity. It' like game of thrones meets Harry potter here with everyone plotting to there own ends lol. I enjoy that Luna knows she is being manipulated but is going along with it as to not cause her any unnecessary trouble, she is no good to anyone dead or otherwise incapacitated. Ginny needs to step her game up a bit and clue into when she is being played though. I also enjoy the dnamics of the Tom/Ginny ...."thing". She both hates and desires him while he is so un-apologeticly evil but still seems to hold her in some regard. Would be interesting if she was able to manipulate his feelings for her in some small ways to her favor and perhaps make things a bit better for the survivors of the light side.

    love this story

    -waits patiently for the next chapter-
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  • From ANON - Kain on July 15, 2013
    Love it, looks like Daphne overplayed her hand a bit.
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  • From ANON - Kain on July 04, 2013
    Hmm enjoying where this is going, sucks about Hermione though. It will be interesting to see if Daphne gets in too deep and actually starts to form a real bond with Ginny. She seems more or less pragmatic than evil and is looking out for herself. This chapter was also quite hot by the way, kudos.
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  • From kadajclone on June 30, 2013
    Hmm dark, but very interesting with a fresh plot. Keep at it
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