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Reviews for A Marriage of Convenience

By : NinaSweets
  • From ANON - lokiisourking on November 05, 2014
    OOOOOMYGOOOOD i love this! Its so cute! Snape doesnt do cute usually but yours does it so well even though hes still a mean bastard! Hes so perfect. Please update soon this is great
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  • From ANON - Arky on November 04, 2014
    The formatting of the newest chapter is really off and needs to be fixed :(

    I'd let you know how I felt about the chapter, but with the hard-to-read formatting, I just gave up this chapter as a lost cause until it's fixed. I'll let you know then :D
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  • From jules3677 on November 04, 2014
    Poor Harry. He marries to get out of the tournament. Has a tolerable relationship with his husband. Voldie reappears. Now its expected that he will get pregnant to prove his marriage. Honestly his luck is rather poor but luckily Snape is supportive of him. Looking forward to where you take this story in the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Samantha on November 04, 2014
    Love this story, can't wait for more.

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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on November 02, 2014
    I was getting ready to scream at the thought of Severus and Harry being separated. Thankfully not true and their three way conversation including Dumbledore after that was sooo funny. So crazy about them as a couple...I hope Harry does get pregnant. I think they would be so good together with a child given their childhoods...so funny also.
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  • From Jan on November 02, 2014
    Interesting chapter, 19 please ^_~
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  • From cullengal101 on November 02, 2014
    hey
    great chapter please keep updating
    cullengal101
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  • From ANON - Rebecca on November 02, 2014
    Your story has potential, but I recommend that you get a beta reader to help you edit your story and to clear out the plot holes.
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  • From ANON - moodysavage on November 02, 2014
    I so love this story! That session with fudge being the marriage counselor was just hilarious. A wand through the eye of a needle lol.
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  • From ANON - Marron on November 02, 2014
    That was a great chapter. Funny but also sweet. But somehow I doubt that the potion is going to work as it should.
    Well, things are interestng.
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  • From Bickymonster on November 02, 2014
    Great update, thank you.
    The formatting on this chapter was a bit difficult to read, with there being no space between the paragraphs though, so that might be something you want to watch in future.
    Looking forward to the next update. :)
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  • From ANON - staar on November 01, 2014
    ok that Minister needs to go ok !!!! Harry and Snape in this story have me laughing so much.......BTW loved the update and thanks for it see you soon !!!!!
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on October 31, 2014
    Oh I think I'd like it best as a long chaptered story. This is one of my favorite stories!! Love Harry/Severus. They are still the perfect couple in my mind. Can't wait to hear what Sev wants to talk to Harry about. It can't be good since Dumbledore is there pushing him to talk. I love all Harry & Sev's "sweet moments and kisses". They make me laugh and make me want to go ohhhh sometimes at the same time. Please don't write anything that makes them break up. That would be waaay to terribly sad.
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  • From ANON - spk on October 26, 2014
    Definitely enjoying this. Can't wait for more. :)
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  • From ANON - PhoenixPlume320 on October 14, 2014
    I really love this story, so I'm sure you can understand that I was very disappointed when it stopped at chapter 17. I like how Harry such a little housewife, and the part where Snape was having that stare-down with Barty/Mad-eyed and kissed Harry senseless. The worst part is how the last chapter left off in a cliff hanger...
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