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By : pepperdoc
  • From ANON - sheedy on July 19, 2013
    I will admit to having originally having reservations about this fic. You have completely won me over. I can not wait for the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - Victoria on July 19, 2013
    This story is fast-paced and full of mystery. It keeps getting better and better.
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  • From ErisNight on July 19, 2013
    So I was reading this pretty enthusiastically and when it got to the kiss i nearly dropped my phone and quite literally went "ohhhh snap" lol. I as not expecting that but I loved it haha!! That is just my style kissing the girl to "cover up" their convo lol!

    Also, because the chapter was of course awesome, "Ward of the Headmaster" basically means sex slave to me!! So bring on my sexy Dom Healer Draco who makes her bed to his will! Lol granted i know that's improbable but it still excites me lol!!


    Good luck moving! I look forward to the next update!
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  • From ErisNight on July 17, 2013
    Aw:) This chapter gave me this lovely warm feeling. I especially liked Draco's outburst about not washing his hands. That kind of talk would have made me want to kiss him!!

    I'm glad he was able to save her, he seems so concerned about her and his friends at the school. This Draco is so genuine that I'm like gushing all over him. But damn you Justin! ever hear of jurisdiction!! You can't have my Draco!!
    Speaking of which! Who's the A-hole throwing purple spells at Hermione!
    I'm thinking i know who it is, but I'm not sure if i'm allowed to say it here.
    As river song would say from Doctor Who... "Spoilers"

    I can't wait for Chapter 5 :)
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  • From ANON - lemonade on July 15, 2013
    This is a really interesting read so far. I wonder what will happen next, and why the headmaster wanted the both of them to be in that place. He seems very shady.

    On a completely separate note, a freaky coincidence happened when I read the word 'cicada'. It was at that exact moment that the cicadas started singing outside of my place. So very, very weird!!!! I was like "wow, magical sound effects". :D
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  • From ErisNight on July 15, 2013
    Cicadas.... Grrr. they are like my natural born enemy lol! We have a swarm of them in the place I live lol. But if you knew where that was you would understand how unusual that is! GRRRR. Lol

    Reading about Luis' BBQ really REALLY makes me want some. I want to have access to a mission like that, and get to eat at a buffet that's homemade food everyday. I kinda want to take a vacation and live this life lol! Horseback into town, pumpkin bread by Rose and a real life Cowboy like Anthony to keep me entertained! I've NEVER seen a real cowboy lol!

    But Anthony... Yummy haha I'll explain my thoughts on him elsewhere lol!

    I'm glad the contract between Draco and Mr. Green was discussed. I was wondering how a boss could force an employee to take someone shopping lol. But i suppose Draco is indebted to him for giving him a job. You've peaked my interest once again with Draco and his England life, since we know Blaise is taking care of his finances, he could transfer the majority of his money over to Texas and start over there(since he has nothing back in England). But he hasn't yet so it makes me wonder if it will pave the way for his possible return home with Hermione.

    Although it also made me wonder if Hermione might stay there with him ultimately considering, she's grown apart from Ron and Harry. This was a very interesting chapter and gave me A Lot of food for thought.

    I like that despite Draco's apparently kind nature he still has his spark. I love it when he gets all sarcastic on Hermione and shuts her down. I think the combination of her assuming too much and Draco being able to stall her immediately will help speed along their reconciliation. I mean if he were a Draco that just argued with her, he wouldn't change her opinion of him. But these two characters seem to mesh really well.

    I can't wait for Chapter 4! I want to know what happens next! Will Hermione and Draco be forced to sex it out in order to win their freedom if they are captured ;}
    J/K
    Eris:)

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  • From Trelweny on July 15, 2013
    Fascinating story concept. I look forward to learning your Draco's story.

    Thanks for writing.
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  • From ANON - Vicky on July 14, 2013
    This story is such an interesting change of pace. I have only encountered a couple of stories that deal with other wizard schools. You're creating a fascinating setting. You have the beginnings of a wonderful mystery and, I hope, a fine romance, too.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on July 14, 2013
    Interesting... He's still cold, aloof and keeping up a mask, but somehow has convinced the people he works with that he's a "tragically misunderstood" person. Hmmm Also interesting that he ended up there the same way as Hermione, but chose to stay. I look forward to more really soon!! HG4eva
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  • From ErisNight on July 13, 2013
    First and foremost! Definitely start a discussion forum! All i can say is that this is an incredibly interesting story with truely unique premises and I want to talk about it haha.

    So... OC Anthony. Care of Magical Creatures teacher. I like it. A LOT. I swear I can almost envision some sexy man with a stetson wrangling horses and getting all sweaty. It's a dream come true, and I can just imagine his deep sexy voice going "Rose" as she passes him by lol.

    Rose is hilarious haha "oh i just revealed my age lol" she's so charmingly dramatic I love it!
    Aw that poor Amelia, I'm glad Rose saved her before Stuart could take advantage of her! I'm kinda finding that i'm liking your OC's. Like as I was reading it, I could envision everything clearly and kinda wished this place existed!

    But i did want to ask, both Lucius and Narcissa got the dementors kiss?? Lucius I understand? I mean I'm willing to wait to learn about Draco and his past. But Narcissa saved the savior of everyone. Did she have more crimes we didn't know about or was that orchestrated by Draco?

    Ah also, i'm really interested on what Transported them both to Texas. I see what you mean about the voice of the characters. Draco's development is going to be interesting! But hopefully Hermiones inqusitive mind will keep her in Texas long enough to figure out what the heck is going on!
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  • From aluraceleste on July 13, 2013
    I like it so far!! It's an interesting idea. Keep it going!
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  • From ANON - Anin on July 13, 2013
    This is great so far! But Lincoln wasn't the first US president...
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 12, 2013
    Love it! So many ideas are often recycled. I like that yours is much more original and is very well written . I can't wait to read more and find out what happens.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on July 12, 2013
    I think you've got a good start and I am intrigued. :-) I look forward to his back story, as (if you're going with canon) he didn't turn to the Light side and has everyone fooled. Hmmm Chance to start over completely or hiding? Plus, what happened to Hermione? Is she in danger? Your readers want to know! I like the new characters, too! Thank you, HG4eva
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  • From ANON - sheedy on July 11, 2013
    Great start. I can't wait to see what you have in mind.
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