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Reviews for Children of the Light

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From SlythindorMalfoy on February 20, 2018

    This was awesome and beautiful!!! I loved it! Thanks for posting! xD


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  • From SParker on February 09, 2018

    This was VERY interesting! Also reminds me of a comic I read long ago...


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  • From wasparkman on January 21, 2018

    Good chapter and I enjoyed the first story (which I had not read before) but you attached this chapter to the wrong story.


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  • From HavocTellenoi on September 17, 2013
    I swear you write so well just to rip people's heart out with your beautiful stories. All nearly 300 of them, are overwhelmingly amazing and emotive and tons of adjectives I can't rightly access right now because I want to cry for what happened to Harry and Draco in this one, as well as for Sarra and Angela. I'd have dearly loved to see this in a longer work, but at the same time it does seem a perfect length just as is. Keep up the astounding work, it is greatly appreciated!
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  • From ANON - Indranyx on July 30, 2013
    This story was amazing. You are a fantastic writer. The timeframes were easy to distinguish and I enjoyed the Ender's Game-like schooling. A great idea executed with precision.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 16, 2013
    Absolutely amazing :)
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  • From ANON - blj.14 on July 11, 2013
    Thank you,that was truly thought provoking and intriguing. However,it left my mind buzzing with myriad questions. I really wanted Hermione and Ron to get their just desserts. The moment they realize they are no longer allies but prey. Lab rats to be studied and perhaps experimented on. They might be bred so the muggles would not run out of wizards to study. All their family and friends in side by side cells,with no rights or freedom. I'd also be interested in how other magical nations handled this. I'm sure the house elves and goblins could use their own magic to hide themselves. Do you have a follow up epilogue where Harry and Draco have their home in some beautiful peaceful place? Please?!?
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on July 09, 2013
    Wow that was a way different story - to me anyway. Very good!
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  • From moodysavage on July 08, 2013
    wow... that was really amazing. Very different and interesting. You packed a lot of story into this and it was wonderfully done. You did a great job of showing a world where there is no happy ending for the wizarding world but not because of Voldemort but muggles... which makes it impossible to ever go back to the way things were. Atypical and I really really liked this.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on July 08, 2013
    Aww...I really wish they could have learned Time Magic to go back
    to where Harry & Draco lived to tell them that they survived & Harry
    and Draco's sacrifice helped create a new type of Wizardry.

    This was different and familiar to me, like I read something like this
    once upon a time.
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  • From ANON - ObsidianPhoenix on July 08, 2013
    Oh wow! I've always enjoyed your writing and confesses to reading without reviewing because I'm always anxious to get to the next one, but this one just stops me cold and all I can say is wow! Absolutely wonderful.
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  • From Christopher11 on July 08, 2013
    Not a very good story. Seems like a 'bash on the Weasleys and Granger' poopfest in my honest opinion. 1 out of 5.
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  • From BAFan on July 08, 2013
    Wow. Once again I am left almost speechless by one of your stories. This was sad and happy
    and bittersweet and altogether wonderful.
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  • From Bickymonster on July 08, 2013
    This is such a weird and wonderful idea and concept. Beautifully written - though I expected nothing less from you of course ;). Thank you for sharing.
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