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Reviews for A Marriage of Convenience

By : NinaSweets
  • From ANON - Doodle_Penguin on August 25, 2015
    Nnnooooo!!! Come Back!!! I NEED more chapters!!! Please!!
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  • From morningstorm70 on August 20, 2015
    I read all those chapters I caught up to you I'm really looking forward to the next chapter I really really hope that Snape and Harry get together and just stop playing around
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  • From morningstorm70 on August 18, 2015
    i really do like this story
    I hope they're able to comsumate their nuptials
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  • From morningstorm70 on August 17, 2015
    I like it so far please say it's finished
    Well onward to chapter 2
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  • From ANON - atymer on August 13, 2015
    I love the characterizations in this story. Harry and Sev's verbal interactions are most entertaining, when they aren't dreadfully painful and barbed. I do wonder why Remus let the wolf loose, perhaps the experimental potions lowered his inhabitions or he was just so p.o. about the thought of Sev and Harry together? I remains a mystery I enjoy speculating over. Harry is trying so hard to hold onto his integrity, yet I do hope it doesn't get him killed. Disarming the old wanker won't keep Harry alive to fight another day. I was very happy when Siri tossed Molly out of the house, though I felt bad for the rest of the family. No one is perfect and Siri still has a lot of issues. Who doesn't? But Harry is not a baby, she needs to get over herself. I look forward to the next chapters. This is most entertaining! Kudos for the plot twists and avoiding repeats of canon's deaths and conclusions.
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  • From Leania07 on August 11, 2015
    Wow, that was a huge ledge to leave one on. I've noticed the good stories one always has to wait for the next chapter, because one refuses to wait until it's completed. :P So they have a temporary split, which obviously pains Harry and Severus is attempting to act unbothered by it all...but we know his secret. So I've been trying to decipher what Severus' issue is; afraid to love or just afraid Harry will leave him? By leave I mean both die and/or no longer wish to be with him. Both seem adequate right now, and I suppose it could be both. You're very tricky; I like this story so far.

    Leania
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  • From Jan on August 07, 2015
    0_0 this relationship is rapidly going downhill, I hope they're able to mend it soon, please update chapter 28 soon.

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  • From cullengal101 on August 06, 2015
    hey
    brilliant chapter
    please keep up the good work
    cullengal101
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  • From djaddict on August 06, 2015
    I am quite disappointed in Snape for not noticing his hand.
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  • From jules3677 on August 05, 2015
    Now we're getting to the crux of the matter; Harry's desire to live, but at what cost? Snape didn't mention Harry's hand after his detention with Umbridge. Did he notice? Will he move against her of behalf of his estranged husband?
    Exciting chapter, Harry's growing up beginning to think for himself.
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  • From ANON - moodysavage on August 05, 2015
    Darnit... Snape still doesn't know about Harry and the blood quill. He's going to go ballistic... and then he's going to feel horrible... worse than horrible since he sent Harry there for his detentions too so he caused Harry to be tortured even more. Snape being mad has made him less observant... though he does deserve to be mad. I totally like that Cedric's kisses are not up to par with Snape's and I loved that Harry compared the two the way he did :)
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  • From ANON - starr on August 04, 2015
    I know your on vacation and all but with all Snape saw in Harry's mind he didn't see what pig face is doing to him !!!!!!! Well I said it and Thanks for the update !!!!!
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  • From ANON - Lumcer on July 30, 2015
    I kept passing this story over, not sure if it was what I was looking for. I'm so glad I didn't skip it over this time! I loved practically every second of it! I hope there is more to come! I'll be checking in!

    KCK-Lumcer
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  • From Sablesilverrain on July 16, 2015
    Very nice!

    Ahaha, I tried to get ahold of my Mom for Mother's Day, but she never responded. I think she may be in rehab again...

    Now she won't know my new number when she gets out, so it's kinda sucky, I don't know if I'll ever hear from her again. She's not the best at keeping in touch, but I haven't changed my number in years, so she always had a way to call me when she was able.

    On another, more pleasant note, I really liked the chapter, but I'm a little upset that Harry and Sev are drifting further apart. I hope something happens soon to force them closer together.

    Oooh, you could have Sev find out about the Blood Quills! Yes??
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  • From jules3677 on June 21, 2015
    Liked how Snape got Harry acquitted at his trial. Sad that Sirius basically blackmailed Harry into the years separation from Snape. Everyone appears to believe they know what's best for him as shown my Mrs Weasley's disapproval of Harry's relationship/marriage. So pleased that you continue to write and post this wonderful story.
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