Reviews for Ron's War: Second Story in the Bane SagaBy : LadyofSpades |
Hahaha... Hermione can't be more slut if trying!... This is so pathetic!... I stop reading this disaster right now.
Absolutely ridiculous and incoherent... One moment they are depressed, the next behave as 8 y.o. with a sugar high. One moment Hermione is a shy and blushing teenager, the next she is bedding Krum as a professional. One moment the fic is written in first person, the next in third. One moment you show all the Hermione-Krum smut, the next you avoid the Hermione-Ron's... And Molly talking with Hermione about how she is cheating Ron with Krum is totally ridiculous... Honestly, the plot is incoherent, the characters are incoherent, and this whore egocentric Hermione is nauseating.
This is it? The cliche fic of Hermione with SexGodKrum, Draco or whatever, and DumpOldRon fighting as a good lapdog for the "perfect" Hermione? Booooring... After this, no Ron would want this woreHermione.
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