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By : pepperdoc

From ANON - brown-eyed-girl on September 10, 2013
I adore this story and I'm very excited to see more of it. It's very well written and the characters are well developed. Not to mention the chemistry and less tame parts thus far have been awesome. :)
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From Eclectic_Pet on September 07, 2013
Just got caught up on the last couple of chapters. This story line is coming along nicely. I am glad that you noted that some sex will be forthcoming. I can't wait to see more Dom/Draco and Sub/Hermoine *wicked laugh*!!!! Just call me a BDSM junkie, what can I say!?!?!?! As always, More...Please!!
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From ANON - Aranel on August 30, 2013
There are only two types of potion masters. Ones that are too smart for their own good and find potions interesting for the possibilities and the challenge. Then the others who are so socially inept that potions becomes the only skill suited for them...which makes me wonder why they would become teachers but hey, we can't all get into independent apothecary. Al is shady...but I think that's just how he is. Some people are just jerks.
Man I am in need of good old Hermione and Draco smexy time. Glad she is still on her lady time, sad that he can't make her climb him like a tree.
Honestly, how long are the Aurors gonna keep her there at the missions place? Has she truly just decided to stay with Draco? Not that it's a bad idea... Just fast.
I miss Harry..
Okay, super sleepy. Can't wait for more! Bai bai.
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From ANON - Aranel on August 26, 2013
THUNDERBIRD!!!!
You have no idea how excited I got to read about a thunderbird! More of him! Yes please! That was so awesome...man, that was cool.
Aww, poor Hermione had to spill the beans about her monthly. All cause Draco is still insecure! Oh but when her flow is over, they shall mate again! Oh yes!
THUNDERBIRD!!!! Now I'm gonna spend all night researching the damned things. Hate it when my interest in cryptozoology gets tickled. I spend hours researching these things and end up sleepy and paranoid. Evil mothman...freaking freshwater sharks...damn you elusive unicorn...I believe in you nessy!!
Great chapter. I'm very entertained! I love primrose, she is a sweetheart. Can't wait for more. I hope the thunderbird will be able to control itself.
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From ANON - Victoria on August 26, 2013
WooHoo! You introduced a new and exciting magical creature who can metamorphose and mate with human females, like the ancient Greek gods. And there is at least one more bad guy to investigate. Such a great story, with new depths in every chapter.
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From ErisNight on August 26, 2013
Interesting, that's the first thing that is on my mind with this chapter. This new OC the thunderbird, whom I'm loving because its a magical creature (like my beloved Veela) seems amazing. The pull of it's magic is sexy and I'm interested in seeing where you take this.
As always your OC's steal the show for me and I'm finding that Luis almost deadly patience is quite awesome. The way he wanted to protect Rose after Draco pissed him off was clearly fierce but he can control it and it sort of makes me want to see him unhinged.
Both of them really, Rose is a bad ass and I feel like the two of them together are freaking perfect.
I don't know how to explain it but this chapter I was just completely intrigued with learning even more about them.

I'm loving this twist you're taking as you complete one plot line and develop the next.

:)

Eris
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From ANON - Victoria on August 24, 2013
Oh, this chapter is great-- it means we're not heading to an ending so soon and will get more of this fantastic story. I'm embarrassed that I didn't think about the fact that Rowle would have been so young when Draco was sent to the school. It makes sense that he's working with someone older. Very intriguing plot and characters. It was ingenious to have Primrose's past be a parallel of Hermione's. I love this story.
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From erdufylla on August 23, 2013
I don't normally write reviews, because, well, I'm a horrible fanfic reader. But you seem to be under the misguided impression that no one is reading your work, or if they are, they aren't enjoying it. And I'd hate for you to hold that belief and continue with that misconception, because what you write is fabulous. There's a lot of fanfic out there that's terrible -- poor or non-existent plot, awful writing, etc., so it's a real pleasure to come across an author who CAN provide a really enjoyable read, like you do. I'm loving this story, and I really hope you'll continue it. I can't wait for the next installment. I just wish there was a way on AFF to get update notices. :)
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From ANON - Aranel on August 22, 2013
No, not a typo. Lol I would really love to slap Draco. It would make me happy. I don't know why but I enjoy smacking guys. I'm special, lol just ignore it. Mmmm yeah, and for them to just take it and then come at me...okay back to the review!
Who are these people!! And what do they want with Hermione and Draco! So much mystery. It's titilating my jimmies.
I'm very excited that Hermione got her period. That is always important to me. Some stories have the character fucking for months and nobody takes a freaking piss. So love your attention to detail. Other people, besides Hermione and Draco exist in your story. They all have lives and a history. They don't revolve around these two smexy people. Love seeing that.
Was very excited to see an update. I have a trick to getting rid of ten year old boys. Start talking about your period or giving birth or a guy you like. They walk away right quick. Love babysitting. Children are so fun.
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From ErisNight on August 22, 2013
Woo Chapter 12

Lol "please put the Tar and Feathers away" definitely how I was feeling about my update after the long while.
But oh nooo! Who attacked Draco? He would have recognized if it was Ron, so I' assuming it wasn't the red head but who knows lol.
Also whats going on with Hermione? Maybe I missed the explanation but was it just because of her monthly that she didnt want to have sex with him again? If you ask me lol girlfriend is tripping! I would have been ALL over that!

Rose is still very observant and she's a good comfort to have around for all the characters so I'm still really enjoying that about her.

Can't wait for the next chapter but dont rush if life is super busy lol:) We all know how that goes!

Eris
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From Trelweny on August 15, 2013
Awesome chapter. Very hot.

One issue: when Draco says towards the beginning,
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From ANON - brioche on August 14, 2013
Oh, I am addicted to this story now! I keep refreshing it on my computer hoping it will be updated and today it was! I am like Eris, I am reading her story (MMIC) and yours at the same time and if you two could update more often I would be a happy girl. I finally registered just because of you two, after years, so you two must be something special. I'm really enjoying the originality of your story and can't wait to see where it goes. Please don't end it too soon!
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From ANON - Victoria on August 14, 2013
Sizzling, steamy, hot chapter. Not what I expected for their first time, but I think Draco wanted to be sure to impress her after hearing about her earlier explorations with "Sir". You asked about continuations of this story. Yes! I'd absolutely love to read more. Heck, you've created a whole wizard school. Why not spin some more stories around it. It's a brilliant setting and you write so well. I'll read anything of yours, no matter what.
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From ErisNight on August 14, 2013
"You're like a goddess in the firelight, how is a guy supposed to compete with that?" Yup that is my favorite line of any fan fiction I've read ever. I LOVED LOVED LOVED all of that and have re-read this chapter thrice now, hence the late review.
I can't even handle this Draco, I was like "Yes Sir" every time he asked a question...

Fuck a plot lol, fuck putting effort into anything else but more of that lol, I NEED more of that!

Lol but no, i love the plot as well, I just love good Dramione pairings!

:} Eris
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From ANON - Aranel on August 13, 2013
Oh your Draco is just delicious! Just wanna smack him. And while I love a random fic with plotless smut, I know this story isn't like that. I'm interested to see where this story will go. I was excited to see your reply. As a Christian, I always find that to be such a sticky topic. Some authors go there and it usually has a bleak ending. Most stear clear of it so I can't blame you for doing so. So much hassle...
Loved Draco and Hermione's insecurities, albeit strangely misplaced and nonsensical it is still adorable. I mean honestly, Draco knows he is a sexy fuck and Hermione...well.. I suppose she could have a bit of insecurity issues. After Ron and Sir(who sounds like yet another hot sexy fuck).
Real life, that whore's a kicker. You'll pull through. Just one day at a time.
Wow...lol should've just typed "insert cheesy inspirational scentence here". Ignore that previous line...
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