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Reviews for A Marriage of Convenience

By : NinaSweets
  • From ANON - orkchild on July 02, 2013
    For a fragile person you have picked a very rough hobby. With that said this chapter is a very good start to a wonderful story and I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Usagi on July 02, 2013
    Interesting concept and I'm anxious to see how you develop it. You have a few punctuation error's, such as no punctuation in quotations. i.e:. "Go now" Snape said. When it should be: "Go now," Snape said.
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  • From Leania07 on June 28, 2013
    Well how interesting; I take it this will be one of those stories where love blossoms over time? Or are you making this with a mean Snape in mind who does severe emotional harm to Harry? I'd like to know a head of time, because I don't like the ones with the cruel endings; don't mind the occasional sob parts, as long as I know there will be a happy ending. Keep up the good work, though!

    Leania
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  • From ANON - My Alternate Reality on June 28, 2013
    Great start! I loved Hermione's question that he could accept male pregnancy but not gay marriage. Look forward to more!!!
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  • From dantae on June 28, 2013
    This was a great start. I can't wait to see where it goes!
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  • From SchroedingersKat on June 28, 2013
    Nice beginning! I do enjoy fics where Harry is getting out of participating in the tournement. Keep going!!
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  • From ANON - jxadams on June 28, 2013
    Hope you are going to finish this. Great potential for all sorts of things.
    Like the tone you have set in your story. Like that Harry sounds & acts like a 14 year old.
    What is Snape up to? Where is he going to? Doesn't take that long to get magical paperwork.
    You are going to finish this? Aren't you?
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  • From BAFan on June 28, 2013
    Ch. 1

    Good start. I don't think I've encountered this particular scenario before, so should be very interesting to see what follows.
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  • From teriwright on June 28, 2013
    Ohhh...i like this. I'm happy to see the ability to divorce at the end and I sincerely hope this isn't a story of betrayal, humiliation or continued forced bonding. That snape will keep his word about divorcing after the tourny and it's more of a story of the one year of marriage. Will they have a different perspective of each other when it's all over or will they hate each other even more?
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  • From ANON - heartstar on June 28, 2013
    Oh I love this I hope to see more and where you take this
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  • From alma on June 27, 2013
    Good start, Makes me wonder what are Snape's intentions, Good or bad?
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  • From ANON - jaybelle93 on June 27, 2013
    This is off to a great start, however I'm worried that it's a tad rushed. I was surprised Severus was so willing to marry Harry. I'm interested to see where this is going to go, so please update soon.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on June 27, 2013
    I just love this kind of story (forced to marry then finding out they love each other). Good start!!
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  • From ANON - Higashi on June 27, 2013
    Promising start. Would love to read more. =)

    The age difference is a bit uncomfortable. But then, Harry's age has always been problematic in canon: 11-years-old boy burning a man to death? 12-years-old fighting a basilisk?

    But, as I said before, this first chapter is intriguing and I always love a marriage-fic. Specially if it's snarry! ;)
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  • From ANON - Strawbeare on June 27, 2013
    Chapter 2. Please
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