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Reviews for A Marriage of Convenience

By : NinaSweets
  • From BAFan on March 30, 2014
    Ch. 11

    I thought it was a good chapter. I liked the way Dumbledore turned the tables on Draco, though honestly I can't see Draco admitting what he'd done quite that easily. And since Snape isn't outright attacking Harry with his Legilimency and is giving him slightly more helpful instructions than he did in canon, maybe the Occlumency lessons will be successful this time.

    McGonagall wants to talk to Harry and doesn't seem happy about it. Does it have to do with the Second Task? Maybe someone thinks Harry should be Cedric's "thing he would most miss," or whatever the exact phrase was? It's a good thing Severus went with Harry. I can't see him letting that happen.
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  • From Jan on March 24, 2014
    OMG! I absolutely loved this chapter. I can't wait for chapter 11, hope it's soon ^_^
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  • From cullengal101 on March 24, 2014
    hi
    I am still loving this story cant wait for the next chapter please keep updating
    cullengal101
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on March 24, 2014
    Really fun chapter!(and I never noticed if there were any missing "w's" or "s's") Love it when Severus and Harry remember they are married - so tender - just what they both need...someone to love and care for and someone to love and care for them.
    I wish they would realize that they don't either one want to give each other up...that it is a real marriage...soon. Then it would be them against Voldemort and everyone else.
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  • From ANON - Jen on March 23, 2014
    Like the story so far hope you will be continuing with it soon
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  • From ANON - Cassie on March 22, 2014
    Of course there are marshmallows here, we're everywhere :P As for your age... I don't think you're that young I think that it's due o the story being from Harry's perspective and he is very young in this story. I like the story so far, especially that the relationship between Harry and Severus is progressing at a quite sedate pace, Because I hate when A forced marriage goes from zero to a million in a chapter.
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  • From ANON - Randi on March 20, 2014
    I enjoy the story so far. I like the plot.
    You asked if you seem young. I got the opinion you're in your teens. When you had Harry on Shapes lap and that teacher said "I'm trying to eat!' ... That's something I haven't heard since highschool. There's plenty of different reactions to have but that one is childish. On the other hand, you could have decided that's how Sinistra is.
    I think your writing is good. Your voice in writing will mature with you; the more you read or interact with people the better understanding you will have of how to handle these things. I don't really see a generalized lack of maturity in your writing. It just pops up a few times.
    I look forward to reading the next chapter. Your story has captured my interest.
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  • From ANON - slmncpm on March 17, 2014
    i actually have no idea how old you are, or what the marshmallow thing is about. LOL but then, i am probably a lot older than most fanfic readers. as for music, i listen to old rock, stuff from the 60-80's when i want to chill.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on March 16, 2014
    You do "read" on the young side - late teens maybe early 20's- whatever you are, it doesn't matter. I enjoy your writing and am finding this story delightful. Love the "dance" between Severus & Harry. Glad Harry is pushing Severus a bit and that he cares for him as well as feels sure that Sev cares for him also. Don't like that Cho! I'm jealous on Snape's behalf!
    Also almost the same for Cedric. Hurry with the next chapters (yes chapters...I'm greedy) please. As I said I really like this story. Always partial to Severus/Harry...so opposite, so "cute", but similiar backgrounds, both strong independent people. Sort of mavericks.
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  • From ANON - moodysavage on March 16, 2014
    Interesting...how old do we think you are. Younger than me but not all that young. Old enough to have read plenty and have a good handle on writing mechanics as well as a good knowledge of pacing, plot development and character development. If anything might make you seen young it's your choice to make Harry only fourteen years old. Most people with their own kids would not go there because it's creepy but you actually do good job of presenting Harry as his own age without being to mature and keep Snape from seeming like a pedophile but more as a protector who suddenly finds himself as a husband and trying to balance the two with Harrys age.
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  • From cullengal101 on March 16, 2014
    hi loved the chapter cant wait for next one
    cullengal101
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  • From ANON - The Pink Fuzzy Elephant on March 12, 2014
    I like this quite a lot.
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  • From ANON - Kitsune-Demoness on March 10, 2014
    I haven't reviewed a story in a really long time, but this one was really worth taking the time to praise the authoress. I really love this story and can't wait for the next chapter. Please try to update soon there is just not enough Snape/Harrys out there that actually don't ruin their characters with OOCness
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  • From ANON - tinamaki on March 08, 2014
    Wasn`t Harry 15 during the tournament? Or is my counting just messed up?
    However, I really like your story. But I`ll just imagine Harry to be 15, makes me feel better. Maybe because that was the age when I started to be sexually active. And one is legal with 16, where I live... 14 makes me a tiny bit uncomfortable.

    Anyway, I absolutely love your story!!
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  • From ANON - tina on March 08, 2014
    Wow, they are soo cute:)
    I am looking forward to your next update!!
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