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Reviews for A Marriage of Convenience

By : NinaSweets
  • From ANON - Anon on May 28, 2015
    I absolutely adore this story!!! Keep up the great work and I can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - DhampirParadox on May 18, 2015
    This Chapter must have been posted just hours after I'd read the last one *sneaksy* Glad to finally read it. The tension in their relationship is just killing me. I know Snape said "I won't wait for you" thing but I really hope they don't sleep with other people (even casually) during their time apart - though admittedly it is much more likely that if anyone will it'll be Snape and not Harry. *gaaaah* you have me on tenderhooks (and they're very tender!).

    I'm all excited to see if you'll bring Umbridge into it. Also very curious to see if anything will happen with Remus (seeing he's mentioned in this chapter) or Cedric.

    Thank you!
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  • From Jan on May 15, 2015
    Yay! I'm so happy that Sirius kicked Molly out, I always hated that everyone thought it was ok for her and Dumbledore do and say whatever they wanted in Sirius own home, no matter what he said, which I find to be the biggest insult you can give a host while your being a guess in there home. Please update chapter 27 soon ^_^

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  • From cullengal101 on May 15, 2015
    hi
    great story
    please keep updating
    cullengal101
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  • From SlythindorMalfoy on May 14, 2015
    Great story! I really like it, however, just a few things I'd like to understand. I know its Harry/Snape centric but it seems you put Remus in prison and just forgot about him. There was bare mention of him in this chapter. And Harry or Sirius doesn't seem bothered in the least that Remus is spending a life sentence in prison. If not Harry, I would at least expect some kind of reaction from Sirius. Also, what about Cedric? You mentioned a few chapters ago that he was arrested. I saw no mention of him after that or maybe I missed it? Is he in prison or did he get released? Harry wouldn't be the type of person to just let that go.

    That's it. :) Not a flame, just some things I didn't quite understand. Hope you update soon. :)

    Btw, I'm really sad they're on a 'break'. Hope they patch up soon!
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  • From ANON - higashi on May 09, 2015
    I really, really love this story. It just keeps getting better with each chapter! I think you made a wonderful work re-telling Year 4 to fit the plot, and I'm anxious to see what awaits us in Year 5 with nasty Umbridge now at Hogwarts. But, most of all, I like how you're spinning Harry and Snape's relationship. You haven't shied away from the fact that there is a tremendous age-difference between them, or from the fact that Harry is not only Snape's junior but also still a fifteen-year-old boy (and previously, a fourteenth), and have still developed their relationship in a sensible, plausible way.

    Eagerly looking forward to future chapters!
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  • From on May 09, 2015
    I'll be glad of a little jealousy if Harry realizes Sev is jealous cause he cares. But not too much...I can't stand the pain of their separation as it is. Yes I know You're a good writer and it's fiction but I really get into it and I WANT THEM TO KNOW HOW THEY FEEL AND STAY TOGETHER! Not a year of misery and stress... Please...pretty please. By the way I liked that you threw Molly out for being mean and judgemental to Sirius and in effect Harry.
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  • From Severus1snape on May 09, 2015
    thank you for the chapter, I liked it.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 09, 2015
    i want to see a jealous harry as well as a snape. harry says he cares but some overwhelming jealousy on harrys part could really cement his true feelings. he seems far to flighty throughout this story and i think he really needs that wake up call as well.
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  • From ANON - starr on May 09, 2015
    good god your giving Harry other boy/girlfriends !!!! I wonder how that going to go with Snape, don't hurt him that much ok !!!!!! he has been hurt enough and Harry and him should be together hope this wakes Snape up and fast !!!!! Thanks for the update !!! :):)
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  • From ANON - DhampirParadox on May 09, 2015
    Yes! An update. *happy shuffle, as it's hard to dance while sitting on a bed*
    I can't believe it took me so long to check for a update. I love the new chapter, I see Snape is being he usual welcoming self ;)
    The blow up between Sirius and Molly was EPIC. I wonder if things will eventually cool of and they'll return. I have to admit part of me questions how readily Harry agreed to Sirius's request of being separated from Snape for a year - but then he did say he would support Harry no matter his decision so there is that... Also I understand about Harry wanting to be normal for a while before properly settling down with Snape (if he decides to). A jealous Snape is something I'm look forward to *laughs gleefully*
    I hope my rambling made some sense, thanks for the update.

    It's Mother's Day tomorrow so in the words of Rove McManus "Say hi to your mum for me". ^_^

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  • From ANON - tsuudama on May 06, 2015
    I still dont understand 'nagging' but i have an idea...

    I dont have much time to read hp stories right now, but each two months or si i stay one day at home and your story is always in the first two to be checked!!!

    Please dont stop writing, i really really want to see
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  • From stephie on May 02, 2015
    So I have read all 25 current chapters and can't help but wonder...... is there more for this story cooking in your head?
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  • From ANON - GabrielleR on April 25, 2015
    Hello!
    I just wanted to tell you how incredibly amazing I consider your story
    I will be looking forward for more updates :)

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  • From on April 22, 2015
    Just reread the earlier chapters and read the last few...great stuff. Am absolutely crazy about Harry & Severus!! I would enjoy a jealous Severus but I hate Harry leaving him even for a little while. Severus is going to feel sooo rejected and then seems so little boy who doesn't know what he wants and is a child who plays atound/dates around.
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