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Reviews for A Marriage of Convenience

By : NinaSweets
  • From ANON - Anon on April 07, 2015
    I agree absolutely with snape_lust, this seems a complete departure from the growing relationship so far. Its horrible that Snape would treat Harry like he doesn't matter and I'm not sure how their relationship can be a good health one from here. I just cannot see any justification.

    But you've been able to keep my focus this whole time, so I trust you know what your doing :)

    AB
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 07, 2015
    I agree absolutely with snape_lust, this seems a complete departure from the growing relationship so far. Its horrible that Snape would treat Harry like he doesn't matter and I'm not sure how to keep their relationship can be a good health one from here. I just cannot see any justification.

    But you've been able to keep my focus this whole time, so I trust you know what your doing :)

    AB
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  • From ANON - snape_lust on April 06, 2015
    As always, I'm happy to see another chapter.

    I have to say though, if I were Harry, I'd be quite pissed that Snape riled up my abusive relatives, then left me with them without any sort of explanation, clothing, protection, or during the week, communication. Harry is forced to sneak food at the very least yet again. Who knows how many times he's been knocked around? We all know he's been verbally abused while there.

    Snape then waltzes back in, starts another fight, and doesn't even offer a scrap of information or apology, nor ask if Harry is ok. He obviously knows Harry is abused given the details he shares with Fish... why then would he leave him in a hostile and volatile situation? There is no good reason. He's essentially condoning and participating in the abuse.

    What was the point of even vising the Dursley's in the first place... again, without sharing this info with Harry before hand? Can we say "set up"? I get the impression Snape planned this all along and I suspect - though I hope I'm wrong - he also set up the Dursley's to be angry with Harry before he abandoned him. Even without the dementors, he was already provoking them. Why is Harry happy to see Snape after that? He should be angry and lost all trust in Snape.

    I'm starting to not like or respect Snape at all and at this point I'm hoping Harry dumps his ass. The Tournament is over, Harry got what he needed. There is no reason to continue this abusive relationship. This latest stunt is just too much to forgive.

    whew!!! Thanks for letting me vent. Perhaps I'm identifying too much with Harry. Regardless of my anger at Snape, I'm still very much enjoying this story. Obviously, you've engaged this reader to get such an emotional reaction :-)
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  • From DhampirParadox on April 06, 2015
    Seriously I cannot thank you enough for such a wonderful, well written, dramatic read so far. I often find in fanfiction that one or more of the following suffers in varying degrees: grammar, plot or characterisation. But not here :D
    I adore the dynamics you've established in their relationship, especially that Snape can still be a stubborn, grumpy, petty bastard at times! The man is far from perfect. I'm love the slow build in their relationship, the general hesitancy in going any further (oh the UST!) and how you've woven in a much amended plot of GoF into the tale.

    This is my brain at the moment: Poor Lupin! What's going to happen to Cedric? Fake pregnancy?!? Consummation!!!?! (I'm rather excited about that one) ... Voldemort! *dun dun duuuuhn*

    Btw happy belated Australia day (if you're into that sort of thing... I'm not very nationalistic myself). And Happy Easter - I stayed in bed, ate an easter egg and finished reading this instead of getting up straight away :D


    If I could make one request, could you consider crossposting this on Ao3 as I would love to have a epub vers. on my Kobo. Plus it would be easier to keep track of updates and get more people reading it (it deserves to be read!).

    Kudos!
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  • From ANON - DhampirParadox on April 06, 2015
    *Gaaaaah* I am so happy I discovered this fic. A great random find if ever there was one. I followed a rec for a different fic to this site and decided to then peruse the Snarry collection :) The description intrigued me so I decided to give it a go. BEST. DECISION. EVER. I've been looking for a GoF Snarry!AU for a while and here it is!

    I stayed up till nearly 6am reading until my dad knocked on my door (for the third time that night/morning):
    DAD: Jay, it's after 5 are you asleep? ME: ... DAD:Jay, are you asleep? ME:Yes. DAD:Time for bed. ME:I don't need sleep, I'm a Zombie. DAD:Get ready. ME:I don't want to, if I stay up for 2 more hours I'll have been wake for 24hrs. DAD:You're close enough. Teeth. ME:It's only been 22hrs and 6--no 8 minutes. *I sound strangely euphoric* In fact I want to stay up all day and see how long I last - it could be an experiment. *I nearly walk into door frame* *wanders off to do my teeth*

    I had just finished chapter 18 and I really wanted to review last night (after I re-read that hilarious argument/banter between Snape and Harry in Dumbles office) but the sneaky bugger had turned off the internet.
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  • From cullengal101 on April 05, 2015
    hey
    loved the chapter
    please keep updating
    cullengal101
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  • From ANON - moodysavage on April 04, 2015
    I love seeing this updated. And I'm glad they visited the dursleys... But what did snape find out our talk about while Harry was with Dudley? Was there any real or lasting revenge? And that memory of Dudleys was pretty horrifying. Well done with that :)
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  • From Jan on April 04, 2015
    Love the petty fights between Severus and Petunia, can't wait for chapter 25 and see what's going to happen with Harry's trial, will it be like the book... or will it have a twist?
    Happy Easter! ^_^
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on April 03, 2015
    Loved the verbal sparring match between Snape and Petunia. Loved that Dudley kinda apologized. Laughed at the author's note. Wish the rain would go away and dump on California(they need it). If it rains here anymore we're going to have to build an ark.
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  • From ANON - starr on April 03, 2015
    your so funny that people think your weird !!!! at a party :) thanks for the update to bad Snape didn't kill at least one of them :(:(
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  • From ANON - badaxx17 on April 01, 2015
    Finally some revenge. I anyway for the next one.
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  • From Sablesilverrain on March 31, 2015
    Oh, and one minor correction, now that I've re-read the chapter: it's spelled 'taut,' not 'taught.'

    I really have to say, though, I much prefer your misspelling to the word 'taunt' being used instead. That happens to be my pet peeve.

    So kudos to you for having the right word, just please spell it right, if not for me, for yourself.

    Other than that, the story is great, and I love it.

    More soon, please!
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  • From Sablesilverrain on March 26, 2015
    Okay, so first off, I have to say, I could have kissed you when I read about PRINCE Manor. You don't know how mant times I've yelled at stories for having a SNAPE Manor. It's just so... NO! So, yes, thank you for actually keeping true to Snape's family tree. I, for one, really appreciate it.

    Secondly, the almost-sex scenes are hot, and I want more! LOL.

    Thirdly, I'm eagerly waiting to see what happens with the Dursleys, so please update soon!

    --Sablesilverrain
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  • From Severus1snape on March 19, 2015
    Oh oh oh, revenge?????? POST MORE
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  • From Severus1snape on March 19, 2015
    This story is brilliant!!!
    I only have one "problem" with it - is it me, or are there 4 Tasks they have to go through? (You said the 1st was Dragons, the 2nd was mermaid, then you call another one about the Mirror the 2nd also??) Or is it just me who got it wrong, huh.

    Either way, I love this story!
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