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Reviews for Obsession

By : dainty_morsel
  • From flamingmoth on August 03, 2013
    Please do continue! I like it very much so far.
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  • From ANON - NoxDesires on August 02, 2013
    Wow! There isn't much else to say.Please update sooner rather than later!
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  • From ANON - Missycam on July 29, 2013
    Oh ohhhhh That's promising!
    Update soon please ;-)
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  • From Bkd on July 27, 2013
    Christ, I just wrote this review and it never posted.

    So I'll try and replicate the damn thing.

    I was going on about how great it was that you didn't have this long-winded, overwrought explanation of why Hermione and Snape want each other. Yeah, it's all fine and dandy to explore that side of things, but not all in one go and not at the expense of the Fic's flow - pace - whatever. So in short I like how you dealt with that, and you could explore it later and I wouldn't mind that.

    I liked the lead up to the smut and the actual smut itself - was quite zesty.

    If you still need a Beta, I can do it. I'm not an English Major at Uni, but I'm pretty decent at grammar and all that lark. I have an opinion too, which I think every Beta needs or else what's the point? I just know how frustrating it is to not have one, so if you're desperate I'll take one for the team lol.

    Keen for an update.
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  • From Talented_Mrs_Lupin on July 25, 2013
    I love this story and PLEASE do not finish it there. Update SOON I would love to read more.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on July 25, 2013
    Well that was one hell of a beginning!! I couldn't stop reading. :-) I look forward to your next update! Thank you, HG4eva
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 25, 2013
    Dont end the story here!! Please give us some more!

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  • From ANON - Mary on July 24, 2013
    Excellent opening chapter. Hot and well written. I will be waiting for the updates as you have it planned on 7 chapters. Now I am going to search for more of your work. You are becoming a favorite. Thank you fro sharing.
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  • From ALANRICKMANFAN21 on July 24, 2013
    WOW snape dancing MMMMMMMM the waltz would be better if they were dancing thre tango!!!! MMMMMMMMM

    The band were just beginning to strike up a waltz and Hermione suddenly found herself in the arms of the one Hogwarts professor who still intimidated her..........


    oh and is there more to this story or is that it??
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  • From CryingCinderella on July 24, 2013
    I do rarely review. You desperately need a beta- your tenses are all over the place. :-p But it was an encouraging little piece that does tempt the senses. Pity he didn't make his presence known.
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  • From ANON - Reaperit on July 24, 2013
    Veeeery nice!! Written real well. I'm excited! Update soon :)
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